MG SS: The Dark Angel Of Fate **||Part 26 @ Page 14|| 25-April-15** - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god...so emional n painful update sobi..Geet back in KM..
Reliving all those memories again..
Even Maan decided to accompany her so tht she will nt be in touble though he knew he 'll hv to suffer frm those attacks bcoz of all those images..
Annie called Armaan.
Let's see wht happens nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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MG SS : The Dark Angel Of Fate ...!!



PART 23


In geet's room now ..she was lying in her bed unconscious while maan was inquiring the docter worried sick for her ...having her faint in his arms was the most fearful moment of last 24 hours ..

Maan : dr. kuch problem tou nahi hugi na ..i mean hum geet ko hospital shift kar sakte hain ...if its ...I mean ...yeh ..

Dr. : its okie maan ...relax please ...gudya theek hai bas stress ki waja se behosh hugayi hai ...mene injection lagaya hai ..abb wohh subha se pehle nahi jagegi ...don't worry sab theek hai .. n I advice u k tum bhi thora araam karo ..ur fever is getting worse ..

Maan : uncle mien theek hoon ..i just hope geet theek hujaye subha tak ..

Dr.: don't worry injection is a high dose uska foot subha tak bilkul theek hujayega ...waise bhi it wasn't a big injury who tu bas she strained herself ..mien chalta hoon ..call me if u need ..okie

Maan walked back to geet's room after dropping dr to the gate n sat by her side ... he sighed looking at her face ..thr was so much innocence no one would believe this girl has been through so much .. even he didn't a few days back .. she holds so much in her its so difficult to understand her .. tonight as well ..Geet won't stop pleading him n then all of a sudden she fainted ...he was so damn worried n didn't knew what to do ...n then maan carried her back to her room n made call to Dr. Sharma ...

Maan caressed her face n removed the lone strand falling over her eyes n moved after setting the quilt on her properly ...



******^^^^******

Back in his room maan stood by the window looking at the dark sky ...he remembered the first time he saw geet in Mumbai ..



he now know what was it in her eyes that held him captivated ...that pain he could relate to wasn't his brain messing with him ..but they did shared a bond ...a bond that wasn't an outcome of love or friendship but of pain ...they shared the same of loosing thr parents ...thr family ...pain to have lost thr world ...pain to have been forced to live a life they never wanted ..pain to have lost a companion that understood them ...pain to have lost thr identity ..pain to have lost everything that was dear to them ...pain that was mutual n so even if the whole world couldn't maan could see it in her eyes ...even if she managed to deceive the world with her attitude n smile ..he could understand how broken n scared she actually was ...😭

But tonight he also got to know a new side of himself ...a side that knew how to share ..a person how knew to say things out ...a person that could share his pain ...he never knew what made him say all he did but it wasn't as difficult as it had been ...may be geet had something in her ..😳 something that made the MSK open up to her about something he never confronted even himself leave the world ...she indeed is special ..

He turned to the picture of his parents on the wall ..n caressed it with utmost love ..

Maan : mom dad ...pata nahi kyun but aaj ...aaj saaloon baad dil buhat halka lag raha hai ..(smiled amusingly).. i never knew kisi se apne dil ki baat kehna itna asaan hai ..
Mom ..dadi maa ne kaha tha i use to share everything with u ...but aaj geet ko woh sab kuch kehna itna asaan kaise hugaya ...mene aaj tak jo kuch apne aap se nahi kaha woh geet ke saamne kaise ...

He went to his study table n took out the CD of his parent's last anniversary they celebrated together ..the last celebration of his parent's life ...the night when they lost thr family .. n went to put it on ..

**^***^*****
He was about to start the CD again for umpteenth time when his mbl buzzed with the daily alarm he suddenly became aware of the time ..his head was bursting with pain n body seemed to have run in a marathon ..he guessed it's the fever n no sleep ..but he couldn't be home today ...last night was enough a torture seeing geet crying like that ..he couldn't deal seeing her hollow eyes n fake smile all day plus he had to think of a way to get geet say all that had landed her in the hands of those handas .. he got up with a bit difficulty puting the CD back in its place he got started with his daily routine ..the whole khurana mansion was busy in the daily doing when at 8 maan walked down the stairs ..aniee wasn't down yet n dadi maa was probably checking the bf preps when he spotted geet just at the door sneaking out n as an instant reaction he called her name out loud ..n she stopped just by the door step ..n maan ran upto her ..

Where the hell do u think u r going ..??

(geet never turned back n replied in an ice cold voice to his question) ..To my house ..handa haveli ..remember that's my house ..

Right but u r currently in ur home ..u don't need to go back to that hell ..get this ...now move ur ass in or else ..

Excuse me ..or else ..?? u can't do anything mr.khurana .. n I don't have to obey u ...so I won't ..now move ..

(she tried to move ahead but he stopped her n jerked her back in the house).. Geet stop it ..u r not going anywhere ..

geet jerked up him off her ...n stepped back ..maan realized that was too much of manhandling from his side ...n he looked away even more frustrated ...n then geet said in a curt whisper ..

Maan pls mujhe jane dijeye ..mien kal aniee ki liye yahan aagayi ..n what happened (she looked away ...her voice shaking ...n her tone loosing its sternness).. what happened last night is ..is enough ..thank u for taking care of me ..but I ...i don't need it anymore ..mien apne aap ko khud sambhaal sakti hoon ..

Who tu mujhe pata hi hai geet tum apne aap apko kitne ache se sambhal sakti ho ..😛 jo larki ek road theek na cross kar saktiho uss se aur kiya expect kar sakte hain ..don't make force u ...get inside now ...



Maan plss mujhe aapka koi lecture nahi chahiye ..n waise bhi last 13 saal se apna khayaal mien khud hi rakhti aayi hoon ..tu abb bhi mujhe aapki koi zarorat nahi hai ..

Maan n geet both looked away from each other ..geet knew that would hurt him but that seemed to be the only way he would let her walk away n maan couldn't handle the guilt he was feeling knowing she was true ..but still thr was no way he was letting her go to that place

he held her hand while she turned to walk out ..
Ruk jao gi geet ..



Geet didn't knew if it was the way maan said it her legs froze or it was his heated hand that made her aware of his fever that made her stop in his track ..but she did ..n that was a bad idea coz the intensity in his eyes held her captivated ...she didn't wanted him to feel this pain ...he didn't deserve it ...it was her dark fate ...it was her stupid mistakes that earned her this shit kind of a life not him ..maan's eyes had a request to stop n geet's eyes were watering pleading him to let go ..both were stubborn n both didn't looked away when aniee came ..interrupting them ..

Kya hua ..?? aap dono yahan kya kar rahe hain ..??

Maaneet looked away n maan looked away while geet got nervous she wanted to get away before aniee wakes up but this maan screwed it all ..now what she would say to her ...while maan just remembered geet's words earlier ..

mien aniee ke saamne jhagra nahi karna chahti thi iss liye kuch nahi kaha ...but abb mien nahi jaongi aapke saath ...

he smirked praying that this would work n while geet was lost in her own worries maan spilled it out in front of aniee ..

geet ghar chor kar jaa rahi thi ...n he was stopping her but she really don't seem to get my words ...tum try kar k dekh lo ..

aniee was standing thr almost about to cry ..n geet couldn't process of what she could come up with to stop aniee bursting into tears ..



geet tu aise ...//

but geet stepped ahead n said immediately ..

arre aniee tu kis ki sun rahi hai ...yeh tu han hi dusht danav ...😆 (to which maan standing behind glared at her shocked with her choice of words)..

aniee (in an innocent child's acent) : tou tu nahi ja rahi kahin ..?? bhai ne jhoot bola ..??

nahi maan jhoot ...wohh mien ..mien jaa rahi thi ...but umm ..apna ..wohh ..

n maan came ahead with a wicked smirk ...: han geet bolo kya bolna hai ..kyunjaa rahi thi tum itni subha ghar se bahar ..

geet glared him hard which obviously had no effect on him then she turned to aniee n said in a rush of anger ..: mien apna samaan lene jaa rahi thi car se ..

maan : but tum tu meri car mien aayi thi ..n u had nothing with u ...tu phir ..??

aniee looked from maan to geet ...n then back to geet she couldn't understand thr argument n she was worried about geet leaving her again ..n then before geet could say anything more maan played his master strock ..

kahin tum handa haveli se apna samaan lene tu nahi jaa rahi thi ..?? like u shifting in KM permanently ..??

a big NO was on the tip of geet's tongue when aniee squealed in delight n turned geet towards her ..

really gudya ...tu sach mien maan gayi yahan rehne k liye ..? bhai mene kaha than a sirf aap hi geet ko mana sakte hu ...(she hugged her tight).. oh geet I m so happy ...dekhna abb sab pehle jaisa hujayega ...(aniee kissed her in joy n ran off).. mien dadi ko batati ho ..oh my god I m so happy ..

maan smirked at his victory ...n the fact that now he knew how to bend this stubborn girl ..but geet stood thr shocked n worried n murmered ..

tu kab samjhegi aniee k abb kuch bhii pehle jaise nahi hu sakta ..

maan heard that n felt so bad the whole night played in front of his eyes n stepped ahead towards geet n whispered from behind ..



ek mauqa de kar tu dekho geet ..kya pata sab pehle jaisa hujaye ..kya pata humien who dosti wapis mil jaye who khushi wapis mil jaye ..😭

geet looked back without turning to him ..n maan could see the tears at the edge of her hazel almond eyes ..n she said to him in a curt voice hurt with what he did ..

mera best friend mujhe trap mien phasata nahi tha ..bulke humesha mujhe bachata tha ...he was my savior ...n u ..u Mr. Maan Singh Khurana can never bring back that friend ...ever ...

geet moved ahead n started moving into the house when he stoped her ..

ek mauqa geet ..pechle 13 saaloon k har galat ko sahi karna ka ek mauqa tu deserve karta hoon na mien ..?? ek baar tu iss akelepan ko door karne ka mauqa do mujhe ...please

geet turned he could see the fire in her teary eyes n her fisted hands ...n her clipped tone depicted her hurt in all ways ...when she said ..



really ..u think u deserve it ..tou ek kaam kijeye Mr. Khurana pehle meri zindagi ke pechle 13 saloon ke akelepan ko mita ke dekhaiye ...har uss lamhe ko badal kar dikhaiye jab mujhe mere dost ki zarorat thi aur wohh mere saath nahi tha ...har uss ansoo ko mita kar dikhaiye jo mene apni maa ki yaad mien bahaya .. uss dard ko mere dil se mita dijeye joy eh soch kar huta hai k mien aakhri baar apne bade papa ko dekh bhi na payi .. uss khalipan ko mita dijeye maan singh khurana jo abb mera hissa ban chukka hai ...
kya kar sakte hain aap yeh ..?? nahi ..aap yeh nahi kar sakte .. iss liye aaj meri zindagi ka hissa banne ka bhi aapko koi haq nahi hai ... dor rahiye mujh se aur meri zindagi se bhi ...mujhe abb aapki koi zarorat nahi hai .. wohh waqt chala gaya jab mujhe aapke bina jeena nahi aata tha ... abb koi zarorat nahi hai mujhe aapki .. 😭😭

she left leaving him broken ...he knew what had cost her because he had lost him damn memory but hearing it from her hurt like he never knew it will ..ofcourse she is right ..he wasn't thr for her last 13 years n now all of a sudden he can't claim to know everything about her life ...he will have to earn that trust again ..that friendship again ...n then may be ..just may be she will let him help her ..but till then he can't leave her alone to face that handa family ...he won't ..she like it or not she will have to be here ..

sighing maan exhaled sharply ..he knew he had to think of something ...now it was more than clear geet would leave KM at the first opportunity given ..least did he knew his little sister has done the job already ...😉

PRECAP :-

Maan (glaring her angrily) : geet tum ...

Geet : han mien ...mien kya ...kuch nahi kar sakte ...siwai isske ke upar jaake araam kijeye ..woh kya hai na fever utra nahi hai aapka abhi tak..

Dadi maa looked away hiding her smile ...while maan glared her hard which didn't even got noticed by her she was busy adjusting her bite in her mouth so she won't bit her tongue again ..

Maan : mien bol raha hoon geet ..acha nahi huga ..

Geet : ache tu aap pehle bhi nahi thay ..aur abb .. abb tu bilkul nahi hu ...so pehle khud tou theek hujao ..phir mujhe kuch bolna ...pata chala fever se yahin faint hugaye ..😆😆


hope u enjoyed the update ...well aniee has done her job to stop geet so geet won't be leaving KM now ...so take a breath of relief now ..😊
just another 5 days left for my university to start so ill try n update this again as soon as i can ..

till then please drop ur views n remarks on the update n let me where i lacked

n pls hit the like button n leave me ur reviews 😳😳

luv ya
sobia

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
hi all,
hopefully u r doing good ..😊

here i am on 10th jan ...with another update of my Dark Angel
my side treat on Drashti Dhami aka our Angel DD's Birthday .. 🥳


this one is edited by me 😳
🥳🤗 Happy Birthday DD ..🥳🤗


both pic.s taken from google 😃

enjoy ur day ..thanks a ton to all those who clicked like button n left thr lovely comments for me on the previous update

thank u so much 🤗

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
amazing update
maan's care was so visible
and also geet's pain
maan has such high fever but can't bear to see the pain in geet's eyes again and thats y wants to go
but geet being geet won't let him go
waiting eagerly for that part as well
update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing update both right at their place but need each other tooo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
It's amazing sobia. Geet tried to run from km but maan stopped her at right time. She is so much adamant that doesn't want to hear anything. Maan knows very well that she is not safe in hands mansion. So be is trying his best to stop geet. N Annie did her job very well. Geet can't see aniee sad so she get agree to stalk at km. Maan wants to make everything perfect like before but it wouldn't be easy. Firstly he needs to know whole truth and then geet belief on him.
Thanks dear for the wonderful update on our drashti birthday.
Happy birthday drashti
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part
maan taking care of geet
geet trying to go back to hh
maan played well b4 anie n made geet stay back
geets pain n outburst is r8
he cant get back the 13yrs of her
precap interseting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome
so she is trapped
but this will be good for her
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n superb emotional update! Maan cannot see Geet in pain. Maan has fever! bt worried abt Geet. update soon! well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!! awesome update...loved it dear

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