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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: Nosheen4MAANEET
Avi i didn't get the pm :( i can't comment if i don't have access to it 😭

your inbox is full
please delete some messages and then send me a pm

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insight555

@insight555

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

Part 2

You have beautifully described Dadi's character in this one...the love nd worries of a grandmother for her grandsons is what keeping her awake at night...Dadima could easily guess that her ever so quiet grandson is painfully quiet nd disturbed after his return from abroad...

Loved the entire description of Maan as Mamma's boy nd the beautiful moments he shared with his parents...

Now going to the next part...

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ReelyROSExx

@ReelyROSExx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

Thnks for the Pm

Prologue :

So Maan is Heart broken seeing the "Girl " with Dev

Her memories suffocating him ,,,,,,, Is the Girl Geet ??? Or someone else ??

CHAPTER 1

Maan n Dev are twin brothers ...with Maan being more introvert and responsible one

so Dev is the easy going fun guy ... But his lady love ( Whoevr it is ..) sounds pretty scary :P

he s Bubbling with happiness ... Hm... So she s gone to speak wid her parents

CHAPTER 2

So Finally Geet s name comes out ... Is Dev n Geet actually together

Dadi seems really fond of Geet

they both lost their Parents at small age .. N Dadi took care of both of em

Maans bond with his parents was written soo beautifully ... the last part was really emotional .

Maan s heart broken

CHAPTER 3

ur starting was really Mysterious ...makes us guess the chara

reading the first 2 chapters I thot this was going to be a triangular love story with heart breaks n stuff

U have no Idea how much relief the name Naintara bought me at the end of this chapt

Naintara s character is a bombshell😆 . a strongwilled young girl ... Definitely not a person to mess up with :P

CHAPTER 4

N here comes our Cutie pie Geet ..her self talks are sooo damn cute

So both had feelings for eachtoher during college days

After Maan left ... Geet joined as PA of Dadi ...

So Maan is misunderstanding ( does this guy evr think prprly ... Bechari Geet )

Naughty Geet read Maan s feelings ( which he s goin to obviously deny now )

Geet shares a great bond with each of the family member

CHAPTER 5

Lol ... Maan day dreaming abt Geet :P n trying to cover up his act

so Back to his strict boss mode

Loved ur song selesctions for each chapter

waiting eagerly for next chapters

Edited by DAZZLINDD - 10 years ago

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SonalikaSingh

@SonalikaSingh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

The prologue is so painful...it breaks my heart to see our silent maan suffering

1) Dev is as usual the star of the show. it is the rule of nature...when one is happy, the other is sad for the same reason. in this situation dev is happy bcoz his tara is finally going to be officially his and maan is sad bcoz he thinks geet is in love with dev

2) the character of tara in the story is simply super... just like a female maan singh khurana...all power and glory and independence

3) the character of geet is sooo sweeet. Her shy nature, her blabber, her beauty..everything to die for...no wonder our shy maan is fida

4) the character of maan is unique in itself...a slient and loving man who is not able to express for so long.

5) the description of the office meeting scene in the conference room is hilarious -----offence is the best defence😛😛😛

i so wanted to read this story again...in one go. never mind we can read in long leaps like this. i thought that i had forgotten the intricacies of the story but just as i read these chapters i get that i have forgotten nothing😆😆😆

it is just so beautiful to forget. lov u avi.

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

Amazing updates!!!👏👏Maan and Dev are twins...Maan is introvert but Dev and Annie is extravert...they lost their parents at young age...Awww Dadima is so caring and lovely too...omg!!Maan MU Geet...poor soul...Loved her cute self talks...Dev is fall in love with Tara at first sight...Naintara dreams about Dev...Tara slapped Dev...poor Dev...Awesome songs...Loved it so much...waiting for the next update.Thanks for the PM dear😳

Edited by jayshu17 - 10 years ago

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

thank u for posting locket again and pm😃

maan came back and mu dev and geet relation😲

dadi sensed that something is wrong😊

tara slapped dev😲

update soon