MG SS: The Dark Angel Of Fate **||Part 26 @ Page 14|| 25-April-15** - Page 6

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hi all,
update on next page ...😉
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MG SS :
The Dark Angel of Fate ...!!



PART 25

Aniee u know I hate those medicine ..

Yes but u love me ..n so u'll have them ..(before he could argue further she went ahead n brought his medicine n forwarded it to him in her hand).. please bhai ..

Maan huffed in defeat ..guess that girl's stubbornness is transferring in to his sweet sister .. but he couldn't up set aniee in her short trip ..she is here for 2 weeks only n he could manage eating those tablets for her sake even if he felt sick to his stomach seeing them ..

He had them n aniee smiled at him ..

Great chalo abb aap rest karo ill go have some fun with geet ..

Umm ..aniee listen ..umm wohh (aniee wondered what it must be to cause her bhai stamper) ..mien wohh ..keh raha tha k ...geet ..umm ...geet ki chot is that fine ..mujhe mauqa hi nahi mila usko pouchne ka ..

Aniee smiled at his concern he still cared for gudya no matter what ..

Wohh theek hai ..walking around just fit n fine ..thora pain tha usko but she had her pain killer ..its fine now ..

Maan sighed in relief ..n smiled at her ..aniee left n maan heared her giggling outside curious he went to his room's door step to see whts happening ..n saw aniee n geet giving high 5 to each other ..

See I told u ..maan won't ever scold u no matter what ..

Uff ..mien tu darr hi gayi thi bro ko itna ghussa dekh kar ..but he had his medicine ...pata hai I should have asked him last night only ..but mujhe dhyaan hi nahi aaya k wohh tu medicine lete hi nahi hai ...thank god tujhe yaad tha n u checked on his medicine ..

Geet smiled n then said rather sadly ..

Being his old crime partner is an additional advantage u see ... I always use to be with him when he use to throw out his medicine in childhood ..wohh alag baat hai he never use to let me do that ..the kharoos unjust khurana he is ...

Aniee laughed n the both girls went ahead with geet taunting maan sharing thr childhood memories with her while maan smiled sadly not actually getting if geet really did hated him n held him responsible for her sorrows then y is she being nyc to him secrectly ..its beyond him to understand that girl ...sighing at his confused n suddenly messed up life he sat on his bed n rested his head on the best post ...lack sleep from last night n the emotional exhaustion took a toll on him now ..n he closed his eyes to gather himself ..rather he never opened his eyes falling into deep sleep under the effects of medicines ..

The day went well for geet for once she didn't had to hurt maan to keep him away from her ..n next she was glad to share her memories ..her happy times with aniee ...she was too small to remember anything but ever since preetie left them she made sure aniee know all about her parents her big brother ...her home back in india somewhere it was her way of rememboring her life .. she was too small herself when preetie died may be she would have also forgotten everything related to india but she held onto those memories ..n kept telling aniee about them ...in a way wanting to remember it all clear n forever ..n she did ...!! she do remember every bit of her time here back then .. n aniee was more than excited wanting to know it all ...they laughed roamed around ..geet made her see the secret hide outs of thr ..except one !!

By the time they were called for lunch she expected a angry maan glaring him hard at the table with a red face flaring ears but infact he wasn't thr at all .. dadi maa was busy instructing nakul while aniee got a call from her friend ..geet looked around for any sign of maan but he wasn't anywhere to be seen .. it worried her ..she knew the medicines could be seductive so must have fell asleep but its been hours he should have been up by now ...making an excuse she went up just to make sure he is still in the house n not already gone to office ...

Mujhe dhyaan rakhna chahiye tha ..he is such a smart ass ..god babaji yeh insaan kuch samajh kyun nahi sakta ..fever mien bhi office jana zarori hai kya .. aur kuch problem hugayi tu ..stupid idiot ..workaholic khurana ..😛 damn him ..please babaji sab theek hu ..

Scared ..shivering she managed to open his room'd door ..thanking her fav babaji she entered in on her tip toes n saw him sleeping soundly though in a weird position ..a smile adorned her face looking at him n she stood thr admiring the calmness on his face ..very carefully she came forward n bent down on her knees by his bed side n looked at him with glistening eyes n a happy smile ..this was her only chance at having a glance of him to her hearts content ..to be able to look at him so closely ...in all those 11 years in London she never saw a single picture of him ..though thr were articles about him in the news paper ..amy ridz aniee prem bhai arjun every single person wanted n tried thr best to make her see him but she never did ..initially she was Pretending to be angry at him n then she saw him at Yash's death when he came to take them ..no he came to take aniee with him ..🤢 she wanted to go with him ..see her bade papa for one last time but looking at him so lost n depressed she couldn't disclose all the past on him then ..she couldn't burden him anymore then he was already n she kept mum ..maan came n took aniee with him never even recognizing her presence in the room ...

n then she met him ..at aniee's b'day he was thr in the park ..he looked different very mature ..he had a slight beard now ..he must not have shaved for days back then ..he didn't knew her n obviously didn't recognized her ..even she didn't at first but his hand writing was familiar n those eyes were more than familiar ..his voice n bade papa's wrist watch on his hand was enough for her to recognize him ..but he didn't recognized her back then ..she was hurt looking at those confused eyes staring at her like a stranger he was standing thr in the park ..n she even after recognizing him couldn't walk upto him ..that was the first time she ever looked into his eyes n within second looked away scared he might read her eyes ..she wanted to probably run into his arm fight with him ..beat him ..cage him forever but she sat thr as if she didn't knew him for a second sighed n gathered herself ..n read the page tht had came towards her through wind ..clearly he was depressed ..he writes only when he is depressed ..when he can't say something to anyone ..but then armaan called her to get thr ball n she stood up to get it ..n thr convo started .. n she knew something is terribly wrong back home ..but his words trigered her wrong side ..she may be 15 back then but she was much more mature n him being here when KC was in a bad shape wasn't something she could approve or appreciate ..no matter what ..although later she did got to know about his breakup with sameera through Rajendre Uncle ..that day from his GUDYA she became his ANGEL ..a smile adorned her face remembering it ..a foolish smile that always comes to her face remembering that encounter with this stupid person ..n then a tear escaped from her eyes .. even in that visit she couldn't meet him to tell him about herself n thr oh so complicated past ..n after that she decided she would tell him all of it once she finishes her graduation n she would have her best friend back in her life ..things would be normal ..

but at the age of 16 when her mami (technically maan's maami) got to know of her calss mate proposing her told geet about maan n her alliance being fixed ..she didn't knew what stopped her after that ..she was too confused about it n never thought about it much or we should say pretended not to thought about it much ..she wasn't in the age to either understand or except it .. but maan's success the praises she read in the articles omitting the pictures ofcourse made her so proud of him ..n then don't knw how n when it all become much more ... infact so much more ...she had started seeing thr future together ..she remembered fasting for him at karva chauth secretly 😳 god only knows how she managed that whole day ..but armaan caught her breaking her fast the traditional way ..but with an old pic of thr childhood n he got to know about her crush on him ..geet was slowly falling for an unknown man who was once her best friend but now he was her dream man ..😳😳 the person she wanted to spend her whole life with ..who probably had a bad temper than anyone else in the world ..who was probably the most arrogant man on earth ..who was probably even more difficult to handle now but despite everything she heard abt him she wanted to be with him ..but the irony of life ...today she is the one who is making the only man she ever wished to be with walk away from her ..give up on her .. leave her !!



Her brain was yelling to stand up n leave but she couldn't resist the urge to gently caress his face ..just the tip of her fingers tracing from his forehead to his perfect jaw line so carefully scared to get caught n the abrubtly stood up the tears couldn't stop n she didn't wanted to wake him up with her sob n hiccups n she started moving out when maan woke up n saw her walking away n called her ..

Geet ...😲

She froze at her place dead scared to face him ..what would she say to him ..how would she answer his question what she was doing over here ,...in his room ..what the hell was she even thinking coming in here ...damn her ..!! lost in her worries she stood thr wiping her face frantically wiping the tears away trying to look normal n thinking of all the possible answers to his question but he stunned her with his words n left her speechless ...of the all the thing ..he asked her ..

Tumhari chot kaisi hai ..

Geet turned to him confused ..almost shocked while he was trying to get up his neck hurt by sleeping in a weird position by the headpost so as his waist but he stood up infront of her kind of not getting the confusion n shock of her face ..he didn't asked something wrong ..or did he ..?? while she looked down n every where else then help trying to over come her shock n come up with something bitter n then the plan stricked her ..

Geet I m asking about ur leg ..is it fine ...??

Umm ..yup mien tu bilkul theek hoon aur aapko ghar par rok kart u aur bhi khush hoon ..dekh liya na mujhe zabardasti yahan rukne ka nateeja ..

Maan smirked ..ek minute tumhain lagta hai mien office abhi tak tumhare childish obstacles ki waja se nahi jaa paya ..n he chuckled rather amused ..

Childish or not childish Mr.Khurana but trust me aaj tu aap office nahi jaa payenge ..

Geet tum mujhe ruk nahi sakti ..

Uhh ..wohh tu dekh liya mene ..(n smiled at him mockingly) .. u r still here locked up in ur own house deprived of ur car valet phone n atm ...

Geet mien jab chahoon abhi bhi iss ghar se bahar jaa sakta hoon ..

(Geet smirked at him) ..u know what maan ..(n then with her hand gestured him to bend closer n whispered in his ears).. I.Dont.Think.So ...😛

Maan glared at her hard ..with a warning in his eyes ..

Challenge kar rhi ho mujhe ...??

Geet smirked with a dare in her hazel almonds ..



Mien aaj tak nahi haara geet ...

Geet gave him a smile as if mocking him n his confidence ..

Aisa aapko lagta hai ...

Maan glared at her hard ..his ego was so hurt ..the blood rushing to his eyes n the over confidence of geet was making him irrational ...

Agar mien chala gaya yahan se bahar tu ..??

Geet smiled rather amused making him angry with her confidence ..n then she stared at him hard ..

Jaa hi nahi sakte ...

Maan stepped forward almost entered her personal space intimidating her ..

U watch me now girl ..maan singh khurana ..//

aaj tak kisi se nahi hara ...geet completed his sentence with a smirk playing at her face irking maan ..😛 n turned her back to him ...

yeh hi kehne wale thay na aap ...I know ..

she turned to him n looked at his eyes straight ...challenging him ..knowing his mind ..n reading his face she knew a little more effort n he would do exactly as she wants ..

I know maan ke aap aaj tak kisi se nahi hare ..but do u know y ..(maan had an urge of asking her but controlled looking at her face having that irking smile ..he looked away while she continued moving in a circle around him).. coz aaj tak aap kabhi kisi aise insaan se nahi lare jo aapko aap se bhi ziada janta hai ...but I ...I know u ..i know ur heart n mind ...(geet was looking straight into his eyes standing in front of him ..she meant every word she said coz truly she knew him better than he knew himself n for a moment maan found himself lost in her captivating hazel brown eyes n thr depth ..n just as her smirk came back his trance broke n he sighed trying to control his temper while geet continued to move in a circle around him) ..mujhe pata hai k aap iss waqt mujh par zor se chillana chahte hain ..u want to shout at me so loud but nahi kar sakte ..aniee sunlegi na ..mujhe indaza hai k iss waqt aapko meri smile kitna irritate kar rhi hai ..karni bhi chahiye after all ive managed to lock u down in ur own damn house ...that huge na ..(n she chukled while maan clenched his fist to control his temper).. itna ghussa sehat k liye acha nahi hai .. iss liye aap yahin rahiye ..aaraam kijeye kyun ke office tu mien aapko jane nahi dungi ...

Maan stopped her n held her elbow rather harshly ..n glared into her eyes..

Tu phir yeh wada raha geet ...tumhari ankhoon ke samne iss ghar se bahar jaonga aur tum mujhe rok nahi paogi ...

For a second geet was starled with the intensity of his voice n the anger in his eyes ..but she didn't showed it on her face ,...the flash of fright disappeared from her face just as he left her hand jerking her slightly away .. n she smiled at him very sweetly ..

I'd like to see that Mr.Maan.Singh.Khurana ...

N she left the room chuckling ..while maan grabbed the jar from the coffee table n smashed it hard on the floor ..🤢

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pheww done ..hope u all liked it 😳
read the note below ..😳

PRECAP :- SOMEONE IS BACK IN DELHI AFTER YEARS ..😳😉

waiting for ur reviews n likes

luv ya
sobia

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 10 years ago
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NOTE

hi all,
hope u enjoyed the above update ..n ill enjoy ur reviews but later

as some of u know my university has started n from now onn updates won't be regular .. ill try n type something but no promises made ..n might be possible i won't send pms as well so please if u want to read my stories then do keep a check on Deepa di's Daily FF Update thread ill be posting the links thr ..

rest enjoy reading keep loving maaneet n smile often 😃

thanks to all u lovely people for liking n appreciating the last update ..


luv ya
sobia


Edited by sobia4maaneet - 10 years ago
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nice update
waiting for next update.
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dear

😃 awesome update ...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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It was a lovely update waiting for the next one.
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It's amazing sobia. Geet claimed that she knows maan better than maan himself and made him eat madicines by Annie. Onside geet is worried for maan and other side she delebrately hurting maan as she wants maan make her out from km. As she said she did and made maan very angry. But I don't think so that maan would ever do which geet wants. I am still waiting to know the reason of geet rude behaviour. I mean why is she hiding truth from maan. Waiting for next dear
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wonderful part yaar..soo much of pain inside geet..hope maan reduce his gussa and try to find the importance of geet in his life..in past,current and future..interesting precap..pls cont soon..
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Awesome Update

Geet challenging Maan that he will be able to leave his house and go to office

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Superb part
geet on side cares for maan and on the other side she is hurting him
waiting for nxt part

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