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nice epi

lovely epi..
thank u for pm..

Epi - Glad that you mentioned about telling muskan about being adopted. As expected muskan was sad initially. Only geet was worried the most. Geet will always be there for her as she was the first one who loved geet most. Muskan was not the same as earlier but after knowing about her real parents her love for her mother increased more. Liked the extended family details. Omg...nt-dev had four sons, she craved for daughter. All were happy at the end. Good Ending.

Wonderful updates.

This is the first work of yours that am reading, and I just loved it !! Lovely FF !! I loved each and every character's personality !! The story was intelligently constructed.. It never struck that Muskaan was not Geet's daughter till the last moment of revelation and hints !! I particularly liked Dev a lot, don't know why !! Maybe because he was a harmless flirt , jovial as well as caring and matured !! Loved your writing !! Maaneet rocked !! Gonna read all your other works soon !! Please keep writing on Maaneet!!

Thank you to everyone that's read this story, it was my first and I know it was boring in most parts but you stuck by which shows more of you than of me😉.

Thank you for letting me write however I wanted to, I'd say the experiment paid off even if you think otherwise 😆😆

thanks once again 😃

Originally posted by: Nivedithachand

This is the first work of yours that am reading, and I just loved it !! Lovely FF !! I loved each and every character's personality !! The story was intelligently constructed.. It never struck that Muskaan was not Geet's daughter till the last moment of revelation and hints !! I particularly liked Dev a lot, don't know why !! Maybe because he was a harmless flirt , jovial as well as caring and matured !! Loved your writing !! Maaneet rocked !! Gonna read all your other works soon !! Please keep writing on Maaneet!!

Thank you Niveditha, this is actually my first ever story. I learnt and made a lot of mistakes here but thankfully readers like you accepted it. You're too kind with your words, and I'll be humble enough to accept it so thank you. I don't take words of appreciation nicely lol

I liked Dev too, unfortunately I couldn't build my side characters as much as I wanted but did so as much as I could. Maaneet needed preliminary stage, I'm liked you liked it.

Thank you and look forward to seeing you around.

HI Sophie ..