Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

You know Tagore's poem inspired the Locket right?

Can we get more than 2 parts here?

Please please please?

😃puppy eyes

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Krupa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

geet and maan loves each other but one mu about parijat kept them away.

maan didnt bother to clear and geet go on imposing her understanding on him.

till last line he didnt told her that she is the one his parijat.

he ask her to ask him quetion regarding parijat not shelf but still her tube light is not lightning, when our jully geet will understand in last when our hero will make her understand and writer will wanted to end story update soon

i love the way you write this story beautiful like parijat.

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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Avi the queen of romance... you are now making me blush with all the high praise😛

I can't normally write such intense emotions. I was just missing someone very much, when I wrote this😆

Ab aur likkho bolne se, mujhe permanently yahi rehna padega😆

I am still struggling to find a closure for this story. Not sure how I will do it, but I don't want to drag it too much.

I would be honored if you would share the link.😳

Wow!!The Locket was based on Tagore's poem? I forgot reading that.

Like minds👍🏼

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Susegad
Avi the queen of romance... you are now making me blush with all the high praise😛

I can't normally write such intense emotions. I was just missing someone very much, when I wrote this😆

Ab aur likkho bolne se, mujhe permanently yahi rehna padega😆

I am still struggling to find a closure for this story. Not sure how I will do it, but I don't want to drag it too much.

I would be honored if you would share the link.😳

Wow!!The Locket was based on Tagore's poem? I forgot reading that.

Like minds👍🏼

yeah it was in the you fill up my senses chapter

I really want more

this passion suits you😆

it was penned down perfectly

toe curling types😉

of course Jeej ki yaad satati hai wo clearly obvious hai🤣

not drag drag but more if you can😃

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priya

@priya111111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

maar daala tune nisha. wow beautiful writing. really missed ur writing yaar. ab jaldi aajao wapas.just kidding. enjoy ur holidays. but kya karein tumhare liye aur bhi hai jo kitna miss karthe hai.

thanks yaar u wrote this for dil se. par koi na ab yeha padne ko milrahi hai. such a beautiful emotions u protrayed there are no words to explain. waiting for maan's confession telling about his parijatha

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

such a beautiful piece of writing👏love from starting to ending,maan and geets emotions, boths love and feeling for each other u described it very beautifully and Rabindranath Tagore's song is just cherry one the cake.Parijjat flower is my one of favorite flower too.This story just remind me my old days.I still remember we used to have a parijjat tree in our old house we used to called it shiuili fool and every year during Durga Puja time I used to collect them from our angan and used to go to Puja mandap and purohit used those flowers for Durga Puja.I miss those days of my life very much ❤️.Now back to story I m early waiting to know geets reaction now.will she accept maans proposal or maan confess his feeling before that.waiting for next update soon.😊😊

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

hi nisha

welcome back ...hope u will update ur others stories too ..waiting for them ...

ab back to this one ...

no words to describe how beautifully u have woven the emotions in this story ..

when i read the name "parijaat" i was wondering why it was so ...but as the story moves on got to know who was the actual parijaat for maan ..

geet what to say abt her ..in her ownself she made maan lost precious 5 years of their lives ..years which could have witness their togetherness ..their happiness turned out to be years of desperation ..years of tears and yearning ..

geet in her own assumption made maan someone else lover ..that too shefali ..her been not handa made her do so ..her love for her sister made her kill her own love ..

maan too never took the step to clear her misunderstanding ..now after five years he is back ..

hope this time they can be together ...

thank u for update

desperately waiting for the next part ..please update that one soon ...

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anime_gal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Brilliantly portrayed... Maan and Geet in their younger days ... Geet misunderstanding ... Maan was so much in pain ... Hope everything goes okay ... Forgot to mention ... HAPPY HOLI ..