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There was buzz and hustle bustle in the office of Khurana Enterprise this morning. The curiosity was at its peak. Everything has changed since last month when they heard that Maan Singh Khurana was the real owner of the company. The name they have never known even existed was the owner of the company and has now decided to overtake the power in his hands.

Who was he? Where was he till now? Why this sudden access to power? How can Rajveer and Dev Khurana give him their power to this Maan Khuarana?

Did they hand over the company to Maan Khurana as the share of the company was going down and they wanted to sell it off before the loss and bankruptcy hit them. There were innumerable questions. There were so many buzzes and rumors coming out. They have heard Dev Khurana making statements about father Rajveer Khurana, taking care of Maan Khurana’s optimum education and living childhood after Maan Khurana’s father, his uncle had slipped into coma and in return Maan Singh Khurana has ditched them by taking everything the family owned in his hands only.

Other rumors say that Maan Khurana has been staying in his own house like a servant since his father went into a coma, that Maan Khurana never had any say in the family or business. Then how did things change suddenly?

There was other undercurrent news that the person behind the whole power change game is Geet Handa , daughter of Mohinder Handa, CEO and President Handa Textile. Geet Handa is bestie of Dev and Annie Khurana. All knew that Geet Handa and Dev Khurana were soon to be engaged. And this whole power over take was the result of some love triangle.

Various news, so many rumors but today everyone was curious to see the unknown Maan Khurana for the first time.

And then entered Maan Singh Khurana along with his 10 commando bodyguards to the grand premise of Khurana Enterprise. And not a single gaze could move away from their new unimaginably handsome boss.

It took a grueling month for the once-simple Maan to transform himself into this new persona. Sometimes, an unexpected and deep hurt can awaken a side of a person they never knew existed.

As Maan Khurana walked straight with a stone-like expression, not even giving a glance to anyone. But as he passed people hissed

“Where was he till now, yaar”

“God had saved the best for the last” a young girl took a deep breath “Hayyy”

“Damn, mera toh dil dhak dhak ker raha hai” commented another one

“Yes, he is a total Dhak Dhak yaar”

The hall echoed with murmurs of "Heyy" and "Uff" from the women, while even the men couldn’t hide their admiration for the most striking member of the Khurana clan, finally stepping into the spotlight.

“What an attitude, yaar”

As Maan reached the 10th floor which had the offices of all executives, he took a stroll around the floor.

“I want all these old executive name tags to be removed immediately” he ordered and then entered his cabin “I want to be alone for an hour. Make preparations for the press conference I will be addressing. Make sure the needed people are present there “

“Sure Sir”

He looked around his cabin and then opened his wallet to get out a picture of a beautiful girl.

"Thank you, Geet Handa. I would have never reached this place without you. Tumhari bewafai ko salaam—See where it brought me."

He tore her picture and some other documents in pieces and placed them in a steel bin, lit the small lighter to burn them all into ashes

Kya hoti hai Bewafai tujhe Kerke Dikha Dunga

Kisi Dhokhe me na tu rehna Tujhe pal me Bhula Dunga

******* *****

On the other side in the grand lawn of Khurana Mansion

“Dev, how could you do that? You purposely called Maan to hear those words from me? What did you achieve by that?”

“What did I achieve? Nothing. I had no idea that Maan even had any awareness of his power, Even if he had any, I knew he never had guts to administer that. I wanted to break him that day. Making him hear those words from your lips for him, did break him. Fool, he was thinking he has one person who loves him. He had started trusting you like blind and the moment his trust broke, he was shattered like broken pieces of glass. My idea worked but I had no idea it would lead to this. Damn, that weak and meak has guts to take away all powers from us”

“He is more highly accomplished than you and you thought he didn't know his power” She gave a sarcastic laugh.

“It was his goodness that you and your Dad had those powers and he never claimed them. Dev, You did very wrong. I had not expected such acts from you. Now Maan is so badly hurt. He is broken from inside and balancing it with his new tough exterior. What did you gain from it, Dev? And see you brought loss to your own self”

“Well Geet, I know it’s not his hurt that’s troubling you but his knowing your intent and then everything going away from our hands, that’s troubling you right?”

“You ruined everything for me, Dev. Anyways, it was all my fault. I said those words that broke him. I own to my blunder”

“Geet, now that power is gone, you are behaving as if you really loved that sub standard Maan”

“Dev, I do not need to hear from you what Maan's standard is. You are very well seeing it. If you have guts go and challenge him in Office. It’s his first day there, do you have the guts to step in there?” she challenged

Dev clapped “Wow, I never knew how quick you could change your sides”

“You never knew whose sides I was or I am. No one knows, not even Maan” she left from there frustrated. She must face Maan and bear the brunt of his anger. But more than his fury, it’s the pain of breaking him that weighs on her. She has to be prepared to endure whatever he throws her way, yet her main task is to mend the shattered pieces of his heart and help him heal.

One Month Back:

He looked at the pictures of his mother and then went to the room where his father lay in a coma. Just kept looking at his Dad. He had nothing left other than those documents in his hands

“Dad, today I will be free. I am very happy. I will hand over everything to her. She is the one, Dad. If she has power then they will not treat me this way. You know Dad I cannot say a word against Taya ji, Tayi Ji , Dev and Annie. Itna kamzor hoon. Do you see these wounds in my body, all over my body? The wounds that I have been receiving from childhood, so that I am tamed to their tunes. They have tamed your son Dad. And see, your condition. They will not let you live if I do not be just a servant to them, if I do not sign on papers, wherever they want. I do not have the strength to deny them. Then what is the use of these papers to be in my power? This high grade education that you guaranteed for me, will not give me power, because I do not have strength to speak a word in front of them. It’s better that this power is with hers. She is my love and you know as well know, I cannot say No to her.”

He came forward and wiped the string of tears falling from the eyes of his Dad, who otherwise was immobile.

“Dad, she wants it for us. They can blackmail me but not her. She is part of their class, they will never dare to say a word against her. I love her more than these papers Dad. I am really happy to give her something. Happy that I have something in life that I can give her, thanks to you Dad. Nahi toh woh kahan aur main kahan. I am very happy because she will be very happy”

Maan had decided and was happy. She was his queen from childhood and today he will give these powers to her and make her real queen. If she has asked for it, he has to do it.

“Geet, you will know today, how limitless my love for you is”

Maan was happy that he had something in power to give her. World may think him a fool in love but he least cares. They anyways do not consider him more than a useless piece in this house, their servant and just a machine who can sign papers and checks for them.

Maan looked at the documents in his hand. Today he will proudly hold Geet's hand and take her to the lawyer, where he will hand over everything to her. Along with that he will present her this beautiful ring. Yes, he is going to surprise her with his proposal today.

Maan did not have a single inch of doubt that his Geet could ever say No to him. That was their relationship, beyond everything.

He was about to enter the room where he knew Geet must be waiting for him when he heard her voice.

“Uncle Rajveer and Dev, do you both really feel that I will marry that Maan or I can even be interested in Maan? See his class and see my class. How could you even think that? You all wanted those hereditary papers away from him. Do you think he will sign the papers just like that and hand them over to me? If I show him that he is not important to me, will he sign the papers? I definitely have to make him feel important. And that’s what I am exactly doing”

She paused “Dev - you very well know, right? Since childhood this is my trick with him, don’t you know. I had been little good with him and he has gone beyond to do things for me. And for this huge handover, I need to give him a little more attention, don’t I? Why was this question raised then? Today he will sign everything in my name, I will get power of attorney. It’s just a day’s thing and then he is out. I will break his mirage once I get the authority..”

The sudden sound of a falling vase took their attention and Geet turned to see Maan standing there shocked. Looking at her he stumbled

“Maa-aan” Geet mouthed, shocked. Maan showed her his Palm, stopping her where she was. He stumbled back

Rabba hai duhaiiii

Milke duniyaa kyun parayii

Kerte hain wafa toh

Milti hai bewafai

The document got crushed in his fists, he turned and left from there. Geet ran behind him

“Maan-Maan wait”

Maan stopped on her words. Well it has never happened that he has not listened to her. This one last time.

He turned “Maan listen.. It was” Geet tried to speak but the hurt and pain in his eyes were so deep, her words got stuck in her throat.

Kerte hain wafa to

Milti hai bewafai

Tujhpe hoga koi sitam to tu janega

Chirega dil jab koi gam to toh tub to manega

“This..” he showed her the documents “you did all for these?”

Geet nodded for No

“Is this that powerful?”

“No..” Geet nodded “Maan… No”

“So this is what it had always been, since childhood.” Geet was continuously nodding for No but Maan was already on his own trip.

He clapped “What a smart you are and what a fool I have been. “Don’t worry, now I will show you the real power of this document. And of course there is a class difference. You will see the real class difference now.” And he turned without caring of her stream of tears.

First meet and after:

Even though she was Dev and Annie’s best friend, Geet had always been sweet to him. Okay, she was their bestie, how could she always be with him. They considered him so low, the servant of their house. But then how slowly he has become fond of her and then head over heels in love. How slowly she has seeped into his heart.

It had not taken much effort on Geet’s end to win the heart of a lonely boy who was like a discarded piece in his own house.

How can he forget that beautiful day when he has seen her for the first time. He had stepped in his house after his school. All his cousins came home from the luxury car while he came from the school bus. They were in the same high school though. That time Maan had no idea that his high class education was all a set of his father’s conditions and his lawyer was looking into the matter. All he knew was that it was the greatness of hisTaya ji and Tayi ji that they took care of him when his parents could not. He was provided with a great education and stayed in the same house. He was made indebted to them and taught that he should always be grateful to them. Maan adapted the habit of keeping his Taya ji and Tayi Ji happy at any cost, which slowly turned into him living like a servant in his own house. He was humiliated, ignored and smashed by anyone. Slowly taking humiliation and considering himself as a refugee in his own house was installed within him.

That day when twelve years old Maan entered the house he heard a mesmerizing giggle. It definitely was not Annie’s.

He peeped in to see the back of another girl with Dev and Annie. His legs could not stop and he went closer to get a feel of that wonderful giggle. It filled the air all around with music.

“Maan, what are you doing here? Chup Chup ke humari baten sun rahe ho, sharm nahi aati”

“No, I was just..” Maan was trying to find out words when the giggling girl turned and Maan eyes fell on her mesmerizing beauty

“Hii…” she waved and came running to him

“Hi, I am Geet, aur tum”

Maan looked at Dev who was not approving of his presence there

“I am.. I am Maan. Dev and Annie are my…”

“He is no one you should know, Geet.”

Dev took Geet away from there but as Geet moved away she turned back to look back at Maan and gave a big smile. That one smile and Maan’s heart was gone forever from his heart.

Geet was their new neighbor. So after that Geet had been visiting their home to play with Dev and Annie. Maan would be busy with his homework and housework while she would be playing with Annie and Dev in her cute frocks and shorts. Looking from far at her beautiful curls on her face would make him smile.

A week passed by and Geet visited their place daily after school. It was another Monday when Maan was busy with his homework when he felt a tap on his shoulder. He turned and was surprised seeing her sitting beside him

“I heard you are a very good student, will you help me with my studies?”

“Why won't I? But your friends won’t like you playing with me”

“I will play with whoever I want to. They are my best friends in this new city but I will play with you too” she said in her sweet voice.

Maan helped her finish her homework that day and later Geet kept her books aside.

“You are in the chess club, right?”

“I am in so many clubs, yes chess is one of them”

“I don’t join clubs, you have to stay after school for that. I want to be back to my Mumma the moment school ends” she confessed innocently, he laughed

“They won’t even have clubs for your grade. You are in class four right?”

“Yes, How do you know?”

He shrugged his shoulders “Not that hard, just saw you entering class 4 after assembly”

“But why are you in all the clubs?”

“Same reason as yours. I have nothing interesting to come back home. I enjoy my clubs.”

“I know you are in 7th grade and you are also the middle school student council president. Dev does not like that” she giggled and he loved it. Kept it in his heart, giving her a smile. His heart danced for the first time knowing she was impressed by him in some way.

“He doesn’t like me. But school does not run on the wish of a fifth grader, right?”

It went that way - Geet would play with Dev and Annie most of the day while Maan would be in his own world. But behind the scenes when Maan thought that Geet is not part of his world , that she is Dev and Annie’s friend and was busy with them, Geet would suddenly appear in front of Maan. And whenever she came to him they talked endlessly and in between he sometimes helped her with her chess games and sometimes in her preparation and most of the time she just asked him innumerable questions about him.

Just like that, once she saw red marks on his hands “Maan, what is this?”

“Nothing. You are coming after so many days. How are you doing?” he changed the topic

“Dev, Annie and all our friend groups think low of you. They made fun of me that day when they figured out that I had been talking to you. They said, I will be called out as a boring person like you”

“You think I am boring”

“No way. But I don’t want them to gossip. Maan what those red marks are? Dev’s Mom again hit you”

“No Geet, you should not say that way. They are elders. When they are taking care of all my needs, they have right to teach me lesson when I am wrong”

“Show me” she took his hand and pulled his sleeves up. Seeing the deep marks her mouth opened wide. He smiled and closed her wide opened mouth

“She never hits Dev and Annie” “You want your friends to get hit?” “Noo”

Similarly, days and a year passed.

“Geet, no. You are not inviting Maan to your Birthday party” Dev and Annie were shocked by her declaration.

“Yes, we don’t want him in my friend’s birthday party” Annie added

Geet’s parent’s as well did not like her inviting the boy whom their friend didn’t want. He was just a charity case and they were supporting his education and living.

“Uncle - Aunt , Mom -Dad, Maan helps me with so many things. What if he stops helping me? Anyways, he will just be standing in the corner. Please Dad. His posters were the best. I need his help in my student council election with poster and campaign” She pouted

Geet managed to invite Maan to her birthday.

Since childhood, no one could tell if Geet was using Maan or if she really treasured him and made other fools by downplaying him. Geet was a very smart child and always knew what she actually wanted. And it was only Geet who knew which one of two she was making fools of, Maan or the rest.

Rajveer Khurana had been lying for years that he himself started believing his own lie. He had claimed for years that he was the owner of Khurana Enterprise and as the years passed by and no one to claim he started believing it himself. But such huge financial facts had to come out when the time came.

No one would ever remember what was Maan’s birthday but his 18th birthday and his lawyer made an entry in Khurana Mansion. He had been sending notices since the last six months but Rajveer had been ignoring them. The lawyer came and announced that going further no deal or financial investment be done without Maan Khurana’s signature. He was the real and sole heir of the business empire that Maan’s grandfather had established and his father had taken to new heights. Rajveer was his father’s cousin and not a single penny of KE was his. The lawyer also asked him to clarify about the loss that KE has suffered from for years.

This was a bigger shock for Maan. The boy who had only known to listen to these people, in fact felt guilty at the knowledge of having power above them.

Going forward they had to get his signature for every single penny from KE. Each time Maan signed the document, Maan was made more guilty and ungrateful for having power over them.

Further, the legal team for Maan, pushed Maan to apply for university abroad as that was his father’s instruction and wish. This way Maan’s top notch education was ensured.

*******

Present:

It was for the first time that Maan was going for a press conference but as he moved ahead no one could say it was his first time.

Maan made few clear announcements - He was the sole owner of the company. Rajveer Khurana has given up his position as he was just the caretaker of the company while the real owner was getting ready to handle the company. He also hinted that there would be complete change in management and leadership.

“Another very important announcement is - We are no more having any alliance with Handa Textiles”

As this line got telecasted - Mohinder looked at Geet

“This is the man you have been feeling guilty for? This is the man you have always called your friend when all of us have asked you to side away from? See how he has abolished the name of his uncle from the company, the uncle who took care of his father’s company when he was incapable to handle it”

“Dad, it’s his company. You never wanted an alliance with him then why does it concern you if he is breaking alliance with your company. And you very well know, it is us, who have compelled him to be what he is today . But I am happy, very happy for him” her voice cracked. Her Maan, who believed each and every word of her will now never believe her.

“Geet, he is there only to get revenge on you, stop being happy for him. You had just been using him, right? What’s this sudden sympathy for him”

*******

Four months passed and that was enough for Maan to get complete hold of business and completely cut off Rajveer and Dev from business. The mode of revenge, that hurt, enabled to bring forward that hidden and suppressed caliber of his, surprising everyone.

Old leadership was completely revamped and new people hired. Whole business strategies changed.

“Sir Handa Textiles shares have gone completely down as you had planned. Being thrown out of alliance from Khurana Enterprise has hit their shares drastically”

“Make sure to buy all their shares open in the market. Make sure it is bought by different names and locations. I want to see Handa Textiles broken and hollow completely”

Sheeshe ki tarah hum Tere bharam ko tod dalenge

Kya hoti hai bewafai tujhe kerke dikha dunga

Bewafai Kya hoti hai kerke dikha dunga

On the other hand Mohinder Handa felt stuck in the situation of his company. He never knew the boy they had been taking for granted and never gave any value to his existence would not only come out as heir but also be a lethal businessman. But why was Maan targeting his company when in this whole world Geet was the only one who had cared for him and was still in guilt for him.

But all this thought came from him because his company was on the brink of bankruptcy. And all Maan’s moves had come unexpectedly as he was not prepared for it.

“Dad, I will talk to Maan. He is returning to the country tomorrow” Geet felt guilty that his dad was suffering because of Maan’s anger on her.

“Geet, he has been your friend since childhood, how can he ruin us this way? Everything is slipping away. I feel so helpless”

“If I am the cause, I will get you everything back Dad, at any cost”

Maan returned to the country after four months and had been busy in meetings since morning.

“Geet ma’am, sir has strictly instructed that no one can meet him without appointment”

“Then give me an appointment for him”

“Ma’am, his calendar is fully booked for two months. Can I set up after two months”

“I understand what you mean.” She gave a small laugh.

“Will you mind if I sit here?”

“Sure ma’am”

Maan got the information that Geet had been waiting for him. He took another 2 hours till it was late evening.

He later came out and was walking straight without looking at his sides

“Maan”

He kept walking straight, Geet ran behind him

His commando blocked her, Maan turned and signaled them to not stop her

“Okay, you want me to run behind you” She murmured and ran so she can catch up to him

“Maan- Maan, one meeting with you please or we can talk at home”

“My calendar is packed for next two months, my PA has already informed you. IAd only meet my friends at home” he turned to her “And I guess we never were, so that option is off”

“Maan”

“I will take five minutes walk before I settle in my car, I hope that should give you enough time”

“Maan, if you think I wronged you, punish me, why Dad?”

“If I think,?” he gave her a sarcastic side loop smile

“Punish me, why hitting at Dad’s business”

“This hurts you more?” “Maan”

“You got your answer. Anyways, it’s purely business. You have 3 more minutes”

Todunga gurror aise, toote hon khwab jaise

Rakh doon Na Kuchal Ke, Tanha jiye tu kaise

Kya hoti hai bewafai tujhe kerke dikha doonga

“Purely business? I can see that”

“Sure it is. As there never was anything personal. Just that i took more than needed time to learn. But better late than never”

“Anything I can do to make it not purely business? Something that can make you rethink as a friend”

“It’s all in your hand. Do something that makes me feel it’s not purely business.”

“What do you want me to do? Maan, not for this but otherwise as well, I can do anything you wish”

He looked at her and raised his brows “Really, as far as I remember, it has been only one sided. And you very well know who has been fulfilling whose wishes and what that lifelong fool gets in return”

“Maan, noo”

“Last one minute left. So without wasting time, one last thing. If you want to prove what you are claiming, convince me to marry you. Only if I decide to marry you and get engaged with you, it will then be personal and all your problems solved. So far it looks mission impossible for you, because I have already found a girlfriend for me who I am going to propose to at the launch of my new sub brand. By that day if you are able to convince me” he shrugged his shoulders and moved to his car.

“Maan, what are you talking about? This is not you”

“Times up” his commando opened the door for him and he settled him and his car drove off

Geet kept looking at his vehicle distancing from him

“You still love me so much Maan and so you're deeply hurt. But why didn’t you trust your love more than those words that you heard that day. I can’t let you be like this. I will heal all your wounds, in return you can give me innumerable wounds.”

Kya hoti hai wafa tujhe karke dikha doongi”

That evening, when Maan entered the Mansion, he directly went to his Dad, still laying on the bed in his state of Coma

“Dad, what do I do? Why is seeing her so close after months, moving me? Why does she have the power to affect me? Why was it so easy to do things as per her wishes and why is it so hard to do things that I wish? I heard everything loud and clear from her own mouth, still why does my heart want to trust all the false feelings that she showed me today? It won’t take me a lot to confirm her words that day but why am I afraid of getting confirmation of her words ? Why am I giving her a chance to prove me wrong?”

He poured all his pain in front of his Dad and then came out from there, again masking himself as a man made of stone.

********

“Geet are you even in your senses”, scolded her Dad

“The man who has brought us on the verge of bankruptcy you are going to propose to him, so that he can say no to you. I can stay penniless but not let anyone, especially that man insult you”

“Yes, your Dad is right Geet”

“Dad-Mom, it’s not for our losses but for him. I have to do it for him.”

“Him? Do you really love him to the extent that you are risking to take his ‘No’ in public and adorn public embarrassment? When did this love happen to you?“

“Childhood, exactly when, I don’t know”

“You have been claiming you were just using him”

“What else was the option Dad? Had they known otherwise, they would have never let Maan ever talk to me. They never wanted Maan to have even a single person around him, who truly loved him.. And they would have pressurized you to make me stay away from him. You beleived they were your best friend. You would have not minded separating me from Maan”

“In friendship, you didn’t even realize that they had been lying all the while that they are the owners of KE. Did you ever question them? No”

“Rajveer was safeguarding his property. Had he not been there, who would have protected Maan’s property”

“Wow, protected Maan’s property by making him a servant in his own house. Anyways, I am going to win my man back. I cannot see him holding anyone else’s hands with lifelong pain in his heart. Will you support and trust your daughter for once Dad”

“It’s hard for a man who is ruining us but for you and your love - Go”

It was the grand party for the new Brand launch from Khurana Enterprise. More than that, people were anxious to meet the girl of Maan Khurana’s life. Maan Khurana, a man who made his name in headlines a few months back, was leading the headlines these days. He will be placing a ring on the finger of his lady love today and this was the matter of curiosity among all.

Maan entered the venue and beside him was a strikingly beautiful blond female , their hands interlocked with each other.

Geet was there all the while as he flaunted the girl in his arms at the party. Their eyes met couple of times but Maan efficiently ignored her eagerness to look into her feelings

Kisi dhokhe me na tu rehna,

Tujhe pal me bhula doonga

Kya hoti hai bewafai, Tunjhe pal me bhula doonga

Maan was determined to not be moved by her beautiful almond hazels which had capability to make him her slave. No, not anymore, he was determined and decided to bring his focus on the blond girl, all the while by his side.

Before the party could be called out Maan made his much awaited presence on the stage and the blond girl accompanied him. She was poised and had calmness all the time in her demure.

“Hello everyone, as you all know, today I am going to propose to the lady of my life. But before I do that, I wanted to let you all know, why her? In my life partner I am looking for someone who stands by my side in my brighter days and in my darkest times. My life partner should have courage to speak for me even when the whole world is against me. My life partner should be one who is proud of me. The person who I can trust blindly. My life partner…..” Maan was going on and on with his list. The list had to go on and on as somewhere deep down he was waiting for someone to stop him.

At last, “So now it’s time for me to introduce my lady who has all these things and I think she is perfect to be my life partner…. Meet…”

“Mr Maan Khurana….” Maan turned to see Geet getting on stage with a mic, a beautiful flower bouquet in her hand and a box. His heart stopped for a moment but he soon recovered. No, No way. He determined his heart again

“Mr Maan khurana…” she was breathing heavily and then knelt down on her knees, kept the box beside her and forwarded the bouquet to him

“Geet” he hissed removing his mic

“Go away from here, I do not want any drama” but she ignored him

“Maan, I do not claim to be the girl in your long list. I leave it on you to decide. I leave it to you to decide if our years of friendship were true or a mirage for you. I leave it to you to trust on my words that you heard or trust our year long relationship. I leave it on you to decide if you trust my eyes or my words. I leave everything to you.”

She paused

I am not here to ask you to trust me. It’s your decision. All I want to ask is, will you accept me in your life with all my shortcomings, Maan. Will you please accept me because my life is and will ever be hollow and empty without you”

Maan dropped his mic and picked her up “Agar maine kabhi bewafai ki toh… kyunki sikh li maine bewafai” he said making her to stand on her feet

“Meri wafa kaphi hogi hamare rishte ke liye… kabhi tutne nahi dungi hamara rishta. This is my word to you in front of all”

Maan took the mic from her “Everyone, now who else do you think can be my life partner”

He took out the ring from his pocket and took her hand but Geet pulled her hand back

“You do not have the right to propose to me.You are very very very bad. I will propose you” she said tear rolling down her cheeks

He forwarded his hand forward “As you wish. It always has been and will be like that. ”

They placed rings on each other, with the whole crowd witnessing their love. Maan circled his hands around her petite waist and pulled her close to glue to him and pressed his lips on hers, initiating a fervent french kiss.

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Fantastic and Brilliant OS

Maan and Geet were friends from young days

but later in their lives trust was broken and Maan

became Maan Singh Khurana owner of Khurana Enterprise

now Geet has proposed him marriage and glad that he accepted

well he always loved Geet

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Posted: 6 months ago
#4

wonderful OS

i read this in contest too

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#5

wonderful update

loved reading again

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Posted: 6 months ago
#6

Congrats on another OS

Beautiful banner

lovely song


Superb OS... excellently written

so Maan is the new owner of KE

of cos he made a grand entry

everyone is indeed enamored by Maan

Geet broke Maan's heart

and this made Maan stronger

Geet was clearly upset with Dev

glad she put Dev in his place

however Maan was hurt with what happened

she was correct that Dev cannot challenge Maan

Geet's thoughts were reasonable

seems like Geet loves Maan

Furious how Maan's uncle and family treated Maan

well Maan loves Geet immensely and decided to give everything to her

but he heard what Geet said that she was just pretending

Maan's anger was justified

hmm Maan fell for Geet when he saw her

she was the only one that cared for him

as expected Maan was the real owner of KC

now Maan made changes in KC and terminated the alliance with Handa Textiles

Gosh Maan is destroying Geet's dad's business

Maan's behavior towards Geet was justified

she now has to convince him to marry her

liked that she is willing to do so

she certainly loved Maan since childhood

whatever she did was for him

finally her parents supported her

loved that she proposed to Maan

at last they are together

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Posted: 6 months ago
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Awesome and lovely OS ❤️ read it once again.... first time read it in contest smiley1 maan and geet are childhood friends , maan's father was ill so his relatives made him servant in his own house , they even created misunderstanding between maaneet , maan was deeply hurt and he took everything in his own hand , he kicked out those relatives and ruined handas business , geet was repented and she talked to Maan, she listened his weird condition and she won her love.....she proposed him in front of all ..... ❤️

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Posted: 6 months ago
#8

She was able to convince him. It was a long shot but the love prevailed. Somewhere deep down, he had the faith in her.

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Posted: 6 months ago
#9
Loved and enjoyed reading... Well writtened and expressed each and every emotion....
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Posted: 6 months ago
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Wow Great one, would love to read more on this one

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