The Tough Nut! ( Completed pg.45 27/3)

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

yaar pep i dont understand y are u pep so good to me🤣

no one asks fo update even u find me fooling around

will update tonight!

gift for being so sweet to me😆

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Krupa

@idunno

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

what to say is that her illusion or truth still not ot and it is confusing hope u remove confusion fast not enjoying story.

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: idunno
what to say is that her illusion or truth still not ot and it is confusing hope u remove confusion fast not enjoying story.

U r not liking it 😆

Thanks for letting me know😛

Waise if u want to read further the next part will be up tonight

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

After having a good time at babaji's place she was back to her home a little late than her usual time...

Confusion n fear were clearly seen on her beautiful face which was too clear to ignore... taking a deep breath she remembered all those things that happened with her from the beginning of time ...

I was clear that she wasn't wrong in recognising him coz she was the one who performed all the last rituals of him and as for those comments n his presence in hospital she decided to visit the penthouse now n confirm her thoughts which were taking a strange kind of shape

Though she was a doctor she was a lonely girl first so to get scared wasn't something wrong. ...

with sound of the bell she was at the door step of Mr.khurana once again... gulping down her fear pressed the door bell

Q k darr k age jeet hai!

A sleepy Nakul greeted her in walked away like he was used to my visits late night or like he was informed my arrival!

Shaking all those thoughts she walked into the study where there was still lights on and some kind of old songs playing

Even though all this was giving her some creepy feel but she still managed to push the door to peep in

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Wake up sweetheart my nights are colour less with out u!!

She heard some one whisper gently too close to her running hand in her hair!

Umm nights are always colourless dumb head! She mumbled in her sleepy voice... slowly adjusting to the sudden light!

Oh thanks for the info love! Good that u are conscious now let me complete the mail I was sending n then we'll talk... he abruptly got up causing her head to hit the ground with a thud!

Maan Singh Khurana! She was shocked beyond her wits to see him standing before her rubbing her head vigorously thinking if she has lost it or is hallucinating she was about to complain to her babaji when she heard him

Yes Mrs. Khurana!

Stop calling me that! She said getting annoyed

What oh Mrs. Khurana... ok jaan as u wish...

What the hell he was dead right! BABAJI!!

Spare him for a while Misthi. ..

Hay Babaji I can't take it anymore my head is spinning I'm going to faint again...

Love please faint on that couch I don't want you to hurt ur self!!

Huh!!

Shhh don't make noise pari is online. ...

After a sweet brother sister chat to which she played a mute spectator role he closed the system n turned towards her

She was all blank n looking at him like a hypnotised patient

What he asked rolling his eyes at her

U ARE A GHOST!

Aahhaa u r so smart jaan! A kiss for perfect guess!!

And he kissed her stealing her from herself

Hay pep

Though this was supposed to be an update but I want to know your reaction first, then will post the complete part!

But jo bhi ho there will not be any changes done inthe story however!! N for all those people who are still confused

AREE YAAR I ALREADY DECLARED THE HERO OF OUR STORY DEAD IN THE INTRO!!

Ab me waiting for the rotten eggs way very eagerly😆

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kkmouli

@kkmouli

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

What the hell is happening here..

You have got not just geet but us also confused..

Is maan seriously dead?! Then you will also be dead soon..😡

By the way whom did she see in the hospital..

If he is dead and according to the way she was welcomed in the Khurana hospital, do they know That she is goin to be the boss after death..

Tum zaroor maar khaogi agar maan ko maar dala toh..😡

What is this, maan is ghost..

Jao main nahi Padne wali aaye ki story..😉

Mere maan ko maar dala..😭😡

Edited by kkmouli - 10 years ago

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: kkmouli
What the hell is happening here..
You have got not just geet but us also confused..
Is maan seriously dead?! Then you will also be dead soon..😡
By the way whom did she see in the hospital..
If he is dead and according to the way she was welcomed in the Khurana hospital, do they know That she is goin to be the boss after death..
Tum zaroor maar khaogi agar maan ko maar dala toh..😡

What is this, maan is ghost..
Jao main nahi Padne wali aaye ki story..😉
Mere maan ko maar dala..😭😡

There is much more to the story

jo ki will be only told when the time comes

but for now main ne maan ko...

It's ok thanks for reading anyway😊

Edited by spoorthi28 - 10 years ago

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

many questions and too much confusion if maan is dead then who was in cabin and lost in crowd and Maan is not dead then who's last rituals geet performed??? how Nakul and others in hospital treats her like they knows her already 🤪

waiting for story to unfold... cont. soon

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD
many questions and too much confusion if maan is dead then who was in cabin and lost in crowd and Maan is not dead then who's last rituals geet performed??? how Nakul and others in hospital treats her like they knows her already 🤪

waiting for story to unfold... cont. soon

Yaar take a deep breath calm ur self

Did u read any of my other works

if no please do u will know one thing which is clear

I don't write complicated stories!

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Wow Just Super Amazing Update

Poor Geet she has no idea if she is hallucinating or is Maan Singh Khurana really a ghost
Geet actually stood there watching Maan and Pari chat online
I thought only Geet can see him and hear him , so does this mean also
Pari can see and hear him and now chat with him too online
hey MSK is one privledge ghost right 😆
Maan address Geet as Mrs Khurana but they did not get married right
or is there still some past that we still have to read
but I like when Geet says not to call her Mrs Khurana and Maan calls her Jaan its like he is almost there in a real
I truly enjoyed this update

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: taahir004
Wow Just Super Amazing Update

Poor Geet she has no idea if she is hallucinating or is Maan Singh Khurana really a ghost
Geet actually stood there watching Maan and Pari chat online
I thought only Geet can see him and hear him , so does this mean also
Pari can see and hear him and now chat with him too online
hey MSK is one privledge ghost right 😆
Maan address Geet as Mrs Khurana but they did not get married right
or is there still some past that we still have to read
but I like when Geet says not to call her Mrs Khurana and Maan calls her Jaan its like he is almost there in a real
I truly enjoyed this update

Thanks yaar I really needed a positive comment at this point!!

Thank you so much!🤗