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shree2

@shree2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Part 3

Its nice to see how Hrithik transfromed to Dev in NT's dream. Oh NT hate male population forever, i wonder what will be the reason for it. Is she have some bad past with males?.

I love Naintara's postive energy to fight against all odds, specially the way that she treated the man who misbehaved with her in the bus👏.

Poor Dev got slap on the first day of his work.

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sasi

@ksasi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Chapter 1: nooo not dev n feet that's my reaction when I read first chapter.

2: its heart wrenching to know about past.

3: loved dev's personality.

4: now the Tara in this chapter is fire brand n i loved the character.

5: now I know the love story is between dev Tara n maan feet.

Waiting for next parts.

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shree2

@shree2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Part 4

Geet read Maan's Diary... wow interesting...

But poor Maan misunderstand the trio's happiness to something else😕.

Hope they clear this misunderstanding soon...

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rost

@rost

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Prologue and chapter 1. Poor Maan, he has seen Geet and Dev together and misunderstood the whole thing. Especially after seeing dadi blessing them. Naturally he would want to leave from there.
Dev is also in love. She has had a very positive effect on him. He has learned to work hard just to please her. Waiting for their love story to progress.

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rost

@rost

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Chapter 2. Dadi as always, is a strong character. Loved the bond Maan shared with his mom. Dadi could make out something was not right with Maan just as his mother could. Liking Dev's character also. Loving the whole feel of this wonderful ff.

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

OMG no wonder you have kept this story of yours password protected !!!

I will not divide these 5 parts into different chapters but comment as one cause I do not remember when the next one started.

Dev and NT are firecrackers of this story ,am I right ?Geet and Maan are so shy and cute .Dadaima as always pillar of her family

Maan as mama's boy !!!

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shree2

@shree2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

Part 5

Poor Maan day dreaming about Geet in his office 😉.

Wish to see his dance with his love soon.

Thanks for the PM. I have read all the 5 chapters and enjoyed ur story a lot 😛.

Edited by shree2 - 10 years ago

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Hi avi! Thanks for pm and pw

Sorry for extremely delayed comment...life mein itna kuch ho raha hai ki update padh hi nahi payi toh comments toh dur ki baat hai...

Anyway, aapne eksaath 5 parts de diye!!! Aur padhna suru kiya aur confuse ho gayi ki prologue toh do baar padha 😆...bhir bhi puri tarha se samjh nahi payi😆

Prologue

I love the style of story.

Dadi, dev ko blessing de rahi hai...dev ke saath jo bhi ladki thi usse dekhkar maan ko kuch achha nahi laga aur woh headache ka bahana bana kar apne room mein chala jaata hai...

Yellow flowers aur dairy usse kisiki yaad dilate hai...jisse woh chaar saalo se jaanta hai!!

Pyaar manga hai tum hi se...jast awesome!!!

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

Part 1

Dev fun loving and shidha sada lagta hai...kuch baat pe woh kush lagta hai aur maan ko batana chahta hai par maan apne room mein chala gaya...

Lagta hai ki dev ki girlfriend strong headed hai...uss ke apne rules hai aur usse koi tod nahi sakta...woh powerful hai...love this girl!! Liking her very much without even knowing her full personality...

Aapka dev dusre sab ff ke dev se alag hai...positive lagta hai...

Tumhi dekho na...loved it!!

Edited by sheetalvasa - 10 years ago