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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

she sounds so bitter about life, guess it is related to the fire incident...
who is he? close ones in the past, appearing as strangers now..
he did not expect her to be back, and he said he is happy without her, looks like it is out of hurt to show she does not matter to him anymore or is it him trying to convince himself...because he still did care for her.

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Chapter 2

No matter how much it hurts you can't help but poke at a sore tooth and so it seems with Geet.

she is back it seems to the place of her past hurts?

Some day. When I have nothing to lose and I walk the Earth unafraid, I promise I'll travel the world.

She seems to have found the courage to make her 'someday' into 'today'

The whole past encompassed in those three clicks.

Every chapter of yours seems to me exactly like a click of that camera.

Capturing and exposing one image at a time.

Waiting to see how and what the whole picture will be like.

Everytime I read something you write I just sit there in awe of the words that flow out of your fingers.

You my lady have one hell of a way with words.👏

Edited by Susegad - 10 years ago

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Part 1.
I have read it. But now I don't exactly remember. So I have different respective.

Mystery! And gossip topic of the town...The image she creates is perfect...

Why do I feel she felt pained because he was still there sitting on that seat with her name and she thinks he shouldn't be there...

to next...

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: .Maggie.
res

I love you!

And Me?😭😭

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Susegad

And Me?😭😭

I love you way too much that I dedicate this song to you

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NW-1VaCrbCk[/YOUTUBE]

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Part 2
Hmmm. Was it him who was asking her to promise him to go and pursue her dreams?

And so did she has nothing to lose there that she went?

next...

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

I love you way too much that I dedicate this song to you

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NW-1VaCrbCk[/YOUTUBE]

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Oh God kill me.!!!!

For the first few seconds I thought he was saying she loved me yellow🤣

You know who I am sending this to don't you?

The one who is singing this song right now😆

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kaamchorni

@kaamchorni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

I love you way too much that I dedicate this song to you

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NW-1VaCrbCk[/YOUTUBE]

😲!!!!

When he comes really close to the camera, he is right in my personal space 😳

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Susegad

@Susegad

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Chapter 3

She is sitting in a so called seedy bar drinking club soda.

Looks like she is trying to keep up the pretense of being a bad girl

And his words that he is happy without her reek of 'The dude doth protest too much, methinks'

Okay fine buddy you are happy, but how dare you tell her not come back. 😲

Dude it's a free nation. Or at least I think it is right Zarin?😆😆

I have a love hate relationship with these short updates. They keep my interest piqued, while driving me crazy with frustration and impatience to find out what will happen next.

I have not had this sense of anticipation since I read my Nancy Drews.

Gosh how many millions of years ago was that I wonder😲

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Ubiquitos

@Ubiquitos

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Part 3

I love it man! And I love it in short.
:-D

After all these years hun. I love the pretending game and the replies it produces...
He sent ' no signal' or let us say red signal...hahaha I loved him for it...it sounded like 'Door reh ladki! Mere ko nahin pange mein padna'.

She sounds like a lost girl. Torn between I don't know what. But he is and was there in her mind though it looks like.