Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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Susegad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
Im Here!! 😃

Yo Kit Kat . Yum Yum.

Want to take a bite out of you😆

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

marked.
dead tired today sethani ji
kal subah padhke hi comnt de paungi

Edited by kawaii_geet - 10 years ago

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kavya.sravya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

very very beautiful and intense nisha !! don't have words to describe...pl take some time and do keep writing...such wonderful stories...they are not meant to be kept hidden...they are to be penned down...spread their fragrance...heartfelt request dear nisha...!! waiting...eagerly...!!

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

OMG!!that was outstanding...how can someone write so beautifully?? Each & every emotion was written perfectly...

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preeti.1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Amazing part ..I m sure masn was in love with geet not shefali ..but geet mistook it

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dqno1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Died and gone to heaven!!!

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dqno1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

What to say! What to say!

I have become a babble of emotions and words!

Riveting and engrossing writing Nisha

I was holding my breath the entire time

The story of the Parijaat woven with the poetry of Tagore and the hot lava like passion of Maan!

Can we get more deadly that that?😃

I have sorely sorely missed your writing

Am going to re-read😃

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dqno1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

I am posting a share link on Chura Liya if you don't mind.

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Madhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

So beautifully written..I was wondering where and how it will go to the mangetar point...and to reach there he had to wait for five years...

she was introvert that she always gave imp to others and sp to shefali...she knew her feelings for maan but sacrificed for her sister...she was heart broken that day she came to know about her parents were not her boilogical parents and on other side she misread maan feelings for shefali...and she acted foolishly...her sister moved on but neither maan nor geet could move on...

loved the way you woven their love...with pure flower paarijat...Lord Vishnu's fav flower...

now will she agree to his mangetar...?

omg ..what this vid was made of...he put worms, frogs in geet's bag ...and still geet never respond to him...

waiting for next part...

cont soon