L.O.V.E.-A Seven day wonder :Part 5: pg 9: 13/5 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: spoorthi28

Geet ne choei chori deedar bhi karli😛

Ab saat din me dulhan bhi tho lejana hai... tho pehel humse hi sahi😉

Waiting for the next!

I am glad you are here...
Chori Chori nahi tha..
Kuchh intentional nahi tha..par fir bhi ek zalak mil gayi..
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Pehle mulakat to ho jane do..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Already? BTW thanks dear.😊
Are yaar do teen din mein next update..
Chalega? 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi interesting prologue! superb update! well written! Maan arrives at the Handas place! Geet n Maan's dad r fiends! Neel Handa make shim feel at home! update soon! pls post cs! do pm wen u update! thanks

Thank you!
Yaar uncle hai..Fir achhe se hi khyal rakhenge na
If you want pm buddy me..I'll sure pm you..
Cs or banner dono sath mein milenge..
Banner nahi hai abhi..so ho jayega tab dono sath post karungi..😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! wonderful cs n wil wait cs of Handas! update soon! waiting 4 next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Teaser
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'geet and painting? ' maan was totally surprised by this new information.

'kyun? Ye hamare ghar mein jitne bhi paintings hai.. Almost all are done by her.'arjun replied him with knowing grin.

Now he realized that painting in his room was also done by her.

'yaar jise homework karne mein man nahi lagta tha aur pura din baatein Karti rehti thi.wo Shanti se beth ke painting banaye?' maan was confused.
...
Gn.
Edited by Anny90 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Prologue , CS And Part 1 Very Interesting

So Geet's dad and Maan's dad are friends
Maan came to Geet's house but he wants to go to a hotel
looking forward to Maan and Geet's first meeting


Teaser

Geet paints and Maan realizes the painting in his guest room are all of Geet's painting

Edited by taahir004 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please update...n so pm wen u do! Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really funny teaser update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

He entered in his room. The room was light green with white designs on the wall.A painting of beautiful flowers hung on another wall. The curtains were also same shade of green with white lace at end.

The desk was at one side of bed. On another side of bed was a cupboard of green and white.

After taking a good look of room,he entered in bathroom. Everything was ready. He put his essentials on counter. After taking a quick bath he was going back to the dining room when he met arjun on stairs.

Arjun : Hey Maan! How are you?

Maan : Hey Juno! I am good. You say. It's been very long this time.

Arjun : Yeah.you are too busy with KF.

Maan : And you are too busy in your job.

Arjun : That's true. I get hardly enough time to stay with family And have nice dinner.
They were at dining table.

Neel : Arjun..where is Geet bete?

Arjun : Dad.. She must be coming. Vishnu has gone to call her for dinner.

Neel : Maan.. I guess you don't have any trouble.

Maan :Yes uncle. I am good here.

They both took seats side by side. The dinning table could accommodate six people at a time. Neel was seating at head. Ragini on his right side and arjun opposite to him.Maan was seating between arjun and Ragini. Two seats on Neel 's left side were empty. One side of room was filled with many canvas paintings. Maan was looking at those paintings in aw.
Maan to arjun: These all are very beautiful, but I can't recognize the painter from his signature.

Arjun : well may be because you have forgotten about your child hood friend.

Maan : my child hood friend?

Arjun : Yes. These all are geet 's drawing.


'geet and painting? ' Maan was totally surprised by this new information.

'kyun? Ye hamare ghar mein jitne bhi paintings hai.. Almost all are done by her.'arjun replied him with knowing grin.

Now he realized that painting in his room was also done by her.

'yaar jise homework karne mein man nahi lagta tha aur pura din baatein Karti rehti thi.wo Shanti se beth ke painting banaye?' maan was confused.

'Hota hai maan bete. Par wo ab tumhari aunty ke jaisi ho gai hai..Bas apne color room mein hoti hai pura time.' Neel provided some informaion.

'Bahot changes ho gaye hai aisa lagta hai',Maan murmured to himself.

Arjun had a huge grin on his face. Bina dekhe ye hal hai..😉






Edited by Anny90 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh so maan knew her yaar I thought it would be their first meeting!


Waiting for the next already

God after such a long time!!

Thanks for being back😃
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago

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