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KasiKasi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Very emotional & heart touching story

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

superb

very sad

ya you are right that it made us to cry bucket

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Nice one .. Geet had cancer and died leaving Maan all alone

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xolfiya

@xolfiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Oh a heart wrenching tale !!Loved it u wrote it so beautifully n it reaches us perfectly the story of two broken soul!!waiting for epilogue!!

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Phenomenal OS

Maan and Geet met when they were kids in school and they became
best friends as young teens they decided to date each other and also have full fun which all teens have .
they fun had no limits pure happiness and laughter until Geet suddenly went missing and it continued for a while until at the end Maan finds out that his best friend his lover has leave for good and like he says heaven will be a better place with her laughter .

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

heartwrenching os

yes plz update epilogue too

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tabby999

@tabby999

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

hi jhaanvi

emotional update ..

i hope that u r the same jhaanvi whom i met on fb ..

os was too sad it brought t6ears in my eyes ..i had lost three of my loved ones due to cancer..its so painful

here geet lost her life due to this dreadful disease ..maan too late to realised that ..last line was heart wrecking ..i wish u write epilogue too ..

thank u for this os ..

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

RES !
Aj Ronay ka qouta poora hogya 😳

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: JaasChowdhray

Hi Sanjana,

First of all I like your name. I have seen you commenting on other threads. Its a pure joy to read such a long & detailed comment.

Coming to the story, I agree with the point geet being selfish but think from her point of view. She did whatever she thought right and necessary to avoid maan getting hurt by seeing her suffer in
pain day by day. She knew that It will hurt him more than her sickness later. She tried to stay away from each one of those she loved to spare them from heartbreak but circumstances always brought her back to him.</font>

I dont blame u for feeling for maan as this story is from his pov. If I were in geet's position maybe I
would have done the same. for example i am very good at hiding my hurt/pain from others coz I feel its only meant for me. I always will have this soft corner for subtle maan, maybe in my next OS i will try to justify both maan & geet.

Thank you for reading and liking the story dear! I am glad u find my writing style is good enough to read worthy.

Jhaanvi

Hey Jhanvi.

I have edited my original comment. Still I somewhere find Geet selfish. And trust me I said that after assuming/imagining Geet's conditions, her thoughts, her circumstances. But the fact that made me call her selfish was her apperance in Maan's life suddenly and then she would go just the next day. And that she did quite a few times. First time I understood, second time too I understood, but third time I just couldnt help but call her selfish. She just dint knew what impact her sudden disappearances were having on Maan or her family.

I saw you say that you will write an epilogue to this OS. So why dont you give us Geet's pov rather. Cos Im more interested to know what made her comeback and go again and again?

-Sanjana!