L.O.V.E.-A Seven day wonder :Part 5: pg 9: 13/5

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Hello '
I am writing a new story on maneet.
I hope you will enjoy.
Presenting a New story...
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L.O.V.E. A Seven day wonder
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It's a story ..a love story ..
Story of two different person ..
A girl who loves shopping .
A guy who loves office .
Colors and brush are her life.
Buildings are his life .
She likes coffee with lots of cream and sugar .
He also likes coffee but BLACK without sugar.

Rab ne kya Kamal ki Jodi banani chahi hai..
Dekhte hai ..
kya ye dono sath sath chalte hai ki ek dusre se dur bhagte hai..
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If you like it then please press like.

Part 1 page 2
Part 2 page 5
Part 3 PAge 6
Part 4 page 7
Part 5 page 9
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Character sketch

Khurana family

Virendra Khurana
He is owner of khurana Empires.very jovial person. He loves his family. A true family man.
He has made his entire empire from scratch.

Nalini Khurana
She is wife of Virendra Khurana.lovely lady who loves her family. Very supportive wife and very caring mother.

Abhishek khurana
He is Adopted son of Nalini and Virendra. He is
28 yrs old.he loves music. He is Head of vn music company. It is one important branch of KE. For him his family comes first. People apart from his family know him as very arrogant person.

Maan Khurana
He is 25 yrs old.he is Head of khurana construction. You will know more about him in story.

Arnav Khurana
He is 23 yrs old funny and loving person. He loves his freedom way too much.
He works as intern in khurana fashion house.

Aisha Khurana
She is 23 yrs old stubborn girl. She is twin sister of Arnav. She is Working in khurana softech as software engineer while pursuing her masters.

Rawte family

Neel Rawte
He is also a business man. He has his own firm Rawte Industries. He is best friend of Virendra Khurana.

Ragini Rawte
She is wife of Neel Rawte. A loving mother of two children. An artist by heart and profession.

ACP Arjun Rawte
Elder son of Neel and Ragini Rawte. He is in police department.

Geetanjali Rawte
Daughter of Neel and Ragini Rawte. She has inherited some of special and creative quality of her mother.
She has just completed her masters in Fine arts from J J school of Arts.She has just got a job in Creative Agency.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept,
really kamal ki jodi hai ;)
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two totally different people interesting concept
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Maan's pov

As I came out of a cab.I see a wooden gate with carvings. Name plate mentioned the owner of this house.
Neel Rawte and Ragini Rawte.
I knocked on the gate and old man opened the gate. After asking my name he welcomed me inside.
I saw A very beautiful garden of medium size with a swing.a few chairs and table was placed there infront of swing.
Orange,pink and red rose plants with some other beautiful flowers were there.
Neel uncle was seating on chair while enjoying his cup of coffee.
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Geet's pov

First time when I saw him,he was coming out of a cab.he put his luggage down and knocked on the front gate.
I was sitting at window in my room and I saw him knocking front gate. Raju chacha opened the gate. He was looking here and there.and stopped when he saw garden. My dad welcomed him nicely.after all he is the son of his friend.Neel Rawte and Virendra Khurana are best friends since their childhood.he took blessing from them.
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'Hello uncle! ' I greeted him.

'Ohh..Maan! Welcome beta.' Neel uncle said. He was smiling while looking at me.

I entered inside a living room. The place is lovely. Not very huge like Khurana mansion but elegant and homely.I felt the warmth here.

Light grey colored sofa with white stripped black cushion.same grey and white drapes on the floor length glass window.

'how are you? Hum log Tumhara hi wait kar rahe the.' Neel uncle asked me and told me to sit on sofa.
'Uncle I am fine.'I replied him as I followed him.'
'Veer had called me yesterday.tumne kisi ko bhi nahi bataya.sirf tum or veer hi jante ho ki tum wapas aaye ho. '
'ha ye sabke liye surprise hai.papa ne Bataya apko ye muje patatha.I had told him.mein hotel mein ruk jaaunga.waise bhi ek week ki hi to baat hai.Par.. '
Ragini aunty entered the room.and stopped me from speaking further.
'Are thik hi to kiya.. Humare yahan rahne mein kya problem hai tumhe..? Hotel mein kyun rahena.. Waise bhi tum itne Sal se bahar hi to rahete aye ho..'
Aunty called a maid and ordered her,'
Mina.. Pani leke ago or jao arjun bhai ko bulane bhejo kisiko..'

'Nahi par wo aunty aap logo ko meri wajah se taklif..'
I tried to say something but before I could speak more uncle said,
'Kya taklif.. Beta ye Tumhara ghar hi samjo..'

Uncle called a young man,'Vishnu ye maan beta hai..inka Saman inke room mein rakh do..aur haan geet or arjun ko dinner ke liye bulao.'
And then turned towards me and told me,'Maan jao tum fresh ho jao.thak gaye Hoge. Par thodi der mein dinner ke liye aa Jana.ye Vishnu hai..Agar kisi chiz ki jarurat ho bata dena..wo tumhe Tumhara room dikha dega. Waise to Ragini ne sab ready karke rakha hai..par fir bhi..'
' don't worry uncle. Mein aata hun thodi der mein.'
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Enjoy karo or like karo..baki hero Honda ki ad to dekhi hai na..
'duniya jay tel lene..tel lene'...😆😆


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Edited by Anny90 - 10 years ago
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nice start maan came at handa house to stay fos 7 days hope next will be maaneet meeting
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Geet ne choei chori deedar bhi karli😛
Ab saat din me dulhan bhi tho lejana hai... tho pehel humse hi sahi😉

Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi interesting prologue! superb update! well written! Maan arrives at the Handas place! Geet n Maan's dad r fiends! Neel Handa make shim feel at home! update soon! pls post cs! do pm wen u update! thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start.. waiting for next
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Originally posted by: Drashtilove

nice start maan came at handa house to stay fos 7 days hope next will be maaneet meeting

Thanks dear!
Hope! I guess so..😆
Update ke liye wait karna padega ye Janne ke liye.. 😉

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