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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Okay I guess this comment is only going to full of questions n hopefully I will get answers to it in coming updates.

Muskaan is just 5 n she stays at hostel, why? Isnt it way too early? Geet-Dev are residents of Darjeeling right? So why have their daughter in a hostel from such a young age? Or should I ask at what age she was send to hostel? Is it that work commitments has made them decide this? Or were they not ready for a child? Cos frankly speaking I felt Muskaan is just too young to be sent to hostel. Just confused n have so many thoughts running in my mind right now. I felt for Muskaan. Every child deserves to have a normal childhood, healthy environment to stay in n both their parents with them but some unfortunate children has to go through a lot right from their childhood.

I really had tears in my eyes while reading Muskaan's part n at her innocent questions which she asked just after noticing some small differences btw her parents. She so much want both her parents with her n want to spent time with them together. My heart cried for that baby girl.

Both Geet n Dev tried to be a happy family just for Muskaan n had meal together so that she doesnt know anything which could spoil her childhood. A woman has to be strong at every stage. Geet tried holding onto her emotions just for her baby girl. I really couldnt control my tears here.

You know Muskaan reminded me Always n Forever's Geet. I remember I had felt anger at Geet's parents until Maan tried to talk to Geet which made me see things from different pov.


Maan-Sam's part just confused me like anything. I really dint get anything from their conversation.

Maan suddenly felt Sam's doing small just cos he cheated on her n Sam understood why Maan did what he did cos she knows her killing the child made him do that. So in a way both's guilt made others mistakes n misdeeds small, is that what their conversation meant? Cos I really expected Sam to be damn angry at Maan for cheating on her but surprisingly she wasnt angry cos I feel any woman cant forgive her husband for cheating but she dint say a word cos she knows she is at fault too by killing the baby? Maan suddenly wanted to give their marriage a chance cos he felt him cheating somewhat equal Sam's doing? But he was firm on his decision while talking on phone. So what made change his feelings, his guilt? And would Sam have given a chance to this marriage had Maan not confessed about him cheating on her? Btw I really like the fact that he was at least honest with Sam n dint tried to hide his misdoings unlike Dev. Every marriage has problems but people still appreciate if their spouse are honest at least. So I really appreciate Maan's honesty here knowing what he n Geet was wrong too. Just cos their spouses were wrong dint meant they can go n have one night stand. Good to know Maan was guilty of his doings.

So this whole Maan-Sam's conversation went above my head simply cos I couldnt understand their emotions n perspectives. So even here I'm hoping to get answers for it in updates or may be in your reply.

Updates are getting more n more emotional Aditi. I feel for every characters except Dev. All are going through a lot.

-Sanjana!


First of all thank you for such long comment and you pointed out things most readers have missed. In fact you are one of my best critic who always make me realize about the loopholes of my writing. So a big thanks. trust me it always helps me write a better story.
coming to your question about Muskaan. I don't know if you are familiar about the residential schools but most of them ask for a very early admission. My parents tried to get me admission in class three and I was denied in almost every residential school in darjeeling and kurseong because they don't allow admission over class one. And these are some of the best schools in country. Now as to what was the need for Muskaan to be admitted there is a different question and will unfold with the story. It is easier to be biased but when we get to see the other side of the coin we can see that maybe the other person didn't really have a choice. Same here. No parents want to have their child face the problems of a broken family. But sometimes it is the best choice.

About Maan's guilt and giving chance to sameera, it is something complicated. I don't know but have you met a person with a almost perfect character, high principles and ideals not only for show but totally ingrained in them and they follow them religiously. You know what happens when such people make mistakes? they suddenly start forgiving everyone around them giving them second chances simply because they suddenly grasp the reality that everybody can do mistakes and everybody deserves a second chance. it is like they are not able to forgive themselves and suddenly it is easier to forgive others. Maan is such a man of principle and he was not someone to cheat on his wife so suddenly he realizes that sameera can be forgiven to. that doesn't have anything to do with sameera or extent of her misdoings.and that was why sameera didn't agree because once he gets over her guilt he would see things clearly. and about how strong he sounded while on phone... he had loved his wife once, it is not easy to be harsh with her when you are face to face and add a mixture of your own guilt of breaking trust and it is impossible.

about sameera's reaction...more is to come😉

You said you feel for everyone except Dev...but you don't even know his side of story. Maybe you will feel differently once you realize what it is like being in his shoes😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fantesy

awesome update .. so both are taking divorce and are gonna start new life ... feeling realy bad 4 muskaan ..


Divorce is inevitable when there is no trust...I feel bad for Muskaan but then this is the reality for many children out there.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fabulous Updates

It actually feel sick and more betraying when a husband and best friend
is having and affair in Geet's case its worse yes people do mistakes
but I just felt both Dev and Meera had common person attached to them if Dev had an affair with someone else that would be different
yes betrayal is still there and pain but when its a person close to you it become difficult to accept and I think Geet did the right thing by asking
for a mutual divorce which Dev too felt it was needed maybe their
marriage did end before Meera entered .
Sameera I feel she i right and again I feel she is wrong
if she did'nt want to fall pregnant because of her career than she
should have taken up contraceptives but instead she was careless
and killing her unborn child just for a career and ruining her marriage is totally her fault .
Maan feeling guilty for having a one night stand and he tells
Sameer about this but her response is something that make me think if she really loves Maan the way she says because their is
no wife that will actually compare one sin to the other
looking forward now to see what actually happens


I am glad you think so. This is totally different thing for me too. anyway you are right. Your partner betraying you with your best friend is the worst possible thing. About sameera, I would say that don't judge her so quickly. and I never did say that they weren't using contraceptives. Go to a doctor and you would know that no contraceptive is 100 percent full proof. rest you would get some more answers as I update next.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

congrats for new story...

Interesting concept...
Liked it ..
Continue soon...


Thanks a lot dear!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nanor

simply fabulous
loved it


Thanks a lot dear!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chiki143

Wonderfully written... To the point conversations and beautifully porryrayed emotions. Felt sorry for Geet a lottyt... And maan and Sam they dnt have time I suppose. Liked the way Sam told ma'am abt their relation. Nice work... Waiting for maaneet nxt meeting...


Thanks a lot dear!! maan and sam had once wanted same things from life but now they don't. None of them are bad, just their choices differ.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anmirza

the only rational person here is Sameera though her killing the baby isn't justified but she is the only one who haven't changed and isn't trying too justify her actions either. Looking forward to read more.


Some times we all act a bit irrationally don't we? we all have our moments. And we all change no matter who we are in the beginning of a relationship. if our partner don't chnge their perspective I guess that's when the problem begins.😊 I hope you would enjoy the story as it unfolds itself.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 3 - so muskan too guessed that something wrong bet her parents..but they posed a happy good family in front of her...imagining how painful it will be when she comes to know that her parents getting separate...

maan was in dilemma and ready to give second chance to their marraige...sam was correct he was doing this just he felt guilty for his wrong doing...but she understood that he did in when he was not in his senses and terrible hurt with loosing his child...but is she forgiving him b'coss he is now guilty...she has no guilt for aborting her child for her career...i think now they were gone far from each other...so both couples were agreed to mutual divorce...
all the best for your exams


It will really be painful for the little girl but then it is better sometimes to live with the truth than grow up with a lie.About Maan and Sam things are still not over. am sure you would get some answers in this story,
By god's grace my exam went well and am hoping for a good result. thank you for all the support. I have gone totally away and am writing a genre I am not only uncomfortable but I don't have any personal experience since am not married. So i would need more support from all of you readers. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi234

very emtional part
feeling bad fr muskaan
😭


Thanks a lot dear!! Muskaan will have a difficult childhood for sure.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanks dear!!!😊

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