Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Lovely tale
Passionately wriiten

Thanks avi for t link 😳

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

this is beautiful...

Maan loves Geet only that is why he said--Shefali means Parijaaat that is unbelievable...because he wanted Geet to be called Parijaat not Shefali...he even stopped calling Shefali...but Geet as usual Jhalli really destroyed everything for him...he must have confessed his feelings to Shefali about Geet being his own Parijaat and may have asked her not to reveal it to Geet...he wanted to reveal his feelings for her himself that is why Shefali never say anything about her and Maan's relation...

please give next part soon...

thanx for pm...

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f.f.f.f

@f.f.f.f

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Beautiful ... 😊
Waiting for next update

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Poooja
A beautiful piece of work... With all the emotions expressed so well!

Love, jealousy, anger, wait,... Everything balanced..

The comparison with the parijat tree made it more intense, passionate; passion I could hardly contain.

The misunderstand of geet was the high point; then the mangeter scene the turning point.

I am waiting to see the next one; pls update pretty soon 😃 as soon as possible for u I mean 😉

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Well narrated, an intense love story..Geet completely misunderstood Maan and he refused to clarify..Finally he asked Geet to be his fiancee...The comparison with Parijaat flower was amazing..Can't wait for the next part..

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Rochelle

@-Roch-

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Wow! this is one of the remarkable stories I've read in this forum! 👏Very well written! I have never read such a story & the difference you have made apart from typical love stories is amazing! An intense love story! You have written it so beautifully! 😳

Please do update it soon! I'm waiting for the 2nd part desperately! 😃 Add me to your PM list!

Thank you Spoorthy for letting me know about this story! 😳

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Wow just wow ...👏

They way u wrote the feelings , is amazing ..

So superb ...

Paarijat , dumb Geet ...he calls her paarijat ..😛

And the last sentences ..

U owe mme a fiance , an engagement 😛

So good ...amazing

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

😲😲😲😲

What was that Nisha?

are you my Nisha or someone else ?

😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Hey relax

I am not doubting your writing ability

I know u write wonderfully

just that the genre was completely different this time

But u did a super great job here as well

right from the intro banner on soul

what a line

👏👏👏👏👏

and then came Tagore

your writing was as intense as his poem

though his poems are sometimes not so easy to understand

but your brilliant writing was even better than his poem for me

as I could easily understand and could feel every emotion

Oh god what do I say about this beautiful piece of writing Nisha

Brilliant yaar

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I am speechless and wordless

I would just request you to take India trips more often

if we get to see this side of yours and get to read such an intense story of love

😳😳😉😉😉😉

Please do post the second shot as soon as possible

and then tighten the binding ties

and give a peaceful blink to the eyes of the beholder

then pack your bags again for India

😃😃😃😃😃😃

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Though the length of the update was pretty nice

But I missed something

Your behind the scene story that is your personal note

like how did u come up with this Tagore poem or some real life story about this Paarijaat tree

and thanks for telling us the meaning of that d word

( saved me from looking up in the dictionary😆😆😆 )

please please pretty please

please update very soon Nisha

🤗

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