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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

It is very nice part. Geet met with sameera who is friend of brij. Geet and sameera interacted like twin lost friends whom met after pong time. Is it because they are having same pain. Brij, pari, same era and geet, they four of them enjoying the evening. Sameera was little bit drunk so geet asked her to.stay for night at her place. Waiting for next dear



Thanks a lot dear.Geet and Sameera are going through similar pain so it is easier for them to connect. I am sure you would enjoy the next part.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific interesting update! well written! Geet meets Sam! She is Brij;s friend! Sam n Geet connect! Pari n Geet tease Brij! Geet shares her past with Sam! she stays the night! Sam has al lot on her mind! Geet n Sam talk! update soon



Thanks a lot dear!! I am sure you would enjoy the talk between both the girls.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocBrownies

WoW nice update👏


So Sameera is Brij's friend. He is familiar with Mann also. Sam came with Brij and Geet to Pari's appartment. They had a nice time. She enjoyed her evening with Brij and girls., almost forgetting the pain of divorce. Sam and Brij is staying back because they were not in a condition to drive. Sam and Geet decided to talk to each other. Last line ie sameera's question to Geet scared me. She asked was it easy to break the wedding vows.. what did she mean? Did she ask about divorce or about Cheating ?? Brij told Mann's name more than once , and mentioned that Mann and Sam divorced today. But still Geet did not get its the same Mann, right? Now its seems like Sameera is friends with Geet and Pari. I almost felt like its impossible to imagine Maneet because of Sam Brij and Geet friendship..



Thanks a lot dear!!Sameera is brij's friend and Brij wanted to help her cope with her divorce.I guess what Sameera had in her heart would be revealed in the next update. Well I told it is going to be a slow moving story in terms of Maaneet but Maaneet will start soon.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Excellent Update

Brij inviting Sameera to spend time with him , Geet and Pari and Sameera did feel relaxed in those hours , it truly must be very painful now for her knowing that the man she loved married him but could not save her marriage and now the guilt come in as pain also what if she kept her pregnancy maybe then her marriage would have survived true we people do tend to make daily errors , lifetime mistakes and create unwanted sins but again if a marriage cannot wither through a storm than certainly happy moments will just be a farce .
Pari and Yash loved each other married and lived a happy life only for Yash to lose his life and now Pari feels she had that love she does not have to move on but even she needs to move on in life .
Sameera and Geet decides to talk it be a good step for both
because both their husbands did cheat on them in Geet's case its worse because Dev cheated with Meera and both were Geet's friends so there it was not only Dev cheating but also Meera .
in Sameera's case her husband Maan cheated on a stranger
but there were also other issues in their marriage that was just adding into negative vibes



Thanks a lot dear. That is what life is all about, isn't it? We take certain decisions in haste and that remains our biggest what ifs. Same happened to Sameera. And sharing brings catharsis and helps us handle the pain. So, Geet and Sameera decided to talk and share. You were right that a marriage should be able to sustain the hardships so in a way if Maan and Sameera couldn't sustain it then they are better off separated. I am sure you would enjoy the next part.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: doll.12

Beautifully expressed...true u have put realistic essence to this story.. Their bruises are same but the feeling is different... Geet has been cheated by two important person but maan did cheat for a stranger but but true sameera was also on wrong point... She dis wrong... waiting for next..



Thanks dear!! Yes, Sameera and Geet were both cheated. But then cheating hurts no matter how many times or how many people the pain is there. Sameera had her mistakes too but then that does not make the pain any less. May be finally talking to Geet Sameera would come in terms with it.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

Nice ud

sameera and brij r friend through maan
and now they in pari house all chat'but geet
and sam r chatting like old friends suddenly
met and in their excitement forget they r not alone
geet pari insist to tell how come sam become his friend
and all happy and enjoying and have drank that thy r tipsy
so geet offer them to stay their fr night and after become
alone sam remembering maan she now regretting her
decision od aborting baby and want to talk about her
relation with her husband



Thanks a lot dear!! Sameera had now realized the extent of the weight of her decision. She knew she was wrong but then we do mistakes and we learn from it. That is what life is all about. I am sure you would enjoy their talk.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Alpha01

Small world indeed. Brij has become a friend of Sameeras over the years. I wonder if Geet will realise the Maan they are talking about is the same Maan she spent the night with.

Sameera is in the same condition as Geet but in pain for different reasons. Sameera has asked a very difficult and volatile question.



Small world!! Geet and Sameera could relate as they both had been wronged. I am sure you would enjoy their talk.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Aditiii, No way you did that.


When Brij said he has invited a friend, I had thought of Maan. Maybe cos I was looking for a way of how MG are going to be connected in future or meeting. So thought this is the way we will get MG becoming friends as here Geet is in total different profession too so no Geet working for Maan. But you have surprised me totally.

I could never think you will make Sam and Geet friends. Knowing that Geet is the person with whom Maan had a one night stand with and somewhere she does become the reason of their divorce, I really never thought Geet and Sam would even be friends. Though both are unaware of the connection they are sharing right now. This is simply getting complicated, but in a intriguing way.

I know Sam-Maan's divorce was inevitable but still Geet can also get the blaming for it. After all Sam didn't have anything to stay in this relationship after Maan's infidelity. If Maan hadn't cheated I feel Sam might have at least tried once to keep this marriage from breaking. She would have later let go but not without trying even for once.

Anyway... that are all just my assumption.

Sam became comfortable in Geet n Pari's company and they all had a good evening chatting and knowing about each other.

Geet n Pari teased Brij about Sam and god knows why but I was thinking you will get Brij n Pari in future. 🤣 Okay I should seriously stop with my imaginations now. Since I am getting that this FF is going to be unpredictable.

Brij knew Maan from start and later became Sam's friend. At least my assumption that it was Brij who handled Maan-Sam's divorce case wasnt wrong. 😆

But I am surprised that Geet didnt react on hearing Maan's name from Brij. I mean she did met Maan outside the court and he said he was there for his final divorce hearing. Brij is a lawyer and he took Maan's name twice. Yet Geet didnt catch on all too well obvious coincidences? I would have understood if she hadn't met Maan outside the court and maybe have thought this Maan to be some different.

Sam is now questioning on all what ifs' but are they even worth it? Will those what if give her any satisfaction or give her any answers? All she has now is regret maybe. Now she is questioning and thinking what it would have been had she kept the baby or at least informed Maan before aborting it. After the relationship is broken she is realizing the weight of all her mistakes. Was her career actually worth it to give up on her baby and breaking Maan's trust is something she will know when becomes a successful actress. Once she taste that feeling on being on the top she will get her answers probably. Cos then she will understand if that position and career really deserved her aborting the baby and divorcing her husband whom she loved dearly?

After reading your stories, I have at least understood one thing that you are one writer who I guess believes in making your characters grow. You are one writer who makes sure your characters realize their mistakes, understand it, regret it and even repent. Be it "Silence" Maan and Samaira or "Forever and Always" every character who have done their own share of mistakes but they all learnt from it. So maybe you will do that in this story as well cos every character here is flawed. Including Geet and Maan. So it will be super interesting to see how this story will go and shape.

Again got distracted with my own blabbering... Coming back to the update..

Geet was curious to know about Sam but also knew it's not her place to go and ask people about their personal life.

Sam and Geet both needed friends I know, maybe Sam mostly. And for now keeping aside the future encounters and confrontation once Geet's connection in Maan-Sam's divorce is revealed, I am going to enjoy their new found friendship. Both are going through similar phase and both can and will understand each other better. They might even give shoulder to each other to cry on or simply wipe each other's tears. At this moment I do see them being one of the good friends. No idea about the future though. Cos Geet also knows what Maan has gone through when Sam aborted the baby. It's just that she will now know the other side of the coin. Whom she will understand in future or with whom she will be more close to as a friend, is something I have no idea. So I am already excited about that aspect of this story. It's sounds very intriguing with the way the characters are interlinked.

Sam n Geet are going to have heart to heart talk and I am so looking forward to know how will Geet react on it. How much Sam is going to share about her life and how will Geet react.

Certainly this update has changed the course of this FF and it has become more complicated than it already was. I must add Geet-Sam friendship is something I really hadn't expected at all. It is a total surprise.

And now I dont know what all bakwaas I did in my comment. If something is totally off I am sorry.

-Sanjana!



First of all thank you Sanjana for as usual detailed comments. I love reading your thoughts. Gives me insights and ideas. You know it wasn't pre-planned. In fact as you had predicted I had thought I would make Brij and Maan friends but somehow when I started writing I couldn't. A writer can write only as much as the characters let them.
Coming to your confusion, yes it turned everything more complicated. But as you know I love letting my characters grow, I can only say that don't worry about the future just enjoy with the flow. Geet and Sameera are going through similar pain and yes they can help each other. Maybe they can help each other with their mistakes and regrets.
The interesting thing about what if's is that we don't have a control over it. Only way to get rid of them is to move on. And Sameera is far from being there. I am sure you would enjoy Sameera's journey.
Regarding why Geet couldn't place the connection between Maan and Maan khurana, I feel she would be preoccupied with her own divorce so I felt she won't make that connection just by hearing the name.
Brij and Pari? Never thought that. But let's see what is in store for Brij and Pari?😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hermoso

It was an complicated update aditi . World is small nd see how the destiny brought people together . I was thinking brij frnd might b maan nd vry much surprised to see sameera . But how blooming acqintance or friendship will change the course of life in der life is worth to watch .most intriguing story as of now nd credit goes to u for giving us magnificent piece of writing 👏



Hey dear, yes the story became complicated but don't we all try making our lives complicated.😊 I am sure you would enjoy their journey.Thanks a lot dear for the lovely compliment.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fantesy

nice update ... so sameera is friend of brij and brj invited her for dinner .. sameera and geet both are in pain and they decided to talk about it .. realy interesting



Thanks a lot dear!! They can understand each other better since they both are going through similar pain.😊

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