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Posted: 10 years ago
This story was driven by impulse. This story was driven by love. This story was driven by you.

Thank you so much for all that you have given me. I have never completed a story before and I could never have imagined that it could make me feel so loved. This story - in all of its forms, with all of its rebirths - happened because of you. I could not have been more blessed to have such beautiful, giving readers.

To Shika, this - and so much more - is for you. To ardentfitzcy, thank you. To me, you can do it.

I have just one request. This story was not intentionally written in short chapters for this purpose but its short chapters allow me to ask you all this without guilt. So much of this story unravels at its end and it is not possible to fully appreciate it without the context or knowledge that you all, after reading this last chapter, now have. I would love it if you could go back and read the story again, knowing what you now know, and see if it brings new meaning to anything. I do not expect compliments or praise; I just want you to see it through my eyes.

I will never forget what this thread and this story has made me feel. Really, thank you.

- Zarin
Edited by kaamchorni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It took her six years to come back and forgive him...
It will take a thousand years to forget him...

How ridiculously self righteously stupid of him to love her to limits to have given his life. He has no right to take it away from her, but in his own twisted way he thought to end her agony.

God!

I guessed that he was no more, I guessed it was him, her husband... but it still hurt.

For the first time, being correct in guessing felt wrong. I would have traded anything for it to be wrong and be something else...

This woman has my heart Z. She truly has. She says her heart is frozen but it isn't. No, despite of him taking his life, despite of people thinking it's her who had murdered him...the man she loved dearly...

Despite of all this, she had come back, she had admitted to herself and him that she had forgiven him. That stupid wretched man and that she loves him.

This story is more than a story. The beauty in each word is marvelous.

Last but not the least one song was playing in my head as I was thinking about these characters...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9ayN39xmsI[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by Veil - 10 years ago
kaamchorni thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
And if anyone was wondering...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan!
I actually don't know what to say!!

Do keep writing!❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
was expecting the unexpected, but never thought it would be such shocking and heart-wrenching end !!
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaamchorni

And if anyone was wondering...



There's some beauty in black and white pictures and she placing this particular picture on his tomb stone makes me want to weep for forever...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am here ! Will comment soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Veil


There's some beauty in black and white pictures and she placing this particular picture on his tomb stone makes me want to weep for forever...



I was wrestling with the idea of posting the photo with the update. This comment tipped the scale.
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 7 - what to right ...maan was dead...not expected this...and she took six years to forgive him...love his this black & white pic...suits to this last part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
The last part had such heart wrenching effect that I could not come up with a comment immediately, so here is the detailed one now..

I had these slight doubts on Maan's sudden appearances and disappearances while reading the previous parts..but you made me believe in his existence...because Geet created his existence around herself holding onto her anger and his guilt..she loved him so much to forget him and believe it otherwise..

Her reactions with Maan are as if he is present there watching her..she was angry with him..he followed her for forgiveness which she was not ready to accept...
Maan gave his life to set her free which she never wanted to be, but she knew he loved and cared for her, and he must have missed her as much as she missed him..

finally she came back to him for a proper goodbye this time, forgiving him and asking for forgiveness...the photo, the most precious one for her which she carried with her all along, placing it on his gravestone was the ultimate expression for this, expression of her love for him..
this is one of the best goodbyes I read so far...

she laughed at it, but it is a grand love story, indeed !

and this story, your writing, it is a brilliant piece of work !!

Thank You.
Waiting for more stories..
Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago

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