L.O.V.E.-A Seven day wonder :Part 5: pg 9: 13/5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Sweet update

Maaneet shopping

Will geet be able to divert maan's mind 😉

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

hi thanks 4 da wonderful update! well written! Maan n Geet r early risers! Geet busy painting! Maan admires her! Maaneet go shopping! Maan cannot find her n is worried! he sees her in the jewellery shop! Maann relieved! he is mesmerised by her! update soon n do pm! n pls incl page no in post!

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tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

hi anny

nice update

maan is fida on geet abhi se ..

geet is unaware of it ..

geet so immersed in paintaing that she didn't noticed maan 's presence there ..

now geet at jewellary shop ..

thanks for update

waiting for next

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

lovely update maan entered his room only to be welcome by a beautiful pic he is shocked to know tat every painting in the house is done by geet who could sit in one place peacefully stays in her room all day and paints this info was unbelievable for maan now he was curious to meet her arjun smirking at maan

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

lovely update maan is staring at geet he cant believe how much she has changed they both felt awkward geet got a job everyone congratulated her maan was surprised as she never wanted to do anything arjun teased her geet chased him making maan smile they have to make wedding prepartions for his bros wedding geet will help him if they both stop fighting

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nadia khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

lovely update maan woke up early he was walking in the garden when he saw lights in geets room saw her working on a painting and was just admiring her work he was waiting for her to come down he told them he saw her latest painting promised he wouldnt let her go though he meant something else but it came out as all together with a diff meaning they went for shopping where geet was trying dresses to show maan who was openly oogling at her making her blush geet went to another shop maan was andrily looking for her but forgot everything when he saw her wearing earing he was getting attractyed to her whereas geet was scared by his angry looks

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Anny90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Part 5

When he entered in show room he was angry by Geet's disappearance. But when he looked at the beauty trying earrings she looked different. He felt a pull towards her. He was unaware of that feeling before that day.😉

He masked his admiration and attraction with his world famous anger.

Geet was looking at him from mirror. She saw different emotions playing on his face,from admiration to anger and when his angry eyes collided with her curious eyes, she averted her eyes and started fidgeting with earring case on glass top.

He felt her nervousness. Old habits die hard. That reminded him old bubbly geet. She was used to do same thing when ever she had done some mistakes.

To avoid discomfort he said by keeping his voice low, beautiful!

She was little bit shocked, what?

The earrings are beautiful! Do you like it? You choose for your self?

She was still in trans, no.. These are for your sister.. These are matching with dresses you bought for her.

Hmm..

That's it? Hmm? Really? I was trying for so long.. Don't you like these?

No, I like it. And with that maan gave her chosen earrings for packing to sales girl.

They both were coming out from mall in her car.

Maan are you not angry?

Geet asked him after some time when maan said nothing to her.

Kis chiz ke liye?

The wall created by time between them were slowly started to crumble.

Without giving any answer to her question he kept driving.

At cross road when the car was stopped, he carefully hold his hand around her wrist and told her, gussa hun par mere liye nahi hun,Maine kisi se vada kiya tha ki mein tumhe kahi Jane nahi dunga isi liye..

Geet's little hope was crushed then. She started liking him unknown to herself. But with his answer the feeling was now hidden somewhere and she felt a little upset. She thought she was stupid to believe that he even found her attractive or beautiful.

Most of the time people don't understand their feelings towards some people about whom they haven't thought ever. They denied to believe, refused to accept, in worst case ran away from person or situation..

But until and unless you put a little effort to understand your self, what you want in your life and that person, his/her feelings and what (s) He wants from life the relationship between two stays complicated.

The same situation is with maan and geet at this moment. They had met before long time ago. Now they were kind of forced to spend time with each other. They had not thought about in that way for each other. So when now in a single day they felt something they were trying to avoid it.

Edited by Anny90 - 10 years ago

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Anny90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

New part is updated. Do read,like and comment.

A/n

Sorry for not sending pm.

I am still writing on my cell and it is very uncomfortable.

And sending pm will not be possible.

Edited by Anny90 - 10 years ago

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

hi thanks 4 updating! pls try n put date n pg no in post so will knw u update dn which page! superb update! well written! Maan mesmerized by her! bt he hides it with his anger! Geet scared! he says the earrings r beautiful bt he meant her! Geet says its 4 his sister nt her! she asks if he is angry! he replies! she is upset! she is falling 4 him! update soon n do pm