MG OS || RIPPLES IN A POND || - Complete - 15th April 2015 - Page 4

Originally posted by: taahir004

Phenomenal OS...Maan and Geet met when they were kids in school and they became best friends as young teens they decided to date each other and also have full fun which all teens have .they fun had no limits pure happiness and laughter until Geet suddenly went missing and it continued for a while until at the end Maan finds out that his best friend his lover has leave for good and like he says heaven will be a better place with her laughter

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Hey Jhanvi.

I have edited my original comment. Still I somewhere find Geet selfish. And trust me I said that after assuming/imagining Geet's conditions, her thoughts, her circumstances. But the fact that made me call her selfish was her apperance in Maan's life suddenly and then she would go just the next day. And that she did quite a few times. First time I understood, second time too I understood, but third time I just couldnt help but call her selfish. She just dint knew what impact her sudden disappearances were having on Maan or her family.

I saw you say that you will write an epilogue to this OS. So why dont you give us Geet's pov rather. Cos Im more interested to know what made her comeback and go again and again?

-Sanjana!

Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

I too miss Rose...she was such lovely friend who always think for others...it's so long she left us but ...sigh...

Life is indeed unpredictable n cruel also...

n I really don't know Jhaanvi it's ur User ID here...omg ...

nice to see u here

...

beautiful , painful os

it's written beautifully n the Title

Ripples in a pond so perfectly match

I cried as m too emotional but then think this is reality happen...

Adhuri prem kahani kitna hain...

Keep it Up

Originally posted by: JaasChowdhray

Hi Thank you so much dear. I will give it sooon 😛

Awww Thank you Taahir...you always give such a beautiful comment...I guess I should write sad os often... hain na? 😆

Hi tabby,

yes i am the same jhaanvi tabby. Thank you dear...I will write asap.

Awww Thank you 😊

HI Jhaanvi ..

Originally posted by: JaasChowdhray

Hi Diii

Yes I miss her everyday. there is no single day left I never remembered her. hope she is safe and filled the heaven with her laughter and joy.

Thank you Di. I hope to write more and more OS in future.

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Jhaanvi

very sad and emotional os dear😭

Emotional n amazing OS.maan geet r friends from school. their bond grove stonger in years. they met uexpectedly in collage their happiness seeing each other. their cseness grove from friendship to dating to love. their pub oing what ever they did did it gether. geet is a person who spread happiness to every one around her . but pain suffer alone. the rason is not to see sad on her maan n her parents. Geet masti in banglore. such see is happiness maans life. maan suffered lot as well as geet. but maan has fiends to share n think geet suffered alone. maan can sense something is wrong but not point out in fear to loose geet. buthe lost geet three times. geet when she can't take lonliness came to maan as she love him most. but in fear to see maan breakdown left him. but last maan found her in last day. Its hrriable to know their bin dead n in life support. I went through this phase for my badima. so maan is wAiting t go to his geet. jaanu u r amazing in writing emotional n comody writing. waiting for epiloug.

Thank you for considering my request Jhanvi.

Fabulous story