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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Wonderfully written... To the point conversations and beautifully porryrayed emotions. Felt sorry for Geet a lottyt... And maan and Sam they dnt have time I suppose. Liked the way Sam told ma'am abt their relation. Nice work... Waiting for maaneet nxt meeting...

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

the only rational person here is Sameera though her killing the baby isn't justified but she is the only one who haven't changed and isn't trying too justify her actions either. Looking forward to read more.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

part 3 - so muskan too guessed that something wrong bet her parents..but they posed a happy good family in front of her...imagining how painful it will be when she comes to know that her parents getting separate...

maan was in dilemma and ready to give second chance to their marraige...sam was correct he was doing this just he felt guilty for his wrong doing...but she understood that he did in when he was not in his senses and terrible hurt with loosing his child...but is she forgiving him b'coss he is now guilty...she has no guilt for aborting her child for her career...i think now they were gone far from each other...so both couples were agreed to mutual divorce...

all the best for your exams

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Rashmi234

@Rashmi234

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

very emtional part
feeling bad fr muskaan
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nostalgicmoon

@nostalgicmoon

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Nice update,muskan is understanding her parents so well,and geet's reply to dev was really good,waiting for next part

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Emotinal update ...very wll written
waiting for next..cont soon

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

ch 1

the title makes a show here

fragmented lives

well I did not expect this at all

one night stand definitely leaves a distateful feeling but it seems both are hurting in their life

It would be too judgemental to say much and too soon also

off to read next

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

ripping off the faces behind the characters

boy that was painful

loss of trust on both sides for both couples

Sam knew Maan would not understand her ambition so she made the decision herself

Dev and Meera just happened or so they say

Still whatever the circumstances, what Maan and Geet did was not right either

It may not be the popular thing to say but she has a child

Did she not think of the consequences?

a marriage breaking is never one person's fault completely

there are contributing factors on both sides

right now everything is so bleak

Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago

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anuradha.nandam

@anuradha.nandam

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

bahut achhi concept hai ,...dekhna hai aap kaise lead kartrhe ho ye story ,hai ,.jistarah thumne ,.. sab ka potrait ki ,.. maan geet ,.. dev aur sameera ,.. charectors ,.. beautiful ,.. sab ko apni apni pov ,.. jis tarah apni apni galathionko ,.. safai karna koshish karrahe ,.. ye mujhe achha laga ,.. ye kya justification hai ki thum galathi ki badleme mai bhi ek galat ki tho hissa barabar ,.. ,... maan tho sameera ko sab kuch bathadiya ,.. ye achha laga ,. aur sameera situation ko bahut achhi tarah handle karneki koshish karthi hai ,.. ,..,.. please add me to ur pm list ,.. thank.u.