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Julie

@4ever4love

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Chapter 5. Maan.

I knew that was a dream! It just had to be!

But it tells me that though Maan is the silent type - as described by everyone so far - there is another side to him.

Once he opens up to Geet, I think this lighter, naughtier side to him will come out.

I like the progression we get to see of how Maan manages to gain respect from the ppl who work for him now.

I find it funny that Maan also has conversations with Geet in his head! Too cute!

Pls post more!!!!

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: Vinsh23

yeahhh m dancingg :****

OK... Thank you...
I am also very excited to read further parts

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 10 years ago

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anmirza

@anmirza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

OmG I m loving it

I think I m gonna like it more than Teri umeed but let's see ;-)

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achu66

@achu66

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Thank you so much avi for re-posting this story... Thanks for the pm.

Wonderful parts avi. Chapt.1 is confusing one. Dev is in love but with whom...?? But that confusion ended in next chapters. So dev is in love with naintara not with geet. Dev got slap from naintara. But i like the description about her. So maan misunderstood that dev is in love with geet. Hope this misunderstanding will be solve soon. Loved the way maaneet talking with each other in their imagination. It was cute. Waiting for next parts...

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Vinsh23

@Vinsh23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

hiii...
nybody dere??

chlo finally thurs left..
friday ko nxt update,..
yeah yeah yeah .. :D

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suni_104

@suni_104

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

all chapters was

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893213

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: priya111111
😡mujhe nahi bheji pm

katti tumse

bheji thi

tum sab ko bheji thi

koi nahi aaya😭

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Prologue

Thats so painful a start I would say...seeming as it is Maan in pain...nnaaa i hate😡...well can't help it love him way too much😛

Dev and her, this her is Geet??...i hope not but I guess my wish is too good to be true😆...already eager to know more so am off to read😳

Edited by Cherishh - 10 years ago

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#359

Part-1

Yours is really a diff way of writing...its kinda refreshing to read👍🏼

More than knowing about Dev...I am interested in his lady love, sounds an interesting character...seems like a very strong personality who has seen a lot in her life (hope i am right :p) and wants and believes in being independent and living on her terms...always love a girl so strong minded yet respectful

Dev a happy go lucky guy as always we see, but he falling for a girl so different is in itself a surprise and to top it making her love him surely not easy...i wonder how he got his love in his life