L.O.V.E.-A Seven day wonder :Part 5: pg 9: 13/5 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
So one day down😆
Title change kardeti tho pm ki zarurat nahi padti😉
Cute part!

Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Lovely story
Maan geet ke saath shopping
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi anny
nice updates ..read all the parts ..
maan and geet knew each other ffrom childhood ..
love arjun geet bonding
maan at geets house just to do shopping ..
hope to see then interacting soon..


thanks for updates
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n awesome update! well written! Maan meets Geet after so long! he admires her! Maaneet talk! Maan teases Geet! Arjun n Geet fight! so Maaneet gng shopping! update soon. pls try n give direct link in pm 2 update! thanks
Edited by khwaishfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fantastic Update

Maan is at Geet's home right and he actually thought she would turn out to be a spoiled brad but to his surprise she is going to start a job too and now he has to also take shopping
looking forward to the next update

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Posted: 10 years ago
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maan shocked to hear about her painting eagerly waiting for their first meeting thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely part..maan was mesmerize by geet.geet and arjun pillow fight was lovely..neil have ask maan to bring geet to help in his shopping..pla cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lakshmi has made very nice banner but I am updating from my phone so I am not able to add it now. Once I will get my laptop in working mode I will update it.

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Part 4

At 5 am in morning

The alarm start beeping on its usual time at 5 o clock. Maan's sleep was disturbed by the alarm music. Once he gets up from his bed he can't go back to sleep again. So instead of trying to sleep again he thought of taking a walk in garden and to enjoy the morning atmosphere. So he freshen up and came out of his room.

The calm atmosphere has great effect on his mind and he could clearly think about important matters. He usually didn't get enough time for work out but three or four times in a week were enough to keep him in good shape.

He was walking in lobby when the lights of last room was on.
He was curious now by seeing the lights on this early.
He slowly made his way towards that room with out making any kind of noise, with intension of not disturbing the Person who ever was up early in the morning.
He got to see the very nice but unbelievable sight.

Geet was also one who liked to get up early. She Was also more of early morning bird rather than night owl. She was so immersed in her work that maan was standing there in door for almost fifteen minutes but geet was unaware about it. She was wearing her pjs with a white t-shirt. Her white t-shirt was less of white and more of colors. She was busy painting. She was making some nice landscape on canvas.
After sometime he left the place and went to garden. After a bit of walking and some push ups and some exercise,he went back to his room.

He took bath and got ready for the day. He has to go with geet for shopping. But there was lot of time so he decided to do his work on his laptop. Usually he would made morning coffee for himself at his place. But there it would not look good so he decided to wait till everybody were ready for breakfast.

At 8.30 in morning

Ragini was busy making breakfast for everyone so she shouted from there.but geet could not listen her so she went near stairs and again shouted for her.

'Geet beta ready ho tum? maan Kab se Tumhara wait Kar raha hai.. '

Geet was ready and doing some last minute errands.

'Mom mein bas abhi aayi..5 minutes bas..'
Maan was descending stairs and after greeting Ragini he,asked her,

'Kya hua aunty? Abhi tak ready nai hui? Par wo to Kab ki jag rahi hai..'

Neel and Ragini knew about her daughter's habit but was little shocked when maan told her that.

'Maan tumhe kaise Pata?'

Maan took his seat at dining table after greeting Neel.

'Uncle I get up early every day..Aaj bhi uth gaya tha..I was going down to take a walk in garden and I saw geet in some room doing her work.'

Neel asked him in a teasing voice ,
'Ohh to tumne geet ki recent wali painting bhi dekh li? Usne abhi tak Hume nahi dikhayi hai..'

Geet was coming at dining table after a short prayer at Temple in the house.

'Kisne meri recent painting dekh li papa? '
Ragini replied, 'Maan bete ne...'

Geet was surprised with her mother 's answer and ask him,
'Ap ne Kab Dekha? '
Maan smiled,'Aaj hi.. Morning mein.. It was beautiful BTW.'
They both were busy talking to each other.
'Aap Kab aaye the? Mujhe to Pata hi nahi hai.. '
'Tum Apne kam mein khoyi hui thi..'

Arjun came at table and interrupted their conversation.
'Dekha apane papa.
Mein nahi kaheta.. Iss ko kuchh dhyan nahi hota hai..aur fir ap kahete ko mein over protective ho jaata hun
.par yahin haal hota hai jab bhi ise uski pasand ka kuchh mil jaye
Samjo wo aap ke hath se gai..'

Maan told arjun,'
'Don't worry arjun.. Mein nahi Jane dunga Apne se dur..pakad ke rakhunga...'
She raised her eyebrow at his choice of words..
While others were looking at these two in amusement at the breakfast.

They enjoyed there heavy breakfast and then went outside. Arjun was ready for his office and left to work as soon as they completed their break fast. He gave a hug to his mother and sister and greeted his father and maan on his way to his ready SUV.

Maan and geet took Geet's Car for shopping. They first decided to take his brothers gift. They went in a mall. Geet took him to a men's section in boutique. The boutique has all types of dresses for both men and women. Maan chose some nice traditional wear for his Elder brother Abhi. Then he saw black tux with red tie. He instantly purchased that for his younger brother Arnav. After taking few more for three of them he left to see for aisha and his Bhabhi 's gift. He asked geet to choose because he had not bought anything for them ever and confused with all the things. Geet helped him as he was frustrated and annoyed within few minutes. Geet first tried indo western of dark blue and cream color. Maan was looking at her with out blinking his eyes. Geet blushed a little seeing him in such situation. But then sales girl distributed them by standing there with few more dresses in her hands. He purchased few sarees for his mom and sarees and gowns for his sister aisha and sister in law pragya. When he was busy paying bills geet told him that she was waiting outside the shop. When he came out of shop geet was nowhere to be seen. He was afraid for few minutes and looked for geet. While geet was at jewelry shop that was exactly left to the boutique. But maan was in hurry to search her so missed her by not looking in to the next few shops. When he was looking for her he searched whole lobby area, but then decided to ask the sales person of the boutique who informed him that geet was in jewelry shop left to that boutique.
He angrily marched towards shop with shopping bags in his hands, but when he saw geet seating on a high chair trying few earrings he forgot that he was worried few minutes ago. She looked so beautiful that he would kissed her at the moment.. Ohh maan ye kya soch rahe ho tum? He calmed himself and schooled his features.
He cleared his throat after standing behind geet. Geet was startled at first and looked at him through mirror placed infront of her. She was little bit afraid by looking at his round big eyes.

'Ho gaya siyappa geet! Tu maan ko Bina bataye chali aayi aur ab dekh wo kotna gusse mein lag rahe hai..Geet soch kuch jaldi se warna aaj jaan se jayegi beta.. '

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Thank you for reading.
Happy Independence day!
Enjoy weekend!





Edited by Anny90 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Awwwnnn superb hun.. Lol bechari geet.. Gayi kaam se.. Lovely ff yaar..cont soon

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