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maansi25

@maansi25

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Ch 1

Nice intro

Ch 2

Briefing of dadima

Very nice

Ch 3

Tara dreaming about Dev

Sherni in the bus and slapping dev her boss

Ch 4

About geet

Maan ke baare me sochti hui

Ch 5

Maan geet ke khayalo me

Nice into of all five

😃

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Sandhya

@true825

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Posted: 10 years ago

#372

eagerly waiting for the next parts...

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rost

@rost

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Chapter 4. Hayee , Geet has read Maans diary so she knows his feelings for her which he has never been able to express in words, but his eyes always convey them to her. She is working as dadima's PA. Waiting for their story to move ahead.

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

It's always a treat to read your works.

Naina is one of my favorite character of this story.

Her determination and willpower make me fond of the character.

Thanks for the effort you take.

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SRK

@KINGKHANFAN

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Wonderful parts.
Reading the story all over again.
Loving it a lot.
Waiting for more.

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vspl

@vspl

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

Hi
ch 3
the bold and the beautiful naintara intro is nice
ch 4
this part is as innocent,sweet n beautiful as geet
cleared all my confusions in the previous updates
ch 5
maan day dreaming about geet in the middle of presentation
the songs r awesome
fabulous writting
thanks

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aachal20

@aachal20

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

hey plz don't stop posting it.

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aachal20

@aachal20

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

hey are you not happy with my comments if not then don't worry I'm commenting on each chapter seperately.first of all prologue is amazing.maan come back after 2 years and the start of missunderstanding.like dadima,dev and geet bonding.amazing start of story

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aachal20

@aachal20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#379

chapter 1 love devs pov his thoughts on maan as brother and then his thoughts on himself and naimtara is very good.got to know lot about his character.

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aachal20

@aachal20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#380

chapter 2 savitrydevi aka dadimas pov about geet and maan and her thoughts on her family and how much she love and adore them.the love for her grandsons and also for anni is shown.love her.and also love maans parents song and also dadima understand maan is sad and there is some problem.

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