Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Lovely tale
Passionately wriiten

Thanks avi for t link 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

this is beautiful...

Maan loves Geet only that is why he said--Shefali means Parijaaat that is unbelievable...because he wanted Geet to be called Parijaat not Shefali...he even stopped calling Shefali...but Geet as usual Jhalli really destroyed everything for him...he must have confessed his feelings to Shefali about Geet being his own Parijaat and may have asked her not to reveal it to Geet...he wanted to reveal his feelings for her himself that is why Shefali never say anything about her and Maan's relation...

please give next part soon...

thanx for pm...

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f.f.f.f

@f.f.f.f

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Beautiful ... 😊
Waiting for next update

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Poooja
A beautiful piece of work... With all the emotions expressed so well!

Love, jealousy, anger, wait,... Everything balanced..

The comparison with the parijat tree made it more intense, passionate; passion I could hardly contain.

The misunderstand of geet was the high point; then the mangeter scene the turning point.

I am waiting to see the next one; pls update pretty soon 😃 as soon as possible for u I mean 😉

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Well narrated, an intense love story..Geet completely misunderstood Maan and he refused to clarify..Finally he asked Geet to be his fiancee...The comparison with Parijaat flower was amazing..Can't wait for the next part..

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Rochelle

@-Roch-

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Wow! this is one of the remarkable stories I've read in this forum! 👏Very well written! I have never read such a story & the difference you have made apart from typical love stories is amazing! An intense love story! You have written it so beautifully! 😳

Please do update it soon! I'm waiting for the 2nd part desperately! 😃 Add me to your PM list!

Thank you Spoorthy for letting me know about this story! 😳