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Posted: 10 years ago
very confusing teaser
update soon to clear confusion

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: spoorthi28


There is much more to the story
jo ki will be only told when the time comes
but for now main ne maan ko...

It's ok thanks for reading anyway😊

Hey chillax girl..
Main toh ainvayi Keh rahi thi..😉😛
Jo bhi ho I am reading the story..😃
You promised that this is nt going to be a sad end..
So I am ok with anything as long as it is not sad story..😉
Edited by kkmouli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very confusing teaser

update soon to clear confusion


Babaji y are u people getting confused😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

interesting precap! update soon


Thank you! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kkmouli

Hey chillax girl..
Main toh ainvayi Keh rahi thi..😉😛
Jo bhi ho I am reading the story..😃
You promised that this is nt going to be a sad end..
So I am ok with anything as long as it is not sad story..😉


😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi., catching up very late...
She think to confront ..and back to house of confusion..@ at least for her..
see we all having same look as geet...while she asking Maan ..Are u a ghost?..
hope you can imagine ...

giving us precap...made as hooked ...to see how story unfolds..

so update plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey...!!!
just read ur dis story...n thank u babaji atleast dis is not discontinued...😆
to be honest enough i m totally confused...😕
if maan is ghost den how come everyone can see him...😕
i loved d precap...😳😳
please continue it soon...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zornitsa

hi., catching up very late...

She think to confront ..and back to house of confusion..@ at least for her..
see we all having same look as geet...while she asking Maan ..Are u a ghost?..
hope you can imagine ...

giving us precap...made as hooked ...to see how story unfolds..

so update plzzz


oh i thought u pep lost interest😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: muskeeter

hey...!!!

just read ur dis story...n thank u babaji atleast dis is not discontinued...😆
to be honest enough i m totally confused...😕
if maan is ghost den how come everyone can see him...😕
i loved d precap...😳😳
please continue it soon...!!!


will complete every thing dont wory😳

like maan even im bhatakti hui atma😉
so i keep jumping from one concept to other

thank god u found me
warna i was in full plan to run from this too😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part #6


After having a good time at babaji's place she was back to her home a little late than her usual time...


Confusion n fear were clearly seen on her beautiful face which was too clear to ignore... taking a deep breath she remembered all those things that happened with her from the beginning of time ...


I was clear that she wasn't wrong in recognising him coz she was the one who performed all the last rituals of him and as for those comments n his presence in hospital she decided to visit the penthouse now n confirm her thoughts which were taking a strange kind of shape


Though she was a doctor she was a lonely girl first so to get scared wasn't something wrong. ...

Getting into the elevator she was again in two minds what if all this a trap who knows rich people and their issues

with sound of the bell she knew that she was at the door step of Mr.khurana once again... gulping down her fear pressed the door bell


Q k darr k age jeet hai!


A sleepy Nakul greeted her in walked away like he was used to my visits late night or like he was informed my arrival!

Babaji one day if I spot this nakul outside this haunted house tho I'll make sure to drill him with all my phycology knowledge n get into the bottom of this whole hero n his mystery

Shaking all those thoughts she walked into the study where there was still lights on and some kind of old songs playing

Songs at this time maybe that yesh guy is here geet u n your silly fears by the way there are still some scores to settle with this yesh!

Even though all this was giving her some creepy feel but she still managed to push the door to peep in

Looking at the mighty khurana who have successfully been the cause of her disturbed nights cooly typing something on the system humming the song she blanked out!

Y not too much stress to a little brain poor her hai na babaji!

Hearing the noise of a sudden thud he turned to look at her rolling his eyes he kneeled near her lifting her head up slightly he patted on her check slightly making sure he didn't hurt her!!

Wake up sweetheart my nights are colour less with out u!!


She heard some one whisper gently too close to her running hand in her hair!


Umm nights are always colourless dumb head! She mumbled in her sleepy voice... slowly adjusting to the sudden light!


Oh thanks for the info love! Good that u are conscious now let me complete the mail I was sending n then we'll talk... he abruptly got up causing her head to hit the ground with a thud!


Maan Singh Khurana! She was shocked beyond her wits to see him standing before her rubbing her head vigorously thinking if she has lost it or is hallucinating she was about to complain to her babaji when she heard him


Yes Mrs. Khurana!


Stop calling me that! She said getting annoyed


What oh Mrs. Khurana... ok jaan as u wish...


What the hell he was dead right! BABAJI!!


Spare him for a while Misthi. ..


Hay Babaji I can't take it anymore my head is spinning I'm going to faint again...


Love please faint on that couch I don't want you to hurt ur self!!


Huh!!


Shhh don't make noise pari is online. ...


After a sweet brother sister chat to which she played a mute spectator role he closed the system n turned towards her


She was all blank n looking at him like a hypnotised patient


What?? he asked rolling his eyes at her


U ARE A GHOST!


Aahhaa u r so smart jaan! A kiss for perfect guess!!


And he kissed her stealing her from herself

The moment everything else blurred the taking her to the land of unknown pleasure until she stopped her struggle n gave into him

Poor her what else could she do if it was some human she would have fought or kicked or maybe tried to stop him some how but this was some creepy ghost who was extremely handsome and intelligent and rich and smart ...passionate. ...

Hot...

Hmmm Hot was kissing her like this then who on earth would want to stop!

Wow love you are so yummy

Wait ... what!!

With all the strength she pushed him hard n stumbled back with the force

Tears gathered in her eyes she couldn't comprehend what was happening around her any more. ..

hiding her face in her palms she wept silently...

Babaji I don't understand she was the one kissing our hero and praising him in her mind then she starts crying as if she was being forced or something do u think she is normal?

Maan!!

Looking at her accusing eyes His face depicted only pain n more than pain it held helplessness... but it was too much for us to expect her to understand his expression isn't it she barely know him

Why?

Coz u are Mrs. Khu.. oh sorry my wife sweetheart!

Huh!

Oh u don't understand it right see I'll explain... normally in our tradition husband n wife are like 2 body one soul.. in all the happiness and sorrows they are supposed to be together as each other's strength they have complete rights over one other physically too

I'm a bit not sure here in the physical aspect though as in few parts of our country it is still ok to force a women in to intimacy isn't it ridiculous!

Jaan u don't have to worry about it I know we will never have any issues regarding this matter nahi?

He continued winking at me shamelessly making me confused and fume at the same time

Waise ...

Stop!

What?

What are u yapping so much about??

U are such a darling jaan come let's continue where we left i know it u didn't like me stopping right! He said pulling her towards him...Circling his arms around her tiny waist!

Oh my god this going out of control here... Babaji help!

But babaji already left knowing it's better escape

Haww Babaji!!

Misthi don't tempt me like this...

Looking at the position she was in she thought it would be better to distract him

Mr.khurana one question just one please

But love we were... he seemed to be annoyed but quickly changed his expression and plastered a wide grin on his face making him look too much charming

Hayee

Aham aham

Oh .. oh yes... ghosts are supposed to be invisible n scary right!!

Oh I didn't know u have ghosts as friends too please get me introduced too he added sarcastically playing with my hair...

Mr.khurana I'm serious. .. I said pulling my hair from his hands n trying to make as much distance as possible between us

Love did anyone tell u u have beautiful eyes which has ...wait a min omg only me in them!!

Sighing deeply she looked at the creature ahead who was smiling at her putting all his pearly teeth at display

Babaji this going to be too tough I guess !!





To Be Continued. ...



Hay pep
I have something to say as usual😳
see people sending me buddy request in hope to get pms... Im really sorry this isn't going to happen

I update from mobile😛

If someone by mistake sent me a request I feel they want to be friends with me I I start sending hai hello to them if that is not what u were wishing for then please no friend requests

Ab point pe aate hai

If any one wants an update anytime if u feel its been few days since the last chapter then all u have to do is ASK!

Q k I love sleeping more than writing😆

Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago

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