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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 13
Yay!! Geet gets a Warrior Princess in Shining Armour!! She is so innocent to know the ways of the wicked world. Thank babaji for Tara and her timely intervention.
Even the detached and aloof Tara cannot help but step in to protect her.

I love her ways of dealing with lechs!! Beware guys, this is a girl who is no distressed damsel, she knows to break your bones if you cross her!


Rule-i-pedia makes a reapparence as the green monster rises!!

Yeh Dev kitna kaamchor hai!! Simply waltes in and takes credit for her work!! Devu baby, the tigress is gonna claew you face someday!!

The catfight between Zarin and Tara was fabulous. Tara dear, while you are at it, teach Geet some tricks of the trade! I would be lovely to see her snarl at female population, being protective for Maan.

Ah... Dev kaam karliya kar kabhi!!

Dadima's expert eyes caught Dev's negligence and Tara's hard work paid off!! Now she is gonna get her due credit.

And Dev is protective of his friend. Atleat Dadi ne kisi ko toh isse behan bulwaya.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 14
First of all the song selection was wonderful!! Ye Munda waise bhi apni 1920s style love story ko 1960s ke love songs se aage badha raha hai!! By the time ye jaake propose karegaa, Dev apne grandsons ke saath khel raha hoga!!
( * I do not mean to offend you dear, I really enjoy their love story, just doing some masti*)

Was the biker guy Geet saw from terrace Maan? And Munda is couriering her notes daily. I am sur Geet ke liye extra-precision se banata hoga!! Geet also misses him.

The bond and love between Darji and Geet is so palpable and poignant...
Geet confesses her part time job and Darji is sad. You will tide over dearies.
Geet's declaration that he is her darji and only for her was wonderful!!

Maan decides to join for the trip on Adi's insistence as now he knows that Geet is coming. I wish he had told about his feelings to Adi, he would have been saved from so many heartbreaks and hurts to come!!

Awiee!! He showed off with his bike stunts infront of Geet!! Cool.
It warms my heart when shows up his naughty side, a reminder of a Maan before the tragedies struck!!

His joy at simply being near her and spending some days in her presence was beautiful!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 15
Oyye Kabir!! 😡 😡 (* Full Brij style*)
What do you know of Maan?? Think a second before you pass judgements on my Munda!! I am gonna dive into the story and wring your neck!!

Maan...my sweetheart!! He starts writing in his diary!! I adore how he respects her, guards her identity ven in his diary until she accepts him. What a noble thought! (*Dont know whether to give him brownie points or to bang his head on the nearest wall to stop wasting time and go confess*)

And he is the one commenting on Adi's love story. Atleast Adi ne apni love ki scooter toh chalai. Aap toh bailgadi ko rok ke khade hai Mr. Maan. And you trying to make Adi bold and trying to make him fess up. Thats rich, coming from you!!(* See Munda is driving me crazy now*)

And Adi is so cute ; he fell for the girl who bullied him. And Maan is even cuter, mentally willing Pinky to lose weight so that he could continue his staring sessions. Dude, bol de and then you 4 can go on double dates.

Wish Ms. Iyer had missed the bus!!

Oh! They spend sometime together. And talk of melodrama and overreaction+- Maan's teeenage self is filled with them. Chotti chotti baato pe bada bada ego!!

Even Babaji granted a chance to the two hopeless people. Atleast he spoke to her for the very first time. This miment shall go down in history!! Maan is mesmerised and restless with her closeness. He even gives her a geigraphy lesson!
On the hill top, his misunderstandings clear and protectiveness ensues their closeness. He makes so many promises to himself at the moment. And his internal battle of guilt and regret shows the purity of his soul.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 16
Dev is again slacking off at work, trying to take over Tara's hardwork.
She refused and it his ego.
And the conference was a revelation!!
Yeh Dev toh seriously kamaal hai. I was reminded of my strategic management lessons. He is truly a strategic leader, twisting the game within seconds.
His chocolate building and playing at Chopra's weakness was brilliant. Some people are born to lead.

Tara agreed to be his junior. He has the skills afterall He got profits and publicity for the company in a single strole.
And now his beaten ego is taking Tara for a ride! He is hell bent on making her bend; makes her slog off at work, makes her wait endlessly, eats her lunch!! He is annoying her to the fullest. Also poor Tara is getting attracted towards him and so has stopped putting chillies in her lunch, her only possible revenge.

Tara is determined to not let him get to her. But the fates played their cards and brought him to her doorstep. He was shocked to see her all feminine and sexy. She was horrified to let him witness her in her chilled out attire.

And the sizzling encounter in the bathroom set the temperature soaring!!


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Chapter 17
Geet is elated to be joining the trip with Pinky. Good that she finally has a friend!
My God!! She is so naive!! Ram milayi jodi hai Maan and Geet ki (*or shall I say Avi milayi*)
Woh kuch bolta nahi and ye kuch samajhta nahi...

She sees Maan joining them for the trip. Dear, you underestimate yourself; he has spent every waking miloment thinking of you and every sleeping moment dreaming of you. She drools over him whilst he dips in the water. Quite creative with Maan's description you are!! She was disgusted with the girl who collided with Maan...

Ah.. The cable car ride! His voice sooths her, helps her to elevate fears. And then the bump... She is all apprehensive about being close to him and he is fighting his ego.
'Ek taraf husn hai tanha tanha;
Ek taraf ishq hai ruswa ruswa".

At the hilltop, Geet is mesmerised by the view of paradise. Such a sweet girl, she never forgets her darji.
The song selection is amazing!! Maan protects her from the rogues as they ride down the hill. He is enthralled by her features and spends the entire ride gazing at her.

I would say that at this point of time, Geet is simply exploring her feelings towards him while he is diving into the oceaan of love. She is trying to curb her attraction and burry her feelings while he already considers her as his beginning and end.

She inquires about the guy who sends her the notes. Thank God for Pinky's smartness otherwise that idiot Kabir would have taken the credit. Geet talks to Maan for the first time, another historical moment , and his reaction is priceless.

He enjoys the ride back home. The earing moment was beautiful.. And finally he says a 'Hi'.

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