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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Loved the update

Omg sameera is friends with brij

just a doubt when brij is saying about maan he is using his name didn't geet notice it

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xolfiya

@xolfiya

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#422

I read this story in one go n actually waiting for more !!

I dont know but I kinda hate cheating being in marriage!#

Dev,maan n geet I guess did the same though geet condition was different she came to know about her husband who cheated his wife with her best friend that would be very very painful for geet for sure !! I understand the condition in which geet begged maan to love her but still she was married she shouldn't have done that for me its wrong !! Yes she was betrayed in a worst by her two most closest person n I know she wasn't in right fram of mind but having one night stand isn't a solution !!

Dev on the other hand was like always being jerk n.coward who doesn't have guts to accept it infront of his wife its geet who came to know about them n worst he was sleeping with meera in their own apartment that thing disgust me about him the most Yes! I know iam being judgemental about dev but whatever it is he cheated his wife in a worst way !!

Maan I guess he did wrong by sleeping with geet but somewhat I held geet more responsible for that one night stand !! He was mourning for his unborn child n it was something very painful !! Geet n maan's pain collided n they did the grave mistake I would like to call it !!

Maan knew he did wrong n he cheated sameera thats why he was giving it a second thought to work their marriage even after sameeera aborted their baby (the grave mistake she did) but I like maan that he confessed to sameera about his cheating !!

Saameera on the other hand was being selfish I guess because it is selfishness to kill a part of u n ur love just make sure that her career didnt jeopardize !! Yes I feel bad for her but she was being selfish by killing n unborn child !!

All in all Dev,Maan ,Geet n Sameera all are wrong in some way or other !!

I dont know if Iam making sense but thats what I feel sorrt for this long n ajeeb sa comment😆 But I love ur writing style loved it thanks for the another wonderful piece of writing :)

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Missed maan in this part

Sam and brij became friends he brought her to pari home...Sam geet and pari instantly gelled up with each other...is there something between brij and Sam or they are only friends...I feel brij have some feelings for Sam...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#424

part 9 - duniya gol hai...again they met with diff connection..brij was more acquaintance with sam thru maan. I thought brijj will bring maan only. but it was good that he brought sam alongwith. at least now both can talk freely and clear their preconceptions. they clicked instantly and ready to share their story. but still I am surprised that how came geet & pari not guessed about maan. now sam regretting about her aborting child. she was thinking about what ifs and how her life would have been changed. I liked the way you tuned & twisted the story. eager to know how geet & sam will react when they come to know about each others involvement in their life and eager for how mg going to meet.

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2thless

@2thless

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Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Sorry for the late comments... Was on a vacation for 2 weeks...

Thanks for the pm...

Read both the chapters... simply loved them... the interaction between Dev and Geet... somehow it was lot less heart wrenching and distressing than I thought it would have been... you had Maaneet confronted -- so soon -- I was thinking it would be a while before they meet again...

loved the way Pari addressed maan as " your Maan"... Geet is definitely attracted to him but her inhibitions about her broken relation and a daughter to take care of would stop her from taking the step towards Maan... In the future maan would have to work hard to get her away from such thoughts...

Brij brought Sameera home -- iwas thinking it was Maan when he said about "a friend"... the pouting and the tongue sticking -- a gut feeling - maan saw all of this -- this side of Geet... just guessing...

Sameera and Geet bonded well and so did Pari -- loved the naughty duo trying to put Brij in a spot... Geet found Brij holding back something --- oh.. so Brij_sam do have a story -- either in past or future... 😉 Sameera and Geet are going to spit their hearts out -- "Was it so easy to break wedding vows?" - oh oh -- I hope she is not talking about Maan cheating on her with a 1 nit stand... I know that is the one fact that broke Sam completely... and m wondering if Geet would realize its her Maan that Sam would be talking about and if she does I hope she does not go on a guilt trip thinking she broke them... 😭

lolz -- I think too much...😆

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#426

interesting update... Liked it ...

Thanks for update...

Continue soon...

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creddy

@creddy

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#427

Wow... Never expect yet geet and sameera to meet and become friends ... That is a wonderful twist... Can't imagine when she puts maan and sameera together

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#428

geet and sameera met and instantly clicked

but what will happen when geet realises that she was maan's wife

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aditi

@aditi_2010

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#429

Note

Guys I have some real bad news. My laptop's hard disk got crashed and now I just got back. I have back up but I lost the entire new parts I had written. I will update as soon as I can but please forgive me. I will need another week at least.Sorry guys. I promise to make it worth it.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: aditi_2010
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Guys I have some real bad news. My laptop's hard disk got crashed and now I just got back. I have back up but I lost the entire new parts I had written. I will update as soon as I can but please forgive me. I will need another week at least.Sorry guys. I promise to make it worth it.

hi thanks 4 da note! No need 2 apologize! Will wait! 😊