MG SS: The Dark Angel Of Fate **||Part 26 @ Page 14|| 25-April-15** - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful story...
Continue soon n do pm me..
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awesome update
maan is so smart
geet bossing around maan😉
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hi all,
kaise hu sab ..

sorry updating status was thr for a long time ..but i was struggling with flue actually still am but managed to complete it ...so here i am
another good news ...my holidays r extended so ill be here updating for long

enjoy reading 😃

thanks a lot for all your likes n appreciation 🤗


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MG SS : The Dark Angel of Fate ...!!



PART 24


she left leaving him broken ...he knew what had cost her because he had lost him damn memory but hearing it from her hurt like he never knew it will ..ofcourse she is right ..he wasn't thr for her last 13 years n now all of a sudden he can't claim to know everything about her life ...he will have to earn that trust again ..that friendship again ...n then may be ..just may be she will let him help her ..but till then he can't leave her alone to face that handa family ...he won't ..she like it or not she will have to be here ..

sighing maan exhaled sharply before making it to the breakfast table ...

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on the other hand geet went to the bf table aniee wasn't thr nor dadi maa .. she glanced at the head of the family's seat ...n then the table ..the bf wasn't served yet ...whispers of old memories came back ... the Sunday morning in KM ...when Yash use to be thr with them on the bf n all three of them use to create so much noise if the bf got late ...geet glanced back in the kitchen ...now it had a separation door back back then ...thr use to be a small round table of 8 placed in the adjacent room to the kitchen where they use have thr bf ...the grand dinning hall use to open for family dinner or parties only ..n in a flash of a second she was standing in that cozy little kitchen of her maa ..where yash ..maan n geet were banging the table hard ..

khana do ...khana do .maa humien khana do ..

dadi maa laughed seeing the antics of her son ..who would believe it's the owner of a multinational company doing all this with his son n daughter ...

preetie ..khana lao bhae ..

maa ..mera pasta ..

n mere allo k parathe ..

n they all shouted in unison ... aaj Sunday hai ..

khana lao ..khana ..

uff ...bas karo app tum log ...(preetie came out with a spoon in her hand).. pehle khud log mujhe late karwaoge ...aur phir bf k liye chilaoge ...ek aur awaaz nahi ..

maan geet looked at her wide eyes scared with her anger they knew thr maa doesn't get angry easily but once she is they knew better than to disobey her ...but yash smiled n then with an innocent face n said ... abb preetie bachoon ko bhook lagi hai na ..

preetie glared at her dear husband n came forward bending down to his level ..

yash stop it ...waise bhi subha subha aapne hi mujhe late karwaya hai ..😉😳 iss liye chup rahiye ..warna lunch mien karela khane k liye tyaar rahiyega ...(yash looked at his wife shocked while she smiled a him).. waise bhi karela tu apka fav hai na ...😆

umm nahi ...mera matlab hai hujata hai ...kabhi kabhi late bhi hujata hai .. bachoon koi baat nahi ..hum wait kar lenge ..

maan n geet giggled seeing thr dad's scared puppy face ..they assumed thr maa scolded him as well least did they knew about thr sweet little threatening ...😳

geet smiled n all of it vanished just as it had been snatched from her years back ...n she realized the tear that had wetted her face ...she sighed n exhaled sharply ...those moments won't ever come back ..



wiping away the tears off her face she sat down waiting ...while aniee n dadi maa stood at a distance looking at thr gudya completely broken ..

dadi maa ...hum geet ko kaise sambhalenge ...(dadi maa looked away she didn't had her answers even she didn't knew how she is ever going mend what has been spoiled for years).. mien yahan ayi tu mere paas tou aap thay ...bhai thay ...aap logoon ne mujhe sambhal liya ...but geet tou bhai ko bhi apne paas nahi aane de rahi ...kya karenge abb ..

pata nahi bte ...pata nahi sab kaise theek huga ...but bas ek yaqeen hai k huga ...najaane kaise magar abb sab theek hona huga ..babji humare bachoon ko aur takleef nahi de sakte ..

mien geet k paas jaati hoon ..

aniee ..geet se koi sawaal nahi kijeyega bte .. kabhi kabhi khamosh reh kar bhi hum apno ki madad kar paate hain ..geet kuch kahengi nahi aur aap janti hain kahin humare swaal unko aur dukh hi nahi puhancha den ..

ji mien nahi kahongi kuch ..

they went ahead ..n aniee all excited sat opposite to geet ..while dadi maa looked at the empty table n scolded nakul ..

nakul aapko pata hai na maan ko kitna ghussa aata hai wohh table apr aaye aur khana serve na hua ho ..jaldi kijeye maan tyaar hu chuke hain ..

ji ...ji dadi maa bas 2 min ..

maan came n thankfully all servants had managed to serve all in time saving them falling prey to his awful mood ...bf was mostly awckward ... maan didn't knew what he would do ...most expectedly when he'll leave for office geet would dodge aniee n flew away ...but he had called adi early at the office ...he has to kow all about geet today ... when he was lost in his thought aniee excitedly told geet about her plans for the day n geet was as usual quite smiling at her occasionally ..while dadi maa observed maan ..n knew he was stressed ... everyone was having bf when nakul came with 2 hot cups of coffee ..

maan sir aapki coffee ...n geet bitiya yeh aapke liye bhi ..black coffee ..

aniee : geet tu maan bhai se naraaz thi phir bhi black coffee chori nahi..

dadi : kya matlab ..geet ki coffee aur maan se narazgi ka kya connection ..

geet (be4 aniee could say) : kuch nahi dadi maa ..aapko tu pata hai isse baqwaas karne ki adat hai ...(aniee was giggling confusing both maan n dadi while geet sipped the steaming coffee n burned her tongue) .. ahh ..

maan took away the mug from her immediately : tum pagal hu kya ..itni garam coffee koi peeta hai kya ..(geet looked away while he continued to lecture her).. bache ko pata huta hai k kitna garam wohh seh sakta hai ...par tum tu ..

aniee (came to her side) : tu theek hai na ...ziada jala tu nahi ...

geet (looking down holding her tears) : nahi mien theek hoon sweeto ..tension mat le tu ..

maan (noticed her tongue had turned red) : nakul ice lekar aao ..

dadi observed how geet was avoiding maan n maan's temper also didn't gone
unnoticed by her ..but he couldn't understand what must have happened ..

geet : nahi isski zarorat nahi ..//

maan : shut up geet ..

geet looked away knowing thr's no use sayin anything now (st) : maan abb iss zubaan ne itni takleef di aapko ...tu saza tu milni hi thi na issko ...mujhe maaf kar dijeye ...but mien iss waqt aapko apni zindagi k kareeb bhi nahi aane de sakti ..aapka ghussa ...wohh sab bigar dega jo mene 2 saal se sambhaala hai ...shayad ek waqt aayega jab mien khud chal kar apne best friend se sab share kar paongi ...meri galtiyoon par aise hi dant kha kar hu sakta hai sab theek hu jaye ...magar abhi wohh waqt nahi hai ... aur mujhe aapse dor rehna hai ...meri batien aapko dukh puhanchayengi par mere paas aur koi rasta nahi hai ...kyun iss ke elawa koi aur tareqa nahi hai KM se door jaane ka mere paas ... pls apni gudya ko maaf kar dijeye ..🤢

nakul brought the ice n maan asked her to rub it on her tongue geet did it with one n left excusing ...maan sat thr tensed even aniee was standing thr worried when maan stood n hugged her ..

relax wohh theek hai ..

aniee was about to say something but she instead checked his forehead n said shocked ..

bhai aapko kitna tez fever hai ..

dadi got worried n stood up to check him ..

aniee theek keh rahi hai maan ...aaj aap office nahi jayenge ..

nahi aap dono pls tension mat lijeye mene medicine le li hain ..mien theek hoon n mera aaj office jana zarori hai ..so please ..

par bhai itna fever ..

aniee pls ..mujhe jana huga ...nakul driver se bolo car nikale ..

he left leaving the 2 ladies worried ..

dadi ..abb kya Karen ..

kya kahen hum aniee ...maan tu kisi ki sunte hi nahi hai ...aaur aaj tu waise hi itni tension hai kabhi nahi maange ..

geet ko boloon kya ..?? I m sure sirf geet hi maan bhai ko ruk sakti hai ..

nahi pls abhi dekha aapne ..abb who pehle wale rishte nahi hain aniee ..aisa na ho geet kuch karen aur maan unn se hi khafa hujayen ..

dadi maa ..accident k baad maan bhai ka har rishta pehle jaisa hu sakta hai tu yeh kyun nahi ..🤢 kyun geet aur maan bhai k hi rishte mien itni takleef itni dooriyan hain ..

dadi maa smiled with tears looking away ..what she could say to her ...she didn't knew how much maan suffered after his accident every time anything related to geet came in front of him ..he stressed his mind so much to recall it it almost make him loose his senses at times he would faint as well ... it wasn't easy for yash to change it all n not to tell him about her ..but the docters adviced so n he they had to do it for his betterment ..

pata nahi beta ..shayad iss liye k yeh rishta sab se mazboot tha ..ya shayad iss liye k geet maan k dil k sab se kareeb thi ..aur jo rishta jitna mazboot huta hai uske tootne ki choot bhi utni hi dardnaak hoti hai .. bas dua kijeye k inn dono ki takleef jaldi se khatam hujaye take yeh dono ek baar phir apne rishte ko jor payen ...ek naya naam de payen iss bandhan ko ..

after 15 min ..

maan walked down screaming at every servant ..dadi naniee came out ..

dadi : kya baat hai maan bte ...kyun ghussa kar rahe hian aap ..??

ghussa na karon tu kya karoon dadi maa ...iss ghar mien ek cheez bhi jaga par hai ...na mera valet mil raha hai na meri files aur na hi mera mobile ...akhir hua kya hai ...abhi bf par aane se pehle apni saari cheezien mien table pr rakh kr aaya tha ...aura bb kuch bhi nahi hai wahan ..

aise kaise hu sakta hai bhai ...aap dikhiye wahin huga ..jaigi kahan cheezien ..

aniee agar hoti tu mien iss tarha yahan ghussa mien na khara huta ... nakul ..

jee ...jee sir ji ...

kuan gaya tha upar mere room mien ..

abhi ...abhi tu koi bhi nahi ...sab ..sab servants bf ki tyaari mien hi thay ... mien ...mien abhi jakar aapke room mien check karta hoon ..

n he left saving his life from his wrath ..

dekha kisi ko kuch nahi pata tu mera samaan zameen kha gyi ya asmaan nigal gaya ..

everyone was tensed n geet walked in whisteling carrying n half eaten apple in her hand ..n maan somehow suspected her coz she was the only one not around at that time ..

geet ...ek min

talking to me ..??

gi ..idhar aayengi aap ..

han boliye ..kuch aur dant baqi hai kya ..??

geet ...mere room se mera samaan ghayab hai ...tum ne kisi ko lijate huye dekha ..??

kuansa samaan ..??

mera valet files aur mobile sab meri table par rakha tha ...abb wahan kuch nahi hai .,..

arre nahi ...medicine rakhi thi wahan ..

par wohh sab .../// tou yeh tum ne kiya hai ..



geet tum ...//

ouch ..(she bit her tongue wile chewing)... ahh god aniee plss pani laade na ..

Maan : geet yeh sab kiya hai ...kyun kar rahi hu yeh sab ..i am getting late damit ..thr r clients waiting for me ...band karo yeh bachpana ..

Geet (smiled) : lo abb mujhe yahan zabardasti ruk kar aapko lagta hai ..i am gonna let u attend ur so called meeting ...haha ha ...in ur dreams Mr. Khurana ...aaj tou aap office jaane se rahe ...

Maan (glaring her angrily) : geet tum ...

Geet : han mien ...mien kya ...kuch nahi kar sakte ...siwai isske ke upar jaake araam kijeye ..woh kya hai na fever utra nahi hai aapka abhi tak..

Dadi maa looked away hiding her smile ...while maan glared her hard which didn't even got noticed by her she was busy adjusting her bite in her mouth so she won't bit her tongue again ..

Maan : mien bol raha hoon geet ..acha nahi huga ..

Geet : ache tu aap pehle bhi nahi thay ..aur abb .. abb tu bilkul nahi hu ...so pehle khud tou theek hujao ..phir mujhe kuch bolna ...pata chala fever se yahin faint hugaye ..

Maan : tumhain kya lagta hai ...tum mera valet aur mobile rakh logi tu mien office nahi ja sakta ..u watch me now ..

Geet : mien aisa bilkul nahi sochti ...but aapko sochna chahiye tha ..(maan looked at her confused).. yeh hall ka main gate itna heavy banawane se pehle .. abb bina keys ke aap aise open kaise karenge ..?? obviously koi superman tu aap hain nahi ...(maan looked back n saw the gates were closed)..

Maan : u ...nakul ..nakul ..(he came running down almost slipping by the end of stairs).. main door ki keys ...abhi lekar aao ..

Nakul shivered with his high pitch n managed to stamper : wohh ...wohh ..sirrr ...sir jii ...wohh ..

Kya hua ..

Arre arree ...kyun un par itna chila rahe hu ...keys mere paas hain ..aapke baqi ke samaan k saath ...so chill ..aaj tu aap office jane se rahe ..kyun k who kya hai na ..mene aapki saari cars ke tyres ki hawa bhi nikal di hai ..

What ...r u mad ...dimag kharaab hai tumhara ..

Like I said mr. Khurana ...mujhe yahan rokne ki kimat tu deni hi thi aapko ..😛 enjoy resting the full day ...abhi k liye tu aap bas upar jaa sakte hain ..aur jo jhot aapne dadi maa ko kaha na ..medicine lene ka ...wohh sach mien badal dijeye ..medicine kha kar ..

Aniee came holding her giggle so hard ..n offered her water but she said with a smile : arre ek kaam kar yeh na apne maan bhai ko de ...medicine jjo khani hai inko ..

...

Geet went away eating her apple ..while maan stood cursing her ..he exhaled sharply ..running up to his room ..thr was no way he could make it to office .. if hse has actually punctured tyres of all cars then thr is no need in jumping out from some window ..he sighed pushing his hairs in frustration that girl is completely mad ..he took off his tie threw it on the bed ...he was literally shaking with fury ...



God ..i wanna kill her ..
Damn that girl ..

He was still trying to figure out what he could do now ..he get that girl walk over him n order him around ..damn her ..n just then he was cursing geet he saw aniee entering in his room with a glass of water

Bhai yeh ...

Aniee please beta abhi jao yahan se ..i m too pissed to talk right now ..

Mien tu sirf aapko yeh kehne aayi thi k medicine kha lijeye ..

Aniee mien theek hoon ...

Bhai plss mere liye ..3 tablets khane se aapka kya jayega ..

Aniee u know I hate those medicine ..

Yes but u love me ..n so u'll have them ..(before he could argue further she went ahead n brought his medicine n forwarded it to him in her hand).. please bhai ..

Maan huffed in defeat ..guess that girl's stubbornness is transferring in to his sweet sister .. but he couldn't up set aniee in her short trip ..she is here for 2 weeks only n he could manage eating those tablets for her sake even if he felt sick to his stomach seeing them ..

He had them n aniee smiled at him ..

Great chalo abb aap rest karo ill go have some fun with geet ..😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet


hi all,
kaise hu sab ..

sorry updating status was thr for a long time ..but i was struggling with flue actually still am but managed to complete it ...so here i am
another good news ...my holidays r extended so ill be here updating for long

enjoy reading 😃

thanks a lot for all your likes n appreciation 🤗


luv ya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb part
geet punishing her tongue for speaking bitter words
maan caring for her
he is trapped by geet
she closed the gates hide the keys n his files wallet n ph too

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Nice update maan had fever so geet stopped maan n he is so angry pre look lovely thnx 4 update
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It's awesome. I loved it. Geet Is ignoring maan as she wants to be out from km . she doesn't want to share her pain with maan at least not now. She is trying to make maan angry and getting succeed too. But what she doesn't know is that maan will never allow her to go now. I hope they get their side of happiness. Waiting for next dear
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hi thanks 4 da pm n splendid update! Maan super angry! Geet has taken everything away as he is sick! update soon! Well written
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Awesome part
maan was unwell so geet hided his stuffs
waiting for nxt part

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