MG SS: The Dark Angel Of Fate **||Part 26 @ Page 14|| 25-April-15**

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The Dark Angel Of

Fate ...

~~***PROLOGUE***~~

...The Sun Rose, Determined To Torn Me Apart '

...By the Time It Was Dark, I Lost it '

...Lost The Battle Of Life '.n

...From That Day I Stand '

...With My Heart Full Of Hurt '

...I am a Broken Soul '.

...A DARK ANGEL OF FATE ...

Almighty send him as a ray of happiness in her domed life ...
but she didn't wanted any ray of light to highlight her pain ...her remorse ...

hidding herself in a shell from the whole world ...she was in the darkness of past ...

but destiny tied two opposite people living in two different parts of the world ...

they were made to live a relation of compromise ...which turned into a bond of faith ...later they became eachothers best friend ... n then in the mid of truth ...trust ...faith n friendship ...started an eternal love story ..😳😳

but as it is said ...every time two lovers comes 2gether ...fate n time plays its game n tests them ...

a moment came when she was the happiest person living on earth ... with her love beside her ...the very moment the same destiny which made them together gave them all the happiness after so much of a struggle snatched it all ...

the dark past came back ...n it took away every bit of light from thr life ..

now what will happen ..??
will the paradise be shattered for ever ...the dark fate would ever leave them ..?? or they will fight back ..??

a heart breaking tale of Broken Friendship ... Shaken Faith .. Shattered Family n Lost Togetherness ...

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sorry people but i've edited the prolugue n so have the course of story ...will be ending it half of its planned plot ..😃

~** CHARACTER SKETCH **~

MAAN SINGH KHURANA

The most elegible Bachelor of India ..
A shwerd Bussiness Man '
King of Indian Construction World '
Looks for which every girl is ready to die for ..
Intelligence with which he rules the world on his own '
People knows him as a rough n rutheless bussiness man ..
But
For his family he is the most caring brother 'grand child n
A support system to the whole family '
He can go to any extent just to bring a single smile on his love ones ..
But
No one knows' WHAT or shall I say WHO will be the one to become his reason of smile '

... The Sorrows, Pain n Hurt ...

... And The Wounds That Could Never Be Healed ...

... Is What He Carry With Him ...

... As He Went For A Deep Sleep ...

GEET HANDA

A girl Came from London belongs to a small town Hoshyarpur n now living in Mumbai'
Done with her Architect Designing '.
She is a perfect blend of Beauty with Brains '
A beutiful pearl hidding herself in the darkness of shell '
She has everything in her life '
Friends 'family 'luxury 'but still
She have nothing 'for her everything is fake '
Running from all n everyone in her life '.she is hidding herself in the darkness of past '
Past which is un-known ..
N then came a person in her ' who made her reliaze the worth of life n bought the long lost smile back on her angel face '

...I am an Empty Shell ...

...Not Happy, Nor Sad ...

...Neither Angry, Nor Mad ...
...Only Things That I have ...

...One Is My Own Dark Fate ...

...And The Other Is My Pain ...

...My Two Great n Only Friends ...

Savitri Devi Khurana

Maan's dadi ..eldest in the Khurana Family '
Loves her grand childs a lot ..
Not much worried about the two younger ones ..
Since she knows their elder bro is always there for them even before they call him ..
But worried for her Eldest grand-child who seems to be least intrested about his happiness '
N is searching a good match for MAAN '

Anvesha Khurana

Youngest in the Khurana family '.
The most pampered sister in the world I suppose ' by non-other than her dear Maan Bhai ..
Living in London to complete her education ...
Not have a lot of friends ..
But
Her best friend is non-other than Geet '
A naughty '.chater box ..loves her Maan Bhai the most in the world ..
her real identity as a KHURANA is still under cover due to security threats for maan n his family n the whole world knows as as Anvesha Khandelwal ..a distant cousin of maan as the servants of KM knows about her n what is being told to every one related to dadi maa n maan she got to deal with when in india ..
she was declared to be dead when maan's mother expired in an accident by his dead only coz he wanted to protect her as at that time her mother was killed n he didn't wanted to risk her life so only declared his daughter to be dead n till now for the world maan's sister anvesha khurana is dead ..

Dev Singh Khurana
(same as drama *sorry i don't have any pic of him)

He is a mystry for his family ..
Not very talkative '
Calm n compose '.never express himself to others very well ..
A handsome hunk living in london along with his younger sister Anvesha ...
Currently handling the bussiness in London with the help n guidance of his Maan bro ..

edited after story revelation ..
he is not a Khurana but the illegitimate son of maan's dad's dear cousin n his dad adopted dev when his mother was at the verge of dying ... he never came to KM instead is still living in London ...
he too have a different identity in london .. not linked with khurana's same reason .. but just that he seems to be spoiled brat more from all the bits n pieces aniee revealed to geet ..

Palavi n Raghav Handa
(prerna n rishab bajaj *sorry i ve lost thr pic as well ...will try n add it later)

Geet's chacha n chachi ( chotti maa n chachu ) '..and her legal gurdians ..
Lives in delhi ..
A very happy Romantic couple ...in their early 40's
Holds a good status in society ..just coz of being in Relation with Savitri Khurana ..
Raghav is a flirt businessman ...n drunkard as well
n considers geet as his mere responsibility after his elder brother's death ..while palavi do holds a soft corner for her still her biggest weakness is she can't go against her husband's words ..

Have a Son ..cousin/elder brother of geet TEJ HANDA ..

he is here a POLICE OFFICER ...😉😉

now a days under cover .. lives with geet in Mumbai ..

Tej has left handa House 2 years back when he took geet with him to Mumbai .. n is no more in contact with any of Handa family ... geet leaves with Tej but now a days being a police officer he is under ground ..

as the story has revealed some bits me editing this CS ..

Handa's have some undercover grey shades which are not revealed exactly ...lots is hidden in them ...which will be revealed as the story will progress ...

One new character which will be included in up coming updates ..😉

Mr. Sanjay Sharma

(adi's dad) the famous munshi ji ..😉

he is not that oldie munshi he is the modern one ..😛...as being with the business tycoon ..he also have some strong contacts ..n was the very first teacher mentor guide of Maan when he joined KC .. now a days have taken retirement due to some hidden reasons but still have a hold on the commercial world ..

maan respects him a lot almost as much as he respects his dad ..

he is the one who took care of geet n aniee's educational needs n paid them often visits in london as no one could guess his reasons to pay such frequent visits in london .. geet is just like his daughter to him so as aniee .. he kind of know the relation maaneet shared n understand the way they both have changed after the accident ..also he is the one who gives every information regarding maan's achievement to geet the minute he will do something big either if it was his education or now his company ..

he is an important character coz he is the one who handles all the legal affairs of handas n khurana's both ..n the will of Yash Khurana & Mohinder Handa is also revealed by him .. so only he knows everything happening in Handa group of companies ..

ADITYA SHARMA (ADI)

adi is attached to maan's childhood as his father use to work for maan's father so they know each other from very small age but during the 2 n 1/2 years when maan was in London with his mom the contact got broken .. n they resumed thr friendship from a new page after maan's accident n are together till now ..

being with maan he knows every secret of his life ..he was in touch with geet as well during last 13 years but as per Yash Khurana's instruction n top of all Geet's kasam he never mentioned about her to maan ..

geet is a dear sister to him ... the only person he will listen to OVER his Maan sir ..😃😃

SASHA ..

Sasha Talwar ..Old Munchi's Daughter (sorry have made this blunder in previous updates ..so plss take it as some other munchi ..she is notadi 's sister by any chance 🤢 soveeyy ) ...a sharp minded professional girl working with KC since 4 years ...have tried every way to seduce maan n get a place in his life ...but failed miserably n now is in a relationship with maan's ex-client Tanmay Raheja ...they are soon going to be married ..

MAANEET FRIENDs CIRCLE

Mr. & Mrs. PREM JUNIJA

(from kis desh mien hai mera dil)

first u need to know about the connection b/w Junija's n Khurana's

Lalit junija (father of prem) n Yash khurana were business partners n neighbors in Delhi as well both families were really close n when Mohinder came to Delhi ..the 3 became very good friend .. though the bond mohinder n yash shared was of no comparison to lalit's relation but still thr was a kind of trust both families had on each other .. so only maan n prem were best of friend (be4 geet's birth) n use to share a very nice bond from a very tender age of 2 ..same school same class .. after geet came in thr life ...maan did paid more attention on geet than anyone one else but for prem it was even more joyful to have a little angel with them .. but then maan n geet left to london even then in those 2 n 1/2 years prem n maan continued to communicate n share thr special achievements ..after the accident maan had forgotten him as well so only Yash requested junija's not to mention about his past much n explained it to prem as well n thus both friends started a fresh at the age of 14 n prem also use to talk with geet often sharing about maan's success n asking her to talk with him but she dreaded him as well not 2 tell him anything as she wanted to say all to him ..

but 5 years later when it turned 3 years for maan joining KC junija's expanded thr business to London n whole family was shifted thr ..maan was not much happy about it as prem was few of those people whom he trusted n who can understand him ..who was thr with him when KC n Khurana family was suffering from the worst but didn't said much ..prem as well was not much happy but he knew he has to move with his family n thr he met with Geet n was living thr completing his final year of MBA in london ..during this time he learnt how much geet misses maan n just the way maan is experiencing a void in his life here geet too was feeling the same ..

its only prem his elder sister gulraaj junija n thr parents who knows about y geet n aniee is being kept in london n also that aniee is not ANVESHA KHANDELWAL but ANVESHA YASH KHURANA ..rest were at a tender age in thr was off late no talks about this matter in family so all the children have forgotten the existence of aniee in thr childhood ..its only geet they remember ..n assume that aniee is some cousin of both maaneet .. never bothered to go in detail regarding aniee's relation with geet ..

prem n heer junija .. a happily married couple for an year now ..its thr wedding anniversary which they are coming to celebrate in India ..

prem has told everything about geet n maan n thr childhood to heer ..

(thr is no change in thr love life heer is from punjab just that thr are no post marriage hurdles in thr life)

PREET JUNIJA

the youngest of junija family ..in childhood he was a spoilt brat so only lalit junija decided to send him to London's hostel ..for an year but thr he met geet ..aniee n became very good friends with them .. when after an year lalit junija went to london to take him back ..Preet refused saying he loves his school n friends n doesn't want to come back .. so only he was ever since in London studying with geet as her classmate ..

a very good friend to geet ..he is full of life but poor guy is in love with his bhabi's sister Rano but not sure of her feelings ..so only still struggling ..

he is helping prem with his work in junija's business now a days after completing his MBA ..

ARJUN SINGHANIA

belongs to the famous royal family Singhania's

was friends with prem n maan since the first day of thr school ..so know geet as they all studied in same school ...but was use to be bit J of geet coz he didn't have much friends n his both best friend were suddenly gicing more importance of geet when she joined school ..but this was just a childhood insecurity ..actually he too adores the sweet angelic devil of thr group very much ..but same happen with his n maan's relation after maan left to london he use to have occasional covo with him on thr special achievements n after accident they started from a new page ..he was also in contact with geet in last 13 years .. but he shifted to London almost 7 years back to persuade his masters ..n lived thr 4 years n now is running an event management company in london ..but still is in contact with maan n prem ..

a secret of his life he is in love with MSK's devil sister anvesha (he got to know the truth of aniee being alive when he went to london 7 years back n met with geet) maan also knows it coz he caught him drooling over his sister once when aniee visited KM ..he was happy coz he knows arjun is a nice guy so only maan himself requested arjun to be around aniee coz he cannot leave his baby sister on bodyguards alone ...(maan was unaware of geet's presence around his princess ..) ..yet a part of the possessive brother is always thr to have a close watch on his moves ..😛😛

which arjun gladly accepted ...n is now always seen around aniee someway or the other irritating her ...😆

Dr. ARMAAN MALIK

okiee from now on wards u will see get n aniee talking about them often

its simply coz Arman was a close friend of maan even though armaan was younger to maan but they both clicked at the first day in london's school n then geet also became friends with him .. n now as she has left london due to some reason she is avoiding him ..but really loves him as a friend as after maan he was the one always beside her ..though he could not get the place which maan had in geet 's life but still he has his very own special place ...😃

he is an 2 years ELDER to geet ..he lives near maan's mami's house where geet n aniee use to live ..n now its only aniee living thr ..completed his MBBS n over with his internship an year back n is now working as a cardiologist in london's one famous hospital ..

Dr. RIDHIMA GUPTA

Dr. Armaan hu aur Dr. Ridhima nahi ...aisa kaise hu sakta hai ..😆 😉😉

she was in relation with armaan which is broken y u wil know in the story ..😳

she was basically introduced to maan through Armaan n then trio became friends n geet joined in thr with maan ..

n now ridz army geet n aniee were together ever since maan left london after his accident ..😃

she is same as geet's age was her classmate ..

where she is n what she is doing no one knows ..

maan do knows armaan n ridz as he has met them both during his casual visits to aniee but not like he acknowledge them as his friend since he don't remember anything about them ..

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in Delhi it was a group of 4 ..Maan-Geet-Prem-Arjun-Aniee

in London thr was initally 4 ..Maan-Geet-Armaan-Ridhima-Aniee

but after maan left it was only Geet-Armaan-Ridz-Aniee left ...LATERPreet came n joined geet in her school n class as well with ridz thr already n they also became friends n then Arjun came to London n met with geet n aniee ..n finally it was Prem who came to London n was living with thr since last 5 years ..(technically it was only 3 years prem n geet were together as geet left london 2 years back)

hope no issues with the relations n connections b/w thr friends ...

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here i am introducing another character .. sorry i didn't planned to reveal his part but went with the flow when typing so here is the villain of this story ..

Sukhlal Handa

he is the eldest son of geet's Darji ..Mohinder's elder brother

he cunning ..selfish ..greedy for money .. n can even kill his own blood for money n status ..

he has been influencing darji ever since Mohinder left HP with his wife ... n they point of edge he has is his Son Brij who is the Waris of Handa clan since they still don't consider TEJ thr legitimate heir with all thr heart though they pretend they have forgotten n forgiven Raghav for his past deeds but inside they haven't ...

a single hint ...all what happened to geet is because of HIM ...

lives in HP ..never comes here coz all the affairs of HP is handled by him only ..

Brij is his Son .. follows every command of his bauji ..

he is a fierce person ..dare devil ..a very cunning cruel person ..

Maan's Mother

Preetie Yash Khurana ...

Maan's father

Yash Singh Khurana ..

Geet's parents

Mohinder n Rano Handa ..

all four are dead but holds great importance in this story ...

Other characters ..PINKY...Nakul ...Brij ...Darji ... are same as GHSP ...😃

Some other characters are also in this SS but will introduce when needed ..😉

*~ BackGround Of Story ~*

Handas n Khuranas are family friends ...Savitri devi n her Husband ( dada ji we can say ) helped handas in their bad times so they respects her a lot '.

Dadi maa loves geet a lot '

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geet is currently living In mumbai n people n HP (darji brij n company) don't know about this on dadi maa (savitri devi's) order to raghav n palavi ...reason will be revealed with her past ...

anvesha n geet are best friends since they were together from the childhood n aniee is just like a younger sister to geet but no more in touch since 2 years after geet came back from London..

geet has completed her Architect Designing 1 years back n now she is searching for a job ..

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okiee so this was the Prologue n Character Sketch for my 2nd MG SS'.

May be some of u will have lots of confusion regarding Geet's character ...so for them I can just say everything will be revealed as the story will progress so don't worry about that ...

There were some bits of info which was required for me to give u as I was confused hw to convey all this ..That's y this Background was needed ..

enjoy reading ... story till now given below ..😃

🤗'.'...~~~***LUV SOBIA***~~~'...🤗

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 10 years ago

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STORY TILL NOW ...😳

There comes many hurdles n problems in ones life ...some fights with them ...some runs away from them ...

But all of them has one thing common ...they share their pain ...their problems ...their worries ... their tears with someone special ...a person whom they trust ..

But what will happen to a person who never trusted anyone ...who never shared her pain .. her worries ... her problems with anyone ...

they both were like that ...alike as an image in mirror and different as a shadow n light ...he was a light in her shell but she was a shadow ...dark n empty ...

they made everyone happy around them ...he with his efforts ...n with his support n care for all people around him ...

and she did with her different antics ...sometimes by mischief ...sometimes with jokes ...sometimes with her cute naughty talks ...

But both have concealed themselves ...their heart n their feelings from everyone ...

A tale of broken friendship .. shaken faith .. shattered family n lost togetherness ..

THE DARK ANGEL OF FATE ...!!

As the name implies ..the story revolves around the life of a girl Geet Handa .. n her life which is ruined by her fate .. n how maan comes to make her come out of her shell of darkness n thr journey together ..

Maan Singh Khurana ..for the world he may be the most ruthless arrogant shrewd businessman but for his family he is the most caring grand child n brother ..he lives for his family ..loves them to the core but he himself is not happy for the fact he has lost his parents at a very early age his mother died in an accident when he was nearly 14 in which his memories related to his childhood got blurred n his father too left him at the age of 17 .. he do pretend to be happy but inside misses his parents to much n the fact he don't remember any memory related to his mother makes him really sad ..

Lives in Delhi with her dadi but he went to Mumbai to receive his businessman of the year's award n taking over the Chopra firm (one of the deadly enemy MSK has in corporate world) on the beach while early morning thr was this girl jogging ..he instantly attracted to her as he could relate to her a BIT ..he felt as if he knew her but didn't understand y ..then he saw that girl hitting a guy below the bed coz he was passing dirty comments over her ..n both went away from thr ..

the girl was geet who was going to chopra cons. Firm for her interview that same morning ..

then thr second meeting was when geet saved a little toddler coming in front of his car that very morning ...whr they had a bit of argument n maan left yet again confused with the way he was feeling for this stranger n finally geet met him in Chopra's office whr she was to get an architect's job n maan was taking interview of the short listed candidates ..(the official announcement of the over take is not yet done coz KC is changing the whole management n staff)

maan was called delhi by dadi maa immediately while geet too was called to delhi by her chachi in a not so well convo she didn't wanted to go but agreed to her plead ..

after much request from aniee who came thr to surprise maan n dadi maa ...maan agreed to see the girl n was determined to reject her ...due to the fact he is not got over the broken relation he had once in his teen with a greedy wicked girl Sameera who left him when KC was at the verge of closing ..

when geet reached delhi she was shocked to see her darji n brij thr in Handa House as they didn't knew about her being in delhi for some unknown reasons ..she was told about the alliance from Savitri Khurana n was not allowed to say her point she even tried to resist as she didn't wanted to meet maan but was left with no option n was herself determined to make HIM say NO to this alliance ..

finally next day khurana's made way to Handa Haveli while aniee was all the way too excited to meet geet making maan think about that girl to be a nice girl but when he came in conversation with darji n brij he assumed that the girl is a typical small town girl who lives in 4 walls of house n was happy for the fact that it will be easy for him to say no but when he saw geet, reaching her room he was shocked to see the same girl in front of him than got confused as according to her family's talk he came to know that they don't know about her living in Mumbai .. he was really curious to know about her as seeing the affection b/w her n aniee n then the bond she shared with dadi maa was confusing him .. but geet avoided talking with him n said to him clearly to back off from this alliance ..he was confused n thus he didn't said anything regarding it n both ushered down stairs ..

maan got a call n he was leaving to his office earlier than dadi maa n aniee when he saw brij manhandling geet outside the house n he came to rescue her .. while geet just stood thr ..maan punched brij once n be4 thing could get worse Palavi reached thr dispersing them .. maan left to KM confused ...

n then dadi maa saw him working out at the mid night n asked him y he was stressed ..n he with no option left poured his curiosity regarding geet's behavior in front of dadi maa thinking dadi maa will have his answers ..n she did had his answer n started telling him where all this started ..

FLASHBACK ..

Two families ..HANDAS n KHURANAS were friends from thr native place HP n so thr children Yash Singh Khurana n Mohinder Handa ..n there spouse Preetie yash khurana n Rano Mohinder Handa as well ..

Preetie n Yash Khurana along with his mother n Son Maan was living in delhi n when maan was 5 years Mohinder n Rano Handa too came to delhi to acquire a better life for his daughter Geet ..who was then just few months n on a fond day all 4 parents decided to marry thr children at appropriate age IF THEY AGREED ..

Due to medical issues Preetie had least chances to conceive for the 2nd time n thr wish for a daughter child was unfulfilled n this made them really attached to Geet from day 1 .. maan as well was very attached with the little cotton ball who use to be with his mother almost all day ..while he too was really adored by Rano n Mohinder ...n then came Yash n Preeties daughter Aniee after good 3 years when maan was 8 n geet 3 years ...Life was smooth for all until the day Mohinder's brothers secret marriage got revealed in front of family n he was thrown out of Handa family but as Mohinder loved his younger brother too much he forgiven him n took Raghav n his wife Palavi Handa along with thr 4 year old son Tej Handa with him to thr house Handa House in delhi ..

Maan .. Geet .. Tej n Aniee started growing together with sweet n sour memories of childhood .. aniee was always fond of geet .. preetie n yash too loved geet the way they use to be4 aniee's birth ..(i didn't mentioned adi here as he didn't visit KM much it was just school time friendship)

But the dark day came when mohinder n rano paid their 1st visit to HP after 2 years of Raghav's fiasco to get the broken family together n were burned in thr car accident on the highway but luckily geet was with Raghav n Palavi outside the car at the time of blast n trio were saved .. geet witnessed the death of thr parent in a age of 5 which made her dead scared n numb ..she went to a state of shock ..the whole Handa industries n Handa House (owned by mohinder) was now in geet's name n being the only literate brother its care taker ship n as thr was no specifications mentioned in Mohinder's will regarding geet's custody according to Indian law everything went under the care takership of Handa family ..(mainly Raghav n palavi).. but during the funerals of both preetie n yash noticed the way geet was numb n on request on savitri khurana ..geet was taken to delhi (KM) for her up bringing ..

Geet never did cried for her parents even after consulting many psychiatrist for months n remained silent .. as the time passed geet was taken cared by preetie n yash while with maan n hers constant fights to get preetie's attention geet went to her normal bubbly self n started living a normal life ...with a fine incident during school hours (which is still to be revealed) maaneet finally became best of friends n now from that day when geet was nearly 6 n maan nearly 11 they both are together every day 24/7 sharing thr problems .. yet the sweet n sour fights remained same .. with aniee .. maan n geet life was a living heaven till Yash Khurana took up an Army related project n came in the eye of Underworld goons which became a threat for his family n for himself too therefore he sent his wife n children to London for the time being but that time stretched till 2 years when Maan .. Geet n Aniee were living thr in London with fake identities n living with maan's mami .. (fake ids were arranged by Indian army just to protect Yash Khurana's family on his request) ..

After almost 2 n year maan along with his mother was coming back to India secretly to give a surprise to Yash on thr marriage anniversary initially geet n annie both were included in the plan but due to geet's sudden fever she was not allowed to travel for so long n thus bending on her heart's call preetie made geet have sleeping pills n left to India as geet was too adamant of her leaving her due to her fear of staying away from her mother yet again ..while aniee was thr just incase if geet got up before 24 hours being with aniee will help her be at peace at least to some extent ..

But things went worst when under a planned accident

By the same goons 14 years Maan lost his mother in an accident in which he lost his memory partially (he didn't remember any one from his family then but with the help of psychologist with the time he too gained some bits of memories in riddles n blur images but still he wasn't able to remember 14 years of his life completely) as well under the effect of Dissociative amnesia ..(in which memories do remain in our brain but are buried deep within n surface on thr own when see any relevant object).. his father did supported him after thr accident n made him familiar to his life previously but deep down with time passing by he was drowning in his pool of sorrows as well however back in london as an instant reaction seeing the news flashing in T.V a 9 years old geet accused maan as he was adamant to go to delhi n surprise his father knowing the occasion but geet wasn't nudging to it , it was her hurtful state which made her say the very second she heard the news of preetie's death n locked herself in her room ...where she saw 2 letters one from preetie n other from maan ...after 2 days of preetie's death dadi maa went to London mean while aniee was also made aware of her mother's death ...after much efforts by maan's mami when geet didn't opened her room's door for 2 days finally Amy (uncover character will not introduced now) sneaked in her room n geet allowed ONLY aniee to meet her ...aniee entered the room only to see all the things shattered n geet cuddled up in one corner with red swollen eyes n then they read the letter from preetie together which actually made geet calmed n in which geet was requested by preetie to take care of herself n aniee will be her responsibility till SHE will come back n if she cried her maa (preetie) will be really sad .. geet did came out of her room but never cried after coming out in front of anyone neither did she talked about preetie's death even after constant efforts of dadi to make her cry she didn't ...geet's silence n coldness made dadi maa assume that geet still hold maan responsible for preetie's death ..

During dadi maa's visit to London ... Yash was in India alone with Maan ...here maan was in a real bad state as his injury was fresh n he was taking extra stress to remember his previous life n therefore on doctors recommendation Yash decided to take maan away from KM for few days ..back in London geet heard this from dadi maa while she was telling this to maan's mami ..n she dialed maan's room's direct extension in India ..maan did answered the call but never recognized geet n thr talk only confused maan as he was again in confusion n was trying to remember that girl n geet got scared listening to the panicked voice of Yash on the other side shouting to call the doctors n after that geet herself started knowing about maan's disease through her school professors n net ...n her little child heart compelled her to believe that if she tried contacting maan now he will be stressed remember all the memories so she never did tried to contact him ..

After about 2 years maan was quite normal with his life but Yash was no where near to come out of his miseries he loved his wife the most n his only reason to live was the fact that he promised preetie to make geet his DIL .. when all this was going smooth Yash'a cousin sister Sudha (who was thrown out of the family by his bua n phopa ji coz she had an affair be4 marriage n got pregnant too) contacted Yash n asked him to take the responsibilities of her child DEV who was in a hostel studying in some other state of England ..yash agreed to the last wish of his dear cousin who was on the verge of death door .. n gave Dev his name n accepted him as his son ..

But during this period the underworld threats became more fierce as Yash was trying hard to put the murderers of his wife to death sentence but couldn't n this was the reason he never changed dev's name in school records or any other place ..dev was 2 years younger than maan i.e 14 now ... he was still in the same school n hostel living thr Yash visited him once during this adoption process ...

after a major attack planned for him ..media made it a hype n thus this news reached London n geet as well .. geet loved herBade papa (yash) to the core n this made her to damn scared after all she had only him as her parent ..she tried reaching India without even telling anyone but was not able to due to her age official didn't allowed her to board the flight ...geet was nearly 11 years at that time n maan 16 ...

This was the time when Yash paid his first ever visit to London after preetie's death as geet was too adamant to meet yash ..even after meeting him all geet wanted was to go back with him but he made her understand that he can't take her with him due to some problems but promised her he will take her back once she n aniee both will complete thr studies ...Yash also asked geet that time to promise him that she will never try sneaking out like this ever n will never come back to India be4 her studies .. geet promised him she won't but complained about maan .. to which Yash made her realize that till now maan is not fully recovered as being in India he often encounters many things related to his past n this makes him stress himself n if she will talk with him he may have his panic attacks often which is not good for him .. geet was really dull ..n yash knew she all her life has been living with maan n thr bond was soo much strong that without each other they couldn't take a step more in thr life yet he was helpless coz every time he tried reminding maan about geet he will get impulsive by seeing anything related to geet .. he one side was really happy to know the depth of thr friendship but other side he is sad to see both his children suffering ...yash went away leaving geet with a hope n PROMISE that once maan will be ok he will himself come n take u both (aniee n geet) with him to back to Delhi ...

Time passed by n an year after that when maan was 17 n geet was 12 while aniee 9 years Yash also left them all due to a heart attack ..maan was thr with him when he took his last breath ..Yash asked maan to take care of his family ...siblings ..KC n top of all to PROTECT his GUDHYA ..(gudya was the nick name of geet but maan didn't remember her yet so he mistook it to be aniee's nick name).. yash left a broken shattered maan ..who went to London to take his sister for the funerals of his father but in his miseries he took only 2 tickets one for him n one for aniee while dadi maa had arranged for 3 he never knew about geet n thus during his lost state didn't even tried to know y thr was 3 tickets ..

When he reached thr geet n aniee both were ready to go with him but he was so silent he never paid any heeds to others just took aniee with him silently n went to airport geet stood thr seeing them both leaving while aniee asked her to tell him but she refused saying their one sentence one request will develop many question in maan's mind n he is not in a state to handle all this now ..

After yash's death, life went all the more difficult aniee was sent back to London n in funeral as well no one knew about aniee being the daughter of yash khurana as Yash himself had declared his daughter Anvesha Khurana to be dead years back when preetie died just to prevent those goons look for her as he knew this will become a threat for both aniee n geet living thr alone now ..

Dadi maa was trying hard to control KC but was failed miserably while maan was drowned in his sorrow n top of that his first love ..his friends everyone started distancing him ..nSameera (GF) also said she was with him for his richy rich background maan was heart broken he didn't knew whr to go n whom to say his heart after his accident it was always his father who comforted him as he was a silent person by nature not that he wasn't a happy child but when it comes to express his feelings he could never do that it was always Yash n Geet with whom he talked n shared his thoughts ..but after accident he lost his friend n now Yash as well ...confused he went to London leaving dadi maa n India determined to stay thr for a month n it was aniee's 10th b,day when he arrived thr .. but he met an unknown girl almost of 14 or 15 years who made him realize that its no point to remorse over other people's betrayal who don't even care for us rather we should think about the people still in our life n who cares for us n loves us ...listening to her talks maan realized how irresponsibly he left his dadi maa alone back in India to face it all when KC was at the verge of getting bank corrupt n he named that girl as ANGEL since he never got the chance to ask her name in that half minute meeting ..on the other hand aniee was told by geet n amy that they hv seen maan in park n defo he is here for her b,day all excited to meet him geet went to buy a welcome gift for him threatening everyone to not tell him anything she will confront him herself ..but when maan came to meet aniee he was in real hurry determined to get KC out of all this mess n cutting the cake with aniee he left London without meeting geet neither did aniee or his mami got the chance to tell him as geet had told them + maan was in too much of hurry to catch the flight ..when geet came back she was mad at his act n decided to meet in India only now after completing her studies ... it took 7 years for maan to get KC this much high position ..n just 2 years be4 he managed to finally send the murderers of his mother behind bars ..he was so happy that now his both siblings dev n aniee can be with him in India n even got Aniee back in India without even informing dadi maa as a surprise for her .. yet again breaking geet's heart 🤢..both aniee n geet thought it will just few days visit as they didn't knew about the culprits being behind bars n thus aniee went with him but soon maan realized it was not yet safe for aniee to be here as the friends n companions of that murderer was still behind him he never cared for himself but couldn't dare to put aniee's life in danger so sent her back to London after 2 months only but the real shock 4 aniee was when they both reached thr at mid night ..aniee was super happy that finally geet n maan will meet after so many years but she came across the news that geet had left London 2 days back without informing anyone ..aniee informed dadi maa but she too was unaware of geet being here .. n she inquired Raghav but he too denied ...she got tensed maan wasn't here either he was with aniee n she tried every way out to find her finally after good 32 hours Tej handa (raghav's son) called dadi informing geet is at home ..reaching Handa Haveli dadi was shacked beyond words looking at her little gudya soo weak n wounded even but she said it was coz of her mistake n refused saying anything about it ..dadi took her to the hospital n thr Tej requested dadi maa to talk with darji to allow geet to continue her studies in Mumbai with him which was seconded by geet too ...dadi tried asking her her reason to run away like this but she refused saying she don't wanna talk about it dadi maa too gave up knowing if geet has decided to be numb its not in her to make her speak up n finally made darji agreed for her living in Mumbai for an year to study ..but geet never came back even after completing her studies n dadi maa persuaded Raghav n Palavi to portray in front of Darji as if geet lives with them only which was done by them .. n they both did this coz is was only coz of thr relations with savitri khurana that society gives bit of respect to both of them else raghav's image is really bad in outer world ..

Maan never remembered any of his encounters with geet as he didn't remember her n lead his life during last 13 yearsunaware of the fact that this one girl is still waiting for him to come to take her back as promised by Yash khurana ...

Listening all one side maan was angry on dadi to have hide such a vital part of his life ...sad to think geet holds him responsible for his own mother's death (as dadi have told him coz she assumed that what ever geet said she still believes it) n then confused as to y she never tried to contact him ...n thus decided to play this marriage alliance game a little longer to get to know about geet a...as dadi maa n aniee both were too confident that geet will defo tell him about her problem as she still considers him as her best friend though she don't say it now but she does ..

geet came back just an year be4 her architect studies were getting over aniee n dadi both doesn't know the reason y she left London ...She was disappeared for 3 days after reaching Delhi ..still dadi maa is unknown to the fact as to where she was ..how all that happened

dadi maa requested maan to persuade geet to tell her problems to him as she was really confident that geet will defo share her pain with him ...n maan promised he will try more than his best to get to know what is exactly happening in Handa House ..

This was all told to maan some by dadi maa n some by aniee after coming back from Handa Haveli where is he took aniee that similar night on request of aniee as she wanted to have geet's made pasta ..

He forgot his mobile in geet's balcony n he went to take that n that's when he saw geet crying furiously ..talking with his dad's picture pouring out how she repent reacting impulsively listening to maan's moms death .. how she was scared to contact maan after that call dreading he may again get ill .. then the way she waited for maan to take her back after he (Yash) promised her that maan will come .. how broken she was when maan took only aniee with him ...how much she is guilty to have broke his promise (about not coming to India be4 completing her studies) ... how much she still wanted to meet maan her best friend but didn't knowing how much this could create problem ..

listening to all this n seeing soo many childhood pictures on geet's rom's walls ..Maan got his stress attack again seeing to all his childhood picture with geet n rano n mohinder n geet took him the door ...be4 leaving maan warned her about brij n asked her to contact him as she has his number now (due to aniee's mischief) but she cut him off saying she can handle her life n he don't need to worry about her but he says he has every right to be worried about her ..n leaves from thr ...but geet stands thr smiling with tears saying she is happy to know her best friend can still read her mind n heart but she can't trust him any more with her life n after his fierce anger for brij she just can't manage to tell him her problems ..n will try n pray for him to be away from her ..

The event full night n day finishes with so many revelation for maan .. n thr is another day waiting ..

after having encountered geet n aniee in a restaurant having a heated argument with some guy ..maan asked his guards to be with them n left from thr without security n some sharp shooters got the best chance of thr life time to attack him ...geet found him by her house in an unconscious state n tried to help which made those goons flow them ...they tackled them well n after a goof fight where maan got to see geet's fighting skills they were saved as adi came with police ...but the bad part media got thr as well n maan movd geet away her foot was injured n so they went to a family docter's clinic ...maan was all the way amazed with the bond geet shared with every person related to his life ...n some what fell detatched ..before he could understand much aniee n dadi came thr worried sick for them but geet handled aniee who was hell bent on taking her back to KM ...but geet refused hurting aniee ..n then entered Tej Handa who took geet with him even though maan was not so pleased n satisfy but he left geet to attend a call n in that instants geet was about to fall but maan saved her n commanded her to come with him n after a heated argument with Tej he took geet with him ...

now what ..?? geet had been running away from that home since last 2 years ...will she be able to face those memories ..?? how will maan cope-up with that ..?? now that they know about thr bond will they ever be able to find thr lost friendship again ..?? knowing geet is in a great trouble n she is hiding it ..Do u think maan will let go off this easily ..??

Do u think he will bend in front of geet's stubbornness or he will be succeeded to know about geet's life's mysteries .. will he be able to get her back from her darkness .. if yes then how ..?? will geet be able to imposter her rudeness in front of him when she actually is not angry at him but is just trying to shove him away from her life ...?

Wanna know what their fate is planning ..keep reading ...!!

THE DARK ANGEL OF FATE ...!!

with this i am banging my head on my room's wall

seriously i thought to start this ff as happy one with lots of maaneet moments fun n masti n here in flow of writing i made such a sad starting for it ...😭😭

but i promise from here onwards will make sure i won't make u all scratch ur heads reading the updates of dark angel ...😃

hope this one will clear all ur facts n queries related to this story ..

if not plss feel free to ask me here or in pm where ever u like ..

i know thr must be many mistakes in narration ..n i am really sorry about it

didn't wanted to but guess the flashback n present mixing was a bad idea with such an eventful past ..

waiting for ur reviews ..

luv ya all

sobia

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MY DISCUSSION THREAD

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3390663/ff-discussion-sobia4maaneets-ff

LINKS TO ALL MY WORK

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3438124/ff-daily-updates-thread-5?pn=32

INDEX

THREAD 1 (part 1-15)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3105889/mg-ss-the-dark-angel-of-fate-new-thread-added

THREAD 2 (PART 16-20)

this thread has been closed thnxx to my in-activeness

part 19 is on page ...22

n part 20 on pg28

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3494936/mg-ss-the-dark-angel-of-fate-2-pt-20-pg-28-11-3-14

THREAD 3

Story Till Now ...UP

Part 21 & 22

DOWN

Part 23

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4270622/mg-ss-the-dark-angel-of-fate-part-26-page-14-25-april-15?pn=4

Part 24 :-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4270622/mg-ss-the-dark-angel-of-fate-part-26-page-14-25-april-15?pn=7

PART 25 :-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4270622/mg-ss-the-dark-angel-of-fate-part-26-page-14-25-april-15?pn=11

PART 26 :-

PART 27 :-

PART 28 :-

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MG SS : The Dark Angel of Fate ...!!

PART 21

Halat ke rat par sawaar aayi hai yaadon ki toil humari dwaar...

Bhaag rahi thi abb tak jis lamhe se ...

Jane kaise kar paongi uska saamna iss baar ...

Dar lag raha hai mujhe par karoon kis se byaan ...

Hasi ka jo lubaada urh kar ji rahi thi abb tk ...

Yadoon se bhawandar mien kahin chot na jaye uss paar ...

Sitting in the car with aniee n was probably the most dreading 30 min of her life ..aniee was going non-stop about how happy she is having her in KM n about her plans for next 3 weeks of her stay ..while maan was tensed seeing geet going pale with every second ...he didn't knew what took over him at that moment but he couldn't leave geet with that brother of hers' n now taking her to KM ..even he was questioning himself ..will he be able to handle her ..?? she hasn't stepped into that house after they left for London .. which means after the death of his parents ..she probably still holds the same image of the house but he knows its completely opposite to what it was 13 years back ... it isn't going to be easy for her ...but aniee immune to geet's nervousness n maan's tension kept going on n on n finally they were just outside the main gate of Khurana Mansion ..n the guard came rushing ..

Guard : sir dadi maa n kaha hai ke aap kuch deir wait Karen aur aniee madam ko andar bhejden ..

Maan n geet both knew dadi did this to prevent aniee from seeing geet breaking down ...n he agreed ...while aniee beamed in delight ..

Aniee : I m sure dadi ne kuch special plan kiya huga geet ki entry k liye ..bhai aap araam se pehle geet ko garden dekhao ...ill call u both ..

Aniee went in n maan looked at geet ..she was undoing her seat belt n now turned to open her door ...

Maan : geet tum yeh ...//

But deciding against stopping her he stepped out n rushed to her side of car n helped her out ..

Maan moved to tell the guard to park in the car while geet moved ahead towards the giant metal gate ..looking at the great mansion now in a completely different look to what she remembered ..last time she met her bade papa he had told her that he has renovated the mansion ...her heart was beating so fast ...all the memories of her childhood came rushing back n now looking at her safe heaven she could literally see herself n maan running around in the porch ..prem bhai arjun snatching her chocolate n she running after him in her small fork ..she smiled n felt her tears wetting her face ...n immediately wiped them away hearing maan ..

Geet ...umm ..chale andar ..tumhain dard hu raha huga ..

Geet looked at the house n now she couldn't see any traces of her home ..everything has been changed ..it almost didn't looked like her home now ..

Gunji hai bas meri haasi hi jis nagan mien aaj tak ...

Ansoon mere dekh kar kahin roo na pare who dar-o-deevar ...

Kaise karongi iss be-rooh makaan mien praveesh ...

Jin ke hone se yeh ghar kelata tha ...

Who tu kab ke chale gaye ...

Abb kis ka haath thaam kar aage barhoon mien iss baar ...

she remembered every time she stepped in this house she was either holding maa's hand or her bade papa was carrying her ...n today she missed them more than ever ...this house looks so alien to her n emptiness filled her to even look at it ... more tears gathered in her eyes n she faced her back to maan trying to not cry infront of maan n said in a shaky voice ..

mien nahi jaongi ..

what (maan said shocked)

mene kaha na mien nahi jaoongi ..(geet composed herself n said more firmly) .. aap zabardasti mujhe yahan le aaye ..mujhe nahi jana aapke ghar mien .. mien aniee ke saamne jhagra nahi karna chahti thi iss liye kuch nahi kaha ...but abb mien nahi jaongi aapke saath ... mujhe ..handa haveli jana hai ..

u know something geet ...(she turned her head back in his direction) ..just shut up ...tum mere saath andar chal rahi ho ...n that's it ..

mene kaha na mien nahi jana chahti ..

maan came towards her n held n arms tightly n jerked her towards him n looked straight at her) acha tu kyun dekh rahi thi iss ghar ko iss tarha ..bolo geet ...aise jaise abhi maa chalet huye aayegi andar se aur humien andar le jayegi ..

geet looked at him shocked ..n now she could feel the pain oozing out in his eyes ..

mien jaanta hoon asaan nahi hai geet ...mere liye bhi nahi tha .. jab dad pehli baar ghar lekar aaye tu ..par tumhare paas unki yaadien hain ..mere paas tu sirf ehsaas tha ..sirf kuch parchaaiyaan ..kuch awaazien jo kis ki hain mien aaj bhi nahi jaanta ..tumhain tu sab yaad hai na ..sab iss ghar mien buhat saari yadien hain jo tum dobara jee sakti ho ..mat karo apne saath aisa ..andar chalo geet ..

the tears slipped from her eyes n she pleaded him) : plss mujhe jaane dijeye ..mujh se nahi huga ..plss ..mene kabhi iss ghar ko maa aur bade papa ke bina nahi dekha ..mien nahi dekh paongi maan ..(she looked at him with her eyes full of tears).. pls jaane dijeye mujhe ..

maan knew it would be difficult to handle her but now seeing her so broken it pained him ..n now at this moment he knew y he could relate to her in Mumbai ...it was this pain they share mutually ..the lose of thr parents ..n emptiness within them ...everything is just the same ..he knew the girl crying in his arms is broken n shattered just as much as he was after the accident ...blank to feel an unknown void in himself n not knowing what to do ..maan never shared his feelings about his mother to anyone ..but today it was inevitable ..he never knew he could say that to a girl he just met ..but he did n he completely understand her plight ..even he use to see blur images of people when he came to KM from hospital ..the memories he can neither remember completely nor he can forget them ...voices calling his name ..but he can't recognize them ..but geet she can remember all of it n still can't have it ...

u can't decide what's more painful knowing what u have lost n feeling the void of that or not knowing what u have lost n still feeling a void in urself ..

before maan could think more or geet could continue crying in maan's embrace ..guard came n said about aniee calling them both in ..n maan asked him to put it on speaker ..

aniee : geet ..bhaiya ..pls jaldi se ghar ke andar aajao ..

geet looked at the phone with teary eyes n maan looked at geet ..n wiped her tears ..

ghar chalien geet ..😳

geet looked at him n another tear trail left her eyes while maan circled her in his embrace n took her towards the entrance ..n they both stepped in together ..geet looked at maan with teary hazel almonds while he kept looking ahead ..n when she turned her face she saw dadi maa n aniee standing at the entrance of back side of mansion what she remembered n when she saw in opposite side in was a vast lawn n a very beautifully decorated one but glancing at that side of mansion she guessed it was now close n not in use ..confused she stopped n thr n maan sensing her rigid body stopped n dadi maa observing geet knew what she was thinking n handing over the thali to nakul came ahead with aniee ..

dadi : geet bete ...accident ke baad jab yash maan ko lekar vacations par gaye thay tou unhoon ne mansion ko renovate karwa kar uss waqt mansion ka jo side humare use mien tha usko close kardiya tha aur back side ko humhare liye theek karwaya tha ...iss hi liye yeh sab itna change lag raha hai ...

geet looked at her blank at first but then glanced around n saw maan had taken her to an entirely opposite direction this use to be thr backyard ..where they use to have thr family functions ...n other parties this area use to be closed n un-used at that time ..tears fell from her eyes n maan looked away knowing it was his bad health due to in-numerable attacks n his constant tries to remember about his past that led his father to change this house completely so he won't have to stress himself ...aniee stood thr tensed n cursed herself to have been so excited in the car ...geet must have so nervous n she kept talking all the way ..maan looked at geet n saw her looking at the back side of the mansion ...inhaling some air he controlled his emotions n offered ..

geet ..agar tum chaho tu hum back side se andar jaa sakte hain ..

geet looked at him with teary hazel duo ..confused if that would be a good decision ...her heart wanted to relive all those years again but her mind stopped her ..u won't be able to handle that ...she continued looking at her home while dadi whispered in maan's ears ..

maan aap yeh kya kar rahe hain ...aap jante hain na yash ne yeh renovation apke liye kar waya tha ...

dadi maa ...13 saal apne mere bare mien soch kar mujh se sachai chupai ..abb waqt hai k mien geet k bare mien sochoon ...uska unn yadoon ka samna karna zarori hai ...aur shayad mera bhi ..

he turned n saw aniee trying wipe geet's tear which didn't seem to stop n maan as if knowing geet's heart called nakul n asked him to get the keys ..

finally the moment was here ..she avoided it for last 2 years n now she was about to step in her home ..its been 13 years she was last here ..n still every memory is fresh in her mind ..her maa calling her name before she left for school leaving her milk half ..her bade papa defending him ...she smiled with tears in her eyes ..n maan came to her side n she stepped in the now dusty hall which in some day use to be her world ..

maan had to keep his mind very focused ..he didn't knew how geet is going to react ..she may run back outside of this house ...or may be not ..

seeing her still looking at every corner was so frightening ..n then she moved ahead ..

a corner where toys were set in a cupboard ..she opened the lock n took out a doll ...geet almost lost control on her body n fell down while maan held her n put her down carefully while she cried clutching the doll ...maan couldn't see her like that ...every sob of hers' made him aware of how much pain she had been enduring alone all these years ,.. he bent sown beside her ..n she said sobbing hard ..

bade ...bade papa ne mujhe gift kit hi yeh ...meri ...meri doll ..

geet turned her face to him n they both stared at each other with same pain mirroring in thr eyes ..

sab kuch sambhal kar rakha unhoon ne ...sab 😭

her face fell on maan's shoulder n he naturally held her closer ..

it wasn't a lover's hug but two people who shared a very strong bond ...a bond that may be wasn't out of love but it developed out of pain ...pain to have lost thr parents ..pain to have lost thr identity ...pain to have lost thr world ..pain to have been forced to live alone ...pain to have been apart when they were the only one who could support each other ...a companion of childhood that they both lost ...

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PART 22

Aniee : dadi maa ...maan bhai ne mujhe kyun rok diya unke saath jane se .. mujhe geet ke saath rehna tha ..

Dadi (tensed) : beta aapko dust se allergy hai na ...aur wahan kitni dust hugi ...iss hi liye maan ne aapko wapis bheja ..

Aniee : par geet ..usko kaise bhai akele sambhaal payenge ...

Dadi (st) : geet tu agar maan ne sambhal bhi liya ..tu wahan unsab pictures n yadoon k beech maan khud ko kaise sambhalenge ..?? itne saal hugaye ..abb tu un parchaiyoon ne maan ka pecha chora tha ...aura bb phir maan wahin .. babaji mehr karna ..

Aniee (st) : dadi maa akele kuch nai kar payengi ...mujhe prem bhai ko call karni hi hugi ...now that geet is back in KM ..mien usko wapis nahi jaane dungi ..

Dadi maa sat thr tensed while aniee left to call back in London to call prem ..

On the other hand ..maan was experiencing severe headache due to the continuous blur flashes he was seeing in the house n the voices screaming in his head ...they both were standing in front of the big wall having lots n lots of pictures ..n every picture seems alien to maan whereas geet continued caressing them as if she could feel those memories and those moments all over again ..maan tried to remember any of it but couldn't n geet's tears never stopped remembering the way preetie use to tell her about thr happy times n all these memories ..

N all of a sudden geet started saying to herself .. caressing each pic ..

Thr was one having maan in mohinder n rano's arm ..

Yeh aapki first day school ki pic hai ...

Then thr was one having him prem arjun n geet ..

N yeh meri ...first day school ..prem bhai n arjun bhi aaye thay humare saath jaane ..

Yeh dekho ...maa ne first time cake bake kiya tha ...mene apni cls mien art competition win kiya tha n u had got full marks in maths ..

Geet caressed that pic with her glassy eyes ..she tried to mave forward towards the wall but stumbled on her injured foot while maan held her close not letting her hurt herself anymore ...but the truth was ..they both were hurt ..hurt with the realization of what they have lost in thr life ...what they will never gain no matter what ...the love ..the care ...the affection of thr parents no matter what will never be felt again ...

Geet cried in his arms helplessly while maan held her close trying not to fall week at this moment ...

he couldn't ...apart of him didn't knew how to express ...n a part of him didn't understand how to say things he feel .. n at this moment hearing geet it was difficult hold it in himself ...it was so difficult not share how the feeling is exactly mutual ..n thr she gave words to his thoughts

Kitni choti choti si jeet thi ...magar aisa lagta tha jaise poora jahan jeet liya ho ... par abb ...abb kuch bhi pehle jaise nahi huga ...koi bhi jeet who khushi nahi deti ..

Maan looked up with a teary eyes looking at the portrait of his parents holding thr 3 children together ...smiling at thr victory ...n said in a trance ..

Kyun har kamyabi adhori hai ..bina papa k wishes ke ...bina maa ke cake ke ... kitni hi bari victory kyun na hu ..sab adhora sa reh jata hai ..kyun prem ki tarha mere paas koi maa nahi hai jo ghar aate hi mujhe gale se laga kar apni khushi se meri khushi ko dugna karde ..kyun aaj dad nahi hai jin ki aankhoon mien apne liye proud dekh kar mien apne aap proud kar sakoon .. poori dunya ki wishes bhi kam par jaati hain ...kyun jin se hum sunna chahte hainn wohh kabhi nahi bolenge ..

Maan looked down n before he could feel it ...geet was wiping away his tears ..he looked at her in surprise n found the pain mirroring in her eyes .. he couldn't stop himself from hugging her ..n neither could she ..they didn't needed words to sooth thr ache ...they knew the wound is far more deeper than that ...but oddly or probably naturally thr silence was enough to sooth the aching heart ...coz now thr was someone how knew ...someone hoe understand how much it pains to not being able to hug ur maa on ur convocation day when u stand alone on ur first day at office n ur dad is not thr to ease ur nerves ..someone how know how painful it is to sleep by ur own self after a nightmare ...coz no matter what nobody can be ur father n no one else in this whole world can take place of ur mother for u .. coz no one else can understand ur fear without u saying it other than ur mother ...n no one else can be a better motivator in ur life than ur father ..

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At night in KM

Aniee : listen please do something or anything I need to talk to Dr. Armaan Malik ...its really important for me n for him as well ...do something please Elsa ..

Elsa : madam I am helpless ...he is gone for a medical camp in countryside of london n thr is very bad network coverage in those areas during winters ..

Aniee : okie fine tell him to contact me as soon as he gets back ..n its urgent please try n contact him if u can ..

Elsa : ur name madam ..??

Aniee : anvesha khu... umm .. just anvesha ...okie please do that elsa ..

Just then maan entered in her room ..n saw her talking to someone looking very tensed ..

Maan : aniee ...(aniee turned shocked with his sudden arrival).. whats going on ..

Aniee : oh bhai ...aapne tu dara hi diya ...wohh mien Amy ki secretary se baat kar rahi thi elsa ...usko batana tha k geet wapis KM aagayi hai ... I m sure he'll fly back with the next flight ..

Maan : amy as in Armaan right ..?

Aniee : yes ..arman as in geet ka mere peeche chora huya bodyguard ...acha bhai ..gudya ne medicine li ..?? usne khana bhi sahi se nahi khaya ...

Maan (Smiled n circled her in his arms) : don't worry she'll be fine bacha medicine li hai usne dadi maa se n I m sure who subha tk uthne nahi wali so she'll be well by morning ...but now u need to sleep ..aaj k liye buhat stress hugaya ..

Aniee : bhai I don't think who soo payegi theek se ...actually mom ki death k baad bhi usko kaafi time tk nightmare aate thay ..n she use to wake up at the middle of the night ..uski waja se hi tu humien mid-night dinner ki adat huyi ..

Maan : u don't need to worry about it ..mien hoon na ..ill take care of her .. now u take rest n sleep well ..

Aniee : hmm ... n aap bhi ..aapke liye bhi buhat hectic tha na ..

Maan (smiled n kissed her forehead) : I will ...good night

Aniee (smiled back n hugged him tight before leaving) : good night bhai ..

Maan left relaxed that the awful mood of geet didn't affected aniee much ...may be she understood after all ...he just hoped geet would be in a better state in the morning ..facing all those memories wasn't easy for any of them ..but the pain killers forced her to sleep ...n now he went to his room..

It was past 12am ...after checking his office mails ..n important files maan was almost ready to sleep... he closed his eyes but instead of sleep thr were again those nightmares that he got over years back ... sound of a woman calling his name ...few children running around n his father asking for gudya ..maan sat up sweating not being able to handle it all ...now that he knew how they all were n what those blur flashes must be ...it pained him even more that he don't remember people who loved him so dearly ...rano maa n mohinder uncle ..

n just then he remembered aniee's words about geet having nightmare he jerked the quilt off him n went to check on geet ...only to find her bed empty .. panic striked him with full force ..he didn't knew what to do at first thr were millions of things coming in his head ...she must have gone back to handa haveli was the worst n he jogged down to the hall n dialed the extension to the main gate n asked the guards about geet ..

jee sir hum ne abhi unko mansion ki back side par jaate dekha hai ..

n he knew geet must have gone back to those memories ..it had been so difficult to drag her out in the evening n this wasn't surprising but what worried maan was her hurt foot ..she couldn't walk all the way to thr ...maan was angry at the stupidity of geet but most of all tensed n worried for her ..she must be in pain ..was all he was thinking when he got to the entrance of back side n saw the giant doors slightly open ..he walked in n saw all the cloths from the sofas were off on the ground ...lights were onn of the grand hall ..the whole place looked so much more warm then the portion they lived in now ...it almost felt as if he had stepped into a different house ...well may be ..coz this side was decorated by his own mother ..with all her love n affection whereas the place he live in was done by interior designer for whom it was nothing more than a house ..but this was home ..he felt home ..the warmth vibrated from every corner ..he looked ahead n saw the lights of the upper floor illuminating it as well ..he walked up n stumbled on the carpet ..his worry increased thinking if geet would have also stumbled her foot was already hurt ..n then he heard someone sobbing hard ..his heart clutched in pain hearing geet cry out loud ..n he ran towards the last room of the corridor ..n stood frozen ..

the room looked heavenly in the moonlight just that the princess crying in thr sitting by the window made his heart bleed ..it was one huge room shinning in the shades of purple white n pink ..one look he knew his father had selected the best room for his favorite child ...no doubt it was geet's room.. but surely she never had cried this much in this place ever ..maan really didn't had the strength to walk upto her n calm her ..the way she was crying was so painful he never knew he could feel so damn hurt seeing someone else cry ...but he was ...he was feeling like needles were pierced in his heart straight ..

somehow just somehow he walked upto her ...may be coz he couldn't see her cry anymore or may be coz he couldn't handle the pain in his heart anymore ..he caressed geet's head lovingly praying that this would calm her but it didn't instead she turned to him n cried even more ..maan looked down not being able to understand what he could say to this girl ..n held her close to him that's when he saw geet was holding on to an album ..n a picture of her with yash fell out from that ..he couldn't forgive himself to have left her in London at yash's funeral ...may be then the pain she is experiencing now would have been somewhat bearable or at least he would have been less guiltier .. geet cried clutching his shoulder ..she had a nightmare n she ran to this place where she could feel her maa's love n her bade papa's care ..she didn't remember her parents at all ..but she never let herself forget those memories she had with yash n preetie even if she was too small ..everyday she read preetie's diary n asked preetie about thr time back in india ...she never let go of those memories n here she is remembering every moment she spent in this house ..even if she did forgot some bits over the years everything was now rememorized again ...n the pain was also fresh n as unbearable as it was 13 years back when she heard about preetie's death ..it always was n now being here it made it impossible to control her tears ..

maan tried to clam her saying things in bits n pieces forming sentences were difficult but he tried n then geet said something that ripped him apart ..

Geet (crying in his embrace sobbing hard she pleaded like a child in between) : maan plss aap ...aap meri har baat mante hu na ...meri har zid poori ki hai aapne ..ek ...ek aur kardo ..

Maan : han ...han bolo geet ...

Geet : plss bas ek bar ...ek baar ..maa aur bade papa ko wapis laa do ..plss bas ek baar ...mujhe ek baar un se milna hai ...plsss mien kuch nahi mangongi uske baad kabhi bhi nahi ...but ek baar ...😭😭 (maan held her in his embrace n his own tears spilled out hearing her plead so innocently n painfully)..

The innocent plead n tear filled eyes had so much pain that it shook him ..he didn't knew what to say when he is the only one to be blamed coz of whom she couldn't even see her bade papa for the last time ..

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hi all, thnxx for ur likes n appreciation on the last part however due to my late latifee the thread has been closed ..🤢🤢🤢 so here with a new one

doubles updates here ...😃 hope u will enjoy not really satisfied with my writing but its been almost 6 months i have written any story so will take time to get in flow i guess ..😭😭 its my semester break so will be updating often ...😉 n this one will be updated again in a few days ... 😃 😳

its 2am here ...ill pm tomorrow ..soveyyy 🤢

🤗 🥳n BELATED HAPPY NEW YEAR 🤗 🥳

may this year brings lots n lots of happiness for u awl ...

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luv ya

sobia

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow u r back happy new year n thnx 4 updating this story

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Posted: 10 years ago

WELCOME BACK

beautiful n emotional update loved it

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sobia it was very painful. Maaneet are in so much pain. Geet can't able to overcome from her past and remembering that beautiful part where she was living with her ma and bade papa. Maan is also in pain as he can able to remember those moment which he forget in accident. They both are bearing lot of pain and the cure of this pain is only they are themselves. They both only can erase all pain Beau g with each other. Waiting for next dear