New SS: Kya Wo Tum Ho?Updated Part 22 on Pg 104 23/9/2016 - Page 35

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churail lag rahi ho 😆
Quite a complement geet got on her engagement day 😆
And finally they reached at the venue
Waiting for the engagement now
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WOW!! beautiful dear...loved the update
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Part 2 -14
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Part 15:

Finally they reached the venue.

Maan got out and handed the keys to the valet.

He moved to the other side of the car and opened the door to Geet's side. He forwarded his hand.

Geet clasped his hand and came out.

She started adjusting her dupatta and the dress she was wearing.

Geet: Let's go

Maan: Geet ruko aik minute

Geet: Abh kya hai Maan, already dair ho gai hai...

Maan came forward and adjusted her maang tika which had moved away from it's original position.

Maan: abh theek hai

Geet: Thank you

Maan took her one hand in his while the other was at the small of her back.

Maan: Geet itni choti batao pay to tum blush karti ho, agaye kia ho gay jab fianc ban jaogi. Tabh to mujhe licence mil jaega sab kuch karne ka.

Maan smirked while saying.

Geet: App to business man nahi koi loafer hi hai,

Maan: Madam this shade is only for you to see and winked at her.

Geet laughed and then headed inside

There her dadi already was creating a scene.

Dadi: Maine to pehley hi kaha tha kay Geet ko aaj janay ki koi zarorat nahi. Par nahi meri to koi manta hi nahi. Arey mai keht ho beti ko itna parhane ki kya zarorat hai. Kal ko ghar ka kaam hi to karna hai...

Geet heard that part and got stiff. Maan could feel her getting stiff and didn't want her to get hurt.

Maan wanted to divert the attention

Maan: Good Evening!

Everyone there looked at the entrance. The two were looking extremely gorgeous complementing each other. Like they were meant to be each other's soul mate.

The black shirwani Maan was wearing and the sea green dress that Maan had sent her was accenting their beauty.

Ram: Lo agaye

Mohinder: Bus Maa

Maan came forward, supporting Geet.

Maan greeted her dadima and uttered

Maan: Dadiji, I am not here to defend Geet, But you should understand that girls now a days are in dire need of education and they have the talent to step equally as men. My Geet was one of the toppers in her class, and if she has the guts to go this then I am sure she will also excel in her other life. And even if she is not able to, I am there. A man and and lady are supposed to support each other in time of need.

Geet looked at him and smiled. What would a girl need now, a man's support all through her life. Maan was surely a God's gift to her and she was so happy to get a gem of a person in the form of her life partner.

Rano trying to divert the attention towards the purpose of gathering.

Rano: Chale aab dair nahi karte, Engagement function shuru karte hai. Already boht late hogaya hai.

Maira and Rano went to prepare the tray for the engagement rings.

Very soon both Maan and Geet stood opposite each other. Geet smiling unconsciously to him. Both their eyes playing hide and seek with each other.

Rano: Chalo Geet, put this ring in Maan's hand

Geet: ji Mom.

Geet extended her hand held his to put the ring in his ring finger.

She slowly put and smiled at him. Pictures were getting clicked in the meantime of this special occasion.

While Maira put forward the tray in front of Maan

Maan took the ring and put in her hands slowly, teasing her.

Maan winked at Yash and said

Maan: Mom, Geet ki finger kuch zada moti nahi hai

Maira: Maan

Maira said while rolling her eyes

Geet mouth turned a perfect O and she was pouting cutely.

Ram: Betay aab yahi hath tumharae relationship mai upper hoga. So sooch kay bolo...Ab mujhe hi dekh lo

Maira: Ram

Geet smiled at that.

Yash: Kyun nahi abh itni khusurat hai auntiji.

Maira smiled at Yash while Yash hugged her from back.

Rano and Mohinder laughed at that.

They were so happy that Geet was getting such a good family.

Geet tried removing her hand from his, while Maan bought her hand near and kissed it.

While the rest of the crowd was hooting, laughing. He whispered for only her to hear.

Maan: Haath to tumhara aab maine thaam liya hai, inti asani say nahi churu ga

And smirked at her

Meera came from back and hugged Geet

Meera: Congratulations Moti.

Geet smacked her hand away while Maan laughed at the sweet endearments Meera was bestowing her bestie with.

Geet just hugged.

Meera: Geet I am so happy for you and Jeej dare you let tears come in her eyes or else you will have to deal with me

Geet laughed at that

Maan: Abh to bach kay rahna parega yaar

While Yash came from back and heard Meera saying.

Yash: O hello, agar Geet nai Maan ko kuch kaha na to use Yash ka samna karna parega

Meera: Tumhe to mai baad mai dekh logi... jab say aye ho... tung kar kay rakha hai sab ko...

And here Maan and Geet were laughing at there war of words from their besties.

Later Meera smiled at both of them and congratulated Maan. While Yash hugged him.

Yash: I am sure she is the one for you.

Maan nodded and smiled.

Meera: Kya baat hai engagement function hai and no shor sharaba

Maan smiled at her

Meera and Yash started performing on several songs like radha teri chunri etc.

Later Meera came to Geet

Meera: Chal Geet, now ur turn.

She turned to Maan as well

Meera: Hello jeej

Maan: Hello saali ji

Geet blushed at that

Geet: Par mera pair

Meera didn't hear her

Meera: Commo'n Geet.

A slow song started playing and the dance floor started empting up so that the new couple could come.

Yash came from back and winked at Meera.

Maan understood that they had planned this song and then came to them.

Maan also knew that Geet would not be able to stand for long but he didn't want to draw attention to everyone as they would start getting tense and especially seeing her dadi taunting on everything.

Maan stood up and forwarded his hand to her. Geet got confused as she knew he knew her situation. Maan bliked his eyes in assurance.

Geet clasped his hand and they both moved to the dance floor.The lights dimed making the ambience.

Hmm.. hmm...

Maan put his one hand on her waist and the other hand her shoulder. While Geet copied him. They started swaying on the light music.

Dehleez pe mere dil ki

Jo rakhe hain tune kadam

Tere naam pe meri zindagi

Likh di mere humdum

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena

Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum

Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena

Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Old memories started coming as flashbacks, their first meet, his fb vedio, his text messages, his care right before the engagement.

Dehleez pe merey dil ki

Jo rakhe hain tune kadam

Tere naam pe meri zindagi

Likh di mere humdum

After a minute Maan realised that Geet is getting tired. He saw her bit her lip because of the pain in the ankle. Maan whispered in her ear.

Maan: Geet, keep your feet on top of my feet. It will give less pressure to yours.

Geet: I am fine Maan.

Maan: Tum nahi mano gi.

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena

Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum

Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena

Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

Maan jerked her towards himself which made her hands disabled on his shoulders and rested on his chest. While Maan snacked his hands at her back. Geet was forced to step on his feet. Her dress was long and due to the darkness no body was able to see her feet on top of his. Maan kept on swaying taking her weight. Gradually her stiff body relaxed and her arms moved caging his neck.

Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein

Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein

Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Both were smiling at eachother.

Geet: Sub kuch itna fairytalish lag raha hai na...

Maan smiled at his cutie angel who was still so innocent believing in fairy tales.

Geet: Sachi Maan. I always use to think Maan that fairy tales are delusional but seeing everything till today I am starting to believe them.

Jo tu mila to saji hain

Duniya meri humdum

O aasma mila zameen ko meri

Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum

Tere naam pe meri zindagi

Likh di mere humdum

Maan (self-thought): Geet abhi to boht kuch tumhe believe karna parega, Apni insecurities mujhe batana paregi take mai tumhe yakeen dila sakoo kay saab kuch possible hai. I know that only because of your insecurities you are like this and why not, in our country it is always like this where girls are always kept behind. I will make sure that you get what you deserve.

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena

Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum

Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena

Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum

Hmmm... hmmm..

Finally the song ended and everyone was called for dinner.


Note: So Finaly Engagemnet is done. I hope you all like it. Waiting for feedback and lots of likes..

Part 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/127578098

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update dear ... glad to see maan supported geet in every way ...
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nice ud
maan geet finally engaged and have
wonderful time yash meera aurgument
was nice
geet daadi was blaming mohinder fr letting geet study
maan told girls r also need to have higher education

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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update. Finally Maaneet r engaged . Waiting for the next part.
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Chalo engagement tho hogaya 😃
Ab aage ki bhi baate 😳

Waiting for the next😃
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Finally they are engaged

Loved the update

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