New SS: Kya Wo Tum Ho?Updated Part 22 on Pg 104 23/9/2016 - Page 33

Created

Last reply

Replies

535

Views

80.2k

Users

69

Likes

1.9k

Frequent Posters

maaneetsangel thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
awesome... Interesting..
Thanks for updating...
Continue soon...
Oh no her leg is injured on her special day ... So many problems...
but her hero is there at her service...
Hope they reach on time without much chaos...
tanubag thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Poor Geet her leg is injured and bcz of strike driver couldn't receive her so Maan gone their to receive her. Geet was amazed to see Maan's concern . She is falling for him.
Hanishadevi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely... Geet stuck at parlour n hurt herself.. Finally maan came fr her rescue n with his carrying side she is falling for him..
vrinda22 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice part
Maan came for geet n helping her
aparna3011 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
superb update
maan come to pick geet
yell at her as she is in pain but this time not her fault
maan taking care of geet which make her fall for him more
Avenging_Angel thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
read all parts in one go
its beautiful story...
loved all characters...
And it seems maaneets journey from strangers to soulmates...
awesome job dear loved it
Flame_of_Forest thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
loved the way they are progressing towards their relation..Geet realized it's not only his handsome face and charm but also his care for her she is falling for..and he is the right partner for her with whom she would like to spend her life..and Maan is also taking his right to scold for she hurt herself..
sanghita0000 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
WOW!! fantastic update dear...loved it
sparklingeyes11 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago

Part 14:

Maan tried to divert her mind so she sense the pain less.

Maan: Geet bilkul churail lag rahi ho

Geet didn't realise what was he was speaking as she could only see his lips moving. But then when Maan spoke again Geet's mouth turned in a perfect O and he started giggling.

She shoved the flap down in the car and saw the mirror behind and realised that he was really speaking the truth. Her kajal, mascara, eyeliner were all smuged because of crying. Seeing herself like this she started crying out more loudly.

Maan stopped laughing and saw her... He had actually called her to be fianc a chudrail...

Maan bit his tongue

Geet: Ha ha mai to chudrail hi lungo gi na when you have seen far more beautiful girls then me. Pata nahi kis kis kay sath nain matake kiye ho gey. Maan mujhe pehle hi bata de... aur I can't be your trophy wife, perfect at all times. This is not me.. I am just other ordinary girls who are clumsy...

Geet was going on and on when Maan jerked her out of the car and made her stand, taking all her weight so that she doesn't feel any pain in her ankle. His one hand was her waist and the other trying to move her hands back so that he could have better control on her.

Geet soon realised that she was very near him, glancing at their position. She down casted her head so that Maan could not see her. But before the engagement Maan wanted to clear some things from my mind.

Maan: Geet tum aik hi ho jis kay sath mujhe nain matkane karne ka shook hai... haa wo alag baat hai kay handsome honey ki waja sai kafi larkia mujh par marti hai...

Maan smirked at that while Geet turned scarlet.

Maan: Aur rahi baat tumhari trophy wife ki, I am in love with my clumsy to be fiance, chalta phirta disaster so you don't need to change yourself. I have fallen for you Geet already. Abh in ankho ko sirf tum hi nazar ati ho.

Geet hearing that hugged him unconsciously. They hugged him some time taking each other's warmth when Maan got disturbed by his ringing cell phone.

Geet wanted to move back but Maan held her in the same position.

Maan picked the cell phone.

Maan: yes Dad.

Maan: Yes she is with me.

Maan: don't worry we are on our way.

Maan ended the call.

Geet smacked her forehead.

Maan frowning and asking her what happened

Geet: Mera makeup? Kon karega?

Maan: Wait a second

Maan went inside the parlour and asked the girl again to see through her makeup.

It took Geet another half an hour to get ready again and she came outside.

Maan walked her to the car. She was feeling much better now. But she couldn't wear heels now. So she opted for formal sandals which Rano had kept in a bag, knowing her daughter would be fed up of them real soon.

Soon Maan and Geet started their journey to the venue. While Maan handed her a sandwich he bought while she was inside. Geet frowned.

Maan: Pata hai khane kai mamlay mai tum kitni chor ho. Kha lo, pata nahi phir kab khaney ko mile.

Geet rolled her eyes and took it from him and started eating.

Maan wanted to tease her more

Maan: Pata nahi tum larkia itna time kyun lagati ho tyar hone may.

Geet: Oh hello. Yeh sab aap ki waja say hoa

Maan: Meri waja say

Geet: Haa ji, Na aap proposal ko haa kehte, na hi mera din itna hectin guzarta, aur na hi mai slip hoti aur mera makeup kharab hota aur nahi meri engagement kharab hoti.

Maan: To theek hai mai abh ja ke keh deta ho

Maan smirked while saying and continued driving

Geet turned serious not understanding his teasing

Maan: Ha kyun nahi, aisi biwi mujhe nahi chaheye, itni bachkani harkate hai tumhari.

Geet eyes started watering again

Maan stopped at the red light and looked towards her

Maan (self-thought): Oh shoot

Maan: Please Geet abh rona mat, hum parlour say kafi door agaye hai aur already boht dair ho gai hai.

Geet glanced at him. Maan took her hand in his and then kept it on gear and started the car again when the lights turned green.

Maan: Geet mai mazak kar rah tha

Geet: aiasa mazaak na kareyega kabhi kyun kay mai app kay beghair..

She was about to say but stopped. She couldn't decipher that she was about to say it in front of him. These feeling were new to her and it was taking time for her to handle all these.

Maan bought her hand up and kissed her ring finger. He somewhere knew that her feeling are changing towards him and he was ready to wait for her.

Finally they reached the venue.

Maan got out and handed the keys to the valet.

He moved to the other side of the car and opened the door to Geet's side. He forwarded his hand.

Geet clasped his hand and came out.

She started adjusting her dupatta and the dress she was wearing.

Geet: Let's go

Maan: Geet ruko aik minute

Part 15: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4230786/new-ss-kya-wo-tum-ho-updated-part-22-on-pg-104-23-9-2016


Thank you for your likes and comments. Next part is ready. Sooner I get likes and comments the soon the update will be posted 😉

And Engagement in the next part. And the precap in last update will be in the next one.

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 9 years ago
maansee thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Just read all the parts in one go nice story

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

6 months ago

MG OS - Tum Bin MG OS - Tum Bin

One Shot - Tum Bin There was buzz and hustle bustle in the office of Khurana Enterprise this morning. The curiosity was at its peak. Everything...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: suhaaana

1 years ago

MG SS | Marriage Masquerade | Teaser pg 7 part 3 pg 8 | Aug 1

INDEX PART 1 PAGE 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/165545356 Part 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/165663476 Part 3...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/165545356
Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF-Enchanted #2 - Updated Chapter 55 - link pg 140 may 31 MG FF-Enchanted #2 - Updated Chapter 55 - link pg 140 may 31

ENCHANTED - THREAD 2 SUMMARY - Thanks all for completing thread1

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 44~30.07.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".