Paarijat- A Tale of Desideratum Final & Epilogue 88, Feb 13, 2016

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Vinsh23

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Posted: 10 years ago

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waitingg dear.. plzz update last part plzzz

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gudmeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Waiting eagerly for the next part NIsha

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Susegad

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Originally posted by: gudmeet
Waiting eagerly for the next part NIsha

Yo!! Hopefully tonight or tomorrow😃

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ChandlerBing

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I wrote a lamba chauda comment but it didn't get posted thanks to net fluctuations.

*Mentally murdering someone*

Now coming to the story...

You know what I think of dolts. don't ya?

This story was so different from your original style and i mean the different in a good way. It was intense, and me likes the flavor of this story. Yet there's an underlying feature that's same in this story like your other stories Di and that's symbolism.

Paarijaat...

Now, I can't blabber here lest I kill the entire flavor so let it be so for now.

This subtle symbolism had what made me fall in love with In the eyes of a Beholder at the first part, but let's save it for later, because I can go on and on about that story and people will end up getting sleepy...

Di i will be honest, I started to dislike this Maan a little at the beginning of the story for I am forever taking the female protagonist' side and felt it was rude of him to behave so but he won over me little by little and I mellowed down when I reached the point in the story where as kids she inflicted pain upon her and he caught upon that simple act of digging nails in her flesh to be a characteristic that would be deep rooted. Bravo!

For a man, that was a gift to see through.

And Geet of the story, oh you know my feelings towards her. So I am zipping my lips.

But the part where she jumped in and revealed his secret according to her interpretation made me want to bang my head against a door.

First offence, reading somebody's journal. Second being so open about it, and instead of apologizing, going ahead to share it with somebody.

I like the way the story is going, and I am with this guy, I wouldn't have forgiven if ever somebody dared read my journal which by the way is full of crap anyway. But still...