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icskwt

@icskwt

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#341

Thanks Avi for reposting this story... Hate re jhatka laga first part pardhte he ki yeah kaya ho gaya...he larke na has kuch na sochne latte hain...

And the second part also start with suspance about Dev view...you know Avi.. You know how to kill sweatly...

Dad I bhi geet ki dewani gain...but I love their bonding...

Thank God ki kuch to confusion dour hue ki geet maan we aur Dev Tara we payar Marta hai...lakin yeh Maya dono ne abhi take confess nahi kiya??????and Avi Maya yeh story past and present dono main chalo rahi hai kaya??????? As maan have to go to collage after office..

Thanks again Avi for this story and PM...

Do continue soon...

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RIYA

@RA17

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#342

hey avi thanks for new year gift sweetie🤗

but you know me busy in my own wedding😳

so i will be soon reading n posting but it may be march or so as right now i will focus on teri umeed as n when i get time n will come on TL later

hope you understand

n do let me know thru PM so that we can further discuss⭐️

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rost

@rost

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#343

Chapter 3. Naintara's first day of work. The bus journey was amazing. Guys like these need to be taught a lesson. Liking this Naintara a lot. She has a sad past. I hope she's come out unscathed. But she's got a strong character. Imagine hitting your boss on the first day, although unknowingly. It's gonna be fun.

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: RA17
hey avi thanks for new year gift sweetie🤗
but you know me busy in my own wedding😳

so i will be soon reading n posting but it may be march or so as right now i will focus on teri umeed as n when i get time n will come on TL later
hope you understand

n do let me know thru PM so that we can further discuss⭐️

Congratulations dear😃

Wish you a happy love filled married life🥳

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#345

😡mujhe nahi bheji pm

katti tumse

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#346

Prologue.

Oh that was sad! I could feel the pain of the heartbreak.

The background setting has been set very well. Two years apart, but 'he' always thought about 'her'. And now ... this pain.

Twin brother? Dev. Are they identical? Is Dev evil?

Off to read chapter one. I will be back.

OH! I loved the song!

Edited by 4ever4love - 10 years ago

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#347

Chapter one: Dev.

I am so conflicted. 😭

All through reading the first chapter, a part of my brain kept praying that Dev was talking about Naintara and not Geet.

But at the same time, I like the description of this person. Confident, strong and smart.

And oh yes, it looks like Dev is not evil. He really is in love.

But with whom?????

Next chapter ...

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#348

chapter two. Savitri devi.

OK, you are really a good writer. You build the scenes so well.

As a reader, I can get a very clear view of daddi's character. And you managed to give us a large part of the Khurrana history.

well done.

Having the photos as a guide, we learn about the family, the happiness and the loss. We learn more about Maan and Dev and how they dealt with the loss.

And my heart is breaking again for Maan. He lost his mother and now he may have lost his love. 💔

Where is Geet???

I am relieved that Geet was mentioned here! I was starting to wonder where she was.

Ok so Geet came into their lives two years ago but Maan was leaving for London two years ago. Was there a friendship? a love not yet declared?

So many questions!!!

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#349

chapter 3: first day of work.

seriously! The entire chapter I was trying to figure out who the heck is this woman and you tell me at the END? You have an evil streak in you don't you??? 😈

OMG. Naintara? But I always hate this woman in other stories. You actually have me admiring this person!

Good grief, what other shocks are coming my way?

Now if Naintara is so ... hmm, amazing, then what do you have in store for Geet???