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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#251

Dear i am fida over your writing...
How beautifully u have explained maan's dream...
Such a beautiful words...
Maan dream sequence of their future dance was really superb...
And over that.. The way u have described is simply amazing...
The choice of words you have used are mind blowing...

And even after the tiring day he is so keen to meet her...
Oh good it is such a wonderful feeling...
Will be waiting for next set of updates

Thank you...

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Please don't stop posting the chapters 😭 I'm loving the story

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#253

Part 1

I kinda fell in love with Dev's character in this part, a young carefree flirt guy chained by an arrogant strong headed nd disciplined woman who eventually fell in love with her nd changed himself to be a more responsible guy...

The happy twin want to share his happiness with his sad, heartbroken serious bro who has shut himself in the closed walls of his rooms, thanx to his misunderstanding about his beloved nd his bro...now this little misunderstanding will go a long way till both of them will not get united...

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shree2

@shree2

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#254

Nice Prologue. Eager to know what happen in the KM that makes Maan sad😲 .

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shree2

@shree2

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#255

Part 1

Liked Dev's personality and his love interest. Waiting to know more about his love and the girl who captured his heart 😛.

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#256

I have yet to read the chapters but I read your note. I will be back tomorrow to read, to like and to comment - more than 2 lines!

It's close to 2AM here so I better get to bed or get yelled at! 😃

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#257

Hey..

Have been doing stuff for MG anniversary.. just checking ffs now.. will read this and comment soon .. please bear with my delay...

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NoshiMaaneet

@NoshiMaaneet

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#258

Avi i didn't get the pm :( i can't comment if i don't have access to it 😭

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shree2

@shree2

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#259

Part 2

Well Savitri Devi takes good care of both the company and their grand daughter/son's life eventhough she lost her son and dil in a car accident. Gudoos to her 👏.

It looks like Maan is missing his mom so much today.No one can able to replace his/her mom's love in this world⭐️.