Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016 - Page 59

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Posted: 10 years ago
heyy dear !!
fabulous story it was ...beautifully written ❤️
I don't have any word to explain how much I loved this story ...❤️

after reading the first chapter I was thinking how stupid this geet is ...I mean a blind person also can say that how much maan loves geet and she is his "parijat" ...
but later we got to know about geet's insecurities and pain ...
maan is right geet is always hard on herself ..she always keep her feelings to herself only
her every emotions , pain , love .
maan is a passionate lover ...who is crazily in love with his "parijat" .
in this story maaneet's bond are very special and strong ...no one can understand geet better than maan . he know her every unsaid words ..her every gesture ...though he didn't understand her unsaid love :p I think deep down he knew about his geet feelings but maybe he also wanted her verbal acceptance ...
I love maan in this story ...his possiveness for geet , his passion and desire for geet ...everything I loved .
I loved it how u showed maaneet's Union ...
its divine and passionate ..
the ending was beautiful ..
keep it up dear 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
O ek aur baat bolna toh bhul hi gayi :p
thank u for giving us so many information about Jasmine ...
I also love this flower ..it's smell is lovely ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story...beautiful geet n maan ... Epilogue was so emotional ... Thr daughter is just like geet n maan... Super ... Hoping for more stories like this
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Posted: 9 years ago
SPEACHLESS !!! 😭⭐️⭐️ Maaneet's love for each other was worship in true sense !! 😳 If only such love exists in real world..hayyyeee... Every incident was sooo heart warming and emotional quotient was handled in the most right way possible !!! 👏👏👏 Especially the way you portrayed Mishika made me tear up !!😭⭐️ 👍🏼Such a lovely work.. And i loved how the very first part and epilogue started with the same lines and parted to blend into 2 different situations..it shows how creative you are...⭐️⭐️⭐️ Loved the SS to bits and it will be one among the best MG works that i have read, for me !!! Love you sooo sooo much !! 🤗Please do keep writing on MG !!!! Would love to read a lot more works by you !!😊😊

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