The Tough Nut! ( Completed pg.45 27/3) - Page 36

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zornitsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

This really unexpected..maan all acting as ghost..

but it was a good turn..

she loved everything of ..destiny / fate..

that was cool...

accepting life as it come...

your comic dialogue super was doing a gr8 job...

and extra spice...

wish you could be going as you planned..and want see that version too...

if you did not give the note..sure..guessing 2 maan will be hard..

and i think..will be more interesting...

confused while reading...and waiting for next..

i was loving that..

sometime come back to read 2 nd time...see /find which something..have I missed...

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chiki143

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Posted: 10 years ago

Different story dear but with an incomplete end I feel... I am not complaining dear but I wanted geet yo take her revenge on maan 😉 . Different take in this topic. I mean we all thought in terms of ghost so this actually is a surprise. U can write another story with maan as ghost nxt time as u said. But at last as u said geet is happy so even absence of revenge is excused 😉 ...jus kidding dear.

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kabslocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

Just started reading this story, this is too interesting.

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