Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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Ann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

this is incredible ...

i'm out of words actually ...

beautiful words n emotions ... i was totally lingered with each n every words in this story ...

excellent work ... it was always her ... for maan ...

pls continue soon ...

Edited by annbell - 10 years ago

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swetha03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

oh god this is so nice...

really geet screwed his proposal...😡

she would have come to know who it was

waiting

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nostalgicmoon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

I can say from the only part i read its One of the heart touching story i ever read,truly fallen in love with your paarijat eagerly waiting for the next part

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

awesome update
maan loves geet but geet thinks he loves shefali her younger sister
beautifully written
update next part soon

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honeygrape

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

u r welcome Purvi 🤗...yes it belongs to the jasmine family...wow u have this tree in your house...so lucky...when we were young we used to go to the temple with my grandmother early in the morning before sunrise...used to pluck these for her puja...that heavenly smell...Nisha's update made me remember all those olden golden days

yeah it has a very special smelll...😊😊 i remember making garlands with them and also for Onam ... Thanku Ratna 😊😊 you brought back some of my memories too 😳😳

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maangeetkhu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Beautiful story.

Geet will be overwhelmed with the amount of love Maan has for her, when she gets to know it.

Eagerly waiting...For Maan's Paarijat. :)

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Mitu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

This os title attract me so I landed here but still have to read this one shot
But banner is so beautiful and I had har shinhar (parijat) tree in my own home garden
Ts so beautiful and aroma around the night is unexplainable ...

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Preeti Menon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

This story is beautiful and passionate. i read it more than twice. I cant belive Geet misunderstood Mann's journal entry and consider Shefali as Paarijat. I thought Geet was the smartest among the girls. But still she could not figure out she is his Paarijat. Shefali mentioned her that Mann stopped calling her full name after getting the real meaning of her name. Instead Mann called her steff only. That kiss was awesome 😛, But Geet is still silly , why cant she read between his lines. I desperately wants to read the second part. Please update soon..

Edited by ChocBrownies - 10 years ago