THE LOCKET REPOSTED - COMPLETED - Page 25

I am busy right now since I am shifting to a new home. So haven't been able to read The Locket yet. Hence, haven't commented. Will do so as and when I get to read. Please don't delete me from your buddy list.

all the 5 chapters were beautiful

cha1- dev seems to b fun loving n easy going guy. reading first chapter we think he loves geet but chapter 3 reveals it to b naintara

cha 2- dadi playing strong character. though she lost her husband son n daughter in law she managed to run a successful business n raised 3 children.
she knows how maan n his mother share a strong bond but could not fill that gap. but still maan is her favourite . raj n kiran are lovely couple. also nice song selection

cha3- so finally the strong headed girl is NAINTARA. poor dev got slapped . wondering about his plight when he will propose her.

cha4- geet our sweet jhalli who self talk is already in love with maan. dev n geet share a very healthy sibling bond.

cha5- confusing chapter. maan loves geet or someone else as in prologue he seems very much in pain.
in the previous chapters we witness how maan is very introvert burying his hurt pain in himself. he sacrifice himself so as dev can fulfill his dream to go to London


finally I love how each update is based on the different characters which helps us understand them more clearly

second chapter-it was a emotional part, they lost their parents at very young age n feeling more sad for maan.I think he is in pain so was playing piano after long time.

third chapter-so it was finally naintara whom dev loves,she hav some bad past that is why she is like this.

chapter four-finally it was revealed that geet is in love with maan,they are college friends. the whole narration is by geet she is happy maan is coming back.

chapter five-maan was also in love with geet then why he is in so much pain after returning from london.I think there is some misunderstanding .waiting desperately for next.Loved all the updates.

read all the chapters in one go

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Avi, thanks for sending me PM for TL, but I'm sorry as I cannot open the links in my cell phone cos of security issues so cannot comment either. So you decide if you want to send me PMs now or later cos I wont be able to open the links till I get my lappy back. Really sorry.

And yeah, if you are posting 5 chapters in one update then should I delete the links n passwords you gave to the readers who have already read TL? I have them all saved with me but I think I will have to delete them if they are invalid.

-Sanjana!

Yeah you should delete those

Part 4...
Geet's part is very superb dear..
As if a story is enfolding..
U just gave all the details through her...
I loved it...

Maan geet know each other from long...
From her talks it's clear that... Both had feelings from long..
But they are shy in nature... to confess any thing
I guessed while reading the prologue that some one has read that dairy...
Oh... so Dev carried her in excitement...
But our maan baba has misunderstood... Oh god...
Maan is worried and sad for nothing now

She is waiting for him to tell first... Wo tho hoga jab he will clear out mu..

I loved this part very much dear...

Originally posted by: dqno1

</div>Yeah you should delete those
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I changed the pwds when I took the story off

Take your time Sanjana

You have already done more than enough justice to my work for the Locket.

Your comments were unforgettable😃

I want to see how it feels for people to re-read it again

Is it boring or exciting?😃

I am waiting for that moment when you fall in love with them all over again😳

Okay. I have all links along with their passwords saved but I will delete it now.

And Avi, you shouldnt even question if re-reading TL is boring or exciting cos if it had been boring readers wouldnt have requested you to re-post it again. 😉

I have myself read the first 50 chapters again when I started to read the story after leaving it in middle and it had made me connect to the story all the more making me fall for each n every characters n its beautiful writing n all the songs you added to it.

TL is one of my faves.

-Sanjana!