Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
am doing a happy dance [:D/]

Nisha ah ha ha ha

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Posted: 10 years ago
😃
Ommgg...lovvly lovvlyyl part...diii you should defo write more n more n more...such an awesome story/...i cant wait to read more n more of it...you can definitly write more than one more part for ths story...
thanx to gudmeet and Avi darling...

oh the intensity of maans eyes and everything he said was sooo sooo good😊

am gonna go back and read once more😃

somehow i feel that he has already cleared everything about his feelings to shefali...i think she knew everything all the while...but guess thats not even relevant here...kyaa points leke baait gayi me bhi...🤢

waise i lovvvd maans idea ... lovvd the way he tricked her into being his fiance 😳😃

"I don't have it written down Geet, it's imprinted on my brain. Delete it from there if you can, coz try as I might I can't seem to wipe it off."

still she dont get it?? 😲 this geet is more jhalli than Avi's ... the guy has love for her written on every action of his...

Geet Handa is neither quite, nor capable. She is a light that lights up everything around her. All her silence does is intensify that light that she hides deep within her. She does not just feel things, she lives and breathes them. The fierceness of her feelings scares the hell out of her and so she pretends not to feel at all."

"She holds even God hostage for her loved ones. I remember clearly Geet, how every idol in the house had been immersed in water during my 12th grade exams and every important exam after that. You bargained with him and you threatened him that there would be no puja, nor any Paarijat flowers until Maan passed with flying colors. You did not pick flowers for one whole month and convinced even Dadi to keep the God's in our house under water, until my exams were over."

"Every writable surface in the house was covered with your precise handwriting and your prayers. My notebooks, my textbooks, The damn banana I was going to eat for lunch during the exam break had a note written on it.

Dear banana please help Maan's body find nourishment to write a wonderful exam.'

"My music list and music taste is outdated by five years, coz you stopped adding your favorites and making playlists for me Geet. Every song you ever heard and liked it you promptly made a copy of it for me. You stopped adding songs and I stopped listening to music."

"Every dessert or dish you liked in a restaurant, you brought an extra of it for me and waited with baited breath for my approval. Not a single new dish has appealed to my palate for these past few years Geet."

"These and a million other things about you, the words quite and capable can't even begin to scratch the surface of the complexities that make you the unique person that you are."

"Will the person you are going to marry know these things about you Geet? Will you do all these things that you did only for me, for him then?

i looovvd these words...

the next lines after ths too...he poured his heart out...he s just short of saying i love you to her...and gal doesnt realise yet...my Good🤔😳
hayee he knows her inside out...

waise one doubt why does she keep hurting herself whenever she is sad??

yeh kaisi precap de diya aapne diii...and when is the next part coming 😳😃

Edited by honeygrape - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Pray that my net co-operates and you will get an update tonight I promise😛



Done... God ji se setting ho gai 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi jaanemann

will read soon and comment

aaj kal mere din bhaag rahe hain

but i will be here very very soon


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Posted: 10 years ago



missing u and hades

but as now i got this... let me read and comment 😉

hades par abhi bhi pehredaari chaloo hain meri😎

Edited by -lakshmi- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-




missing u and hades

but as now i got this... let me read and comment 😉

hades par abhi bhi pehredaari chaloo hain meri😎

Hi Dr. Lakshmi
You can do pehredaari on Hades
Meri nazar to Hades ke papa par hai
😉😉😉😉😉
Badi mushkil se isse bahar aayi thi
aur lo yahan to doctor ne hi addiction ki yaad dila di
😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for your note Nisha
so tonight Nisha will shower her blessings on the Paarijat and will help it to blossom
so there will be one more part of this wonderful story
hey that's a good news not a bad one
😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gudmeet

Thanks for your note Nisha

so tonight Nisha will shower her blessings on the Paarijat and will help it to blossom
so there will be one more part of this wonderful story
hey that's a good news not a bad one
😃


Not tonight Gudmeet. Abhi editing kar rahi hoon. Will post it as soon as editing is done.😃
And yep there will be more part😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
nisha diii...where is the second part?? did u post it?? nahi naa...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

nisha diii...where is the second part?? did u post it?? nahi naa...


Not yet Purvi. I will post it in half an hour

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