New SS: Kya Wo Tum Ho?Updated Part 22 on Pg 104 23/9/2016 - Page 32

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear...superb story⭐️


read all the parts in one go...😛


must say very well written...👏


interesting part...


offo geet sothi rahi...rano worried..


good exam went well



now waiting eagerly what will happen


update soon and do pm me


love




uma...🤗
Edited by umamaaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 13:

Mohinder and Rano had already reached the venue and were waiting for Ram and Maira.

The guests had already started arriving. Though very close friends and relatives were invited but still the hall started filling.

Later Mohinder and Rano greeted Ram and Maira.

Maira: Geet kab tak ayegi?

Rano: Ji bus parlour mai hi hai... Thori dair tak pohnch jayegi. Driver to bheja hai.

Maira nodded and then both the families started welcoming and entertaining the guests.

Maira introduced them to Yash as well.

Later when Mohinder was talking to one of his colleagues, his cell started ringing. He excused himself and went to the side to attend the call.

Mohinder was shocked to hear the other side. Mohinder was blabbering and seeing his tensed face Ram moved towards him

Mohinder: Beta tu fikr mat kar. Mai kuch karta ho...

Mohinder ended the call and glanced up when he saw Ram frowning

Ram: Kya hoa? Why are you so tensed?

Mohinder: Wo bus Geet ka phone tha. The driver is not able to reach the parlour, because of some labour strike near that area and all the ways are closed.

Ram: App fikr na kare, Mai apne driver say puchta ho. Parlour kaha hai? I will send my driver...

Mohinder told him and Ram called his driver

Driver: But Saab waha janey kay to sare raste band hai. Aj labour strike hai na.

Ram and Mohinder: Hum jante hai. Koi aur raasta hai kya?

Driver: Ji Saab

Driver explained it to him. But Ram knew that only person from the other side would be able to come since the police officers have stopped the traffic going from here.

Ram was thinking and soon he took out his cell and called

Ram: Haa Maan betay! Tum kaha ho?

Ram: Acha to aisay karo Geet waha rastey mai parlour hai, waha tyar honey gayi thi. But driver nahi punch sakta waha par, strike ki waja say. So tum kaisay bhi kar key use lay aoa. Haa. Haa par wo rasta to boht lamba parega.. Haa tum lay aoa.

Ram ended the call and assured Mohinder that Maan knows another way and will bring Geet soon to the hall.

Khurana Constructions:

Maan headed to the basement into his car and ignited the engine.

Maan(self-thought): Kya karo mai is larki ka. Musibat to jaise isse dhondti hai... (Courtesy GHSP).

Geet on the other hand:

Geet (self-thought): Yeh sab abhi hi hona tha. Tears started glistening her eyes. This is supposed to be the most special day and here I can feel the terrible pain in my ankle... Shouldn't have opted for heels today. Aur yeh is larki ko bhi abhi yah liquid girana tha jis ke waja say mai slip hoi. I can't even walk properly. Thank God I didn't tell dad or else he would have created a big fiasco, already there is a labour strike and driver is not able to reach.

Just then Maan reached the parlour and called her

Geet: Why is he calling me? And Dad even didn't reply me after that call. Don't know where the driver is left. I am 1 hour late already.

Geet picked up the call

Geet: Ji

Maan: Kaha ho?

Geet: Parlour mai

Maan: Bahir ajao

Geet: Mai kaisay, mai to chal bhi nahi pa rahi.

Maan: Kya? To mai andar aoa kya.

Geet (self-thought) Yeh ander agaye na to us larki ki khair nahi

Get: Nahi nahi mai ati ho bahir.

Geet with the help of another spa girl came out. Maan was standing right outside the door.

Maan got angry just by seeing that she was not able to walk. He first thought it was because of the heels.

Spa girl: Sir we are really Sorry.

Maan frowned and didn't understand what she is saying

Spa girl: Sir she slipped because of our mistake

Maan (self-thought): Sahi socha tha maine, Musibaat to jaise iska pecha karti hai. Kaha tha us din heels na kharido, liken nahi impress karne chali thi... Us din bhi girte girte bach thi.

He was about to blast on the spa girl when Geet moved forward to take his support.

Maan gave her support.

Maan: Dehan kaha hai tumhara? Tum pori ki pori disaster ho. Itna clumsy bhi koi hotha hai?

Listening to his angry voice the tears that were misting her eyes started streaming down.

Maan realised his mistake. But without saying anything he picked her up in bridal style. Geet got stiff right that instant. Her shocked face clearly defined surprise.

Geet was overwhelmed by his care. Just a small scratch on her and he had turned into an erupting volcano.

Maan reached the car and made her sit such that her feet were still outside the car.

Maan: Dekhao mujhe.

Maan took out the first aid box from the back and came back to her.

Maan: Tum ne suna nahi? Maine kaha dekhao?

Maan said this in a very stern way. She hadn't seen him like this from the day she met him.

When she didn't hear him Maan moved his hand to lift her dress up so that he could see the wound. That's when Geet realised what was Maan doing.

Geet: App kya kar rahe hai

Maan without listening to her continued doing

Geet jerked her feet out of his hand and shrieked.

Geet: Ouch...

Her face was full of tears now.

Maan: Geet... Chup chap bethi raho.

Maan tightened his hold and shoved her dress away so that he could see. Her ankle had started swollen up. He first though it was a small twist, however looking at the condition it meant that she had to be taken to the hospital soon.

Maan: Look it swelling up now. You need to go the hospital soon.

Maan touched it and Geet hissed in pain

Maan took a balm out and started massaging it.

Geet didn't utter a word but he knew that it was paining her too much. She had already closed her eyes, her mouth open and tears falling continuously.

Maan tried being as careful as possible, not to cause her too much pain. After he was done. He moved forward slowly and caressed her cheeks. His hand then travelling to the side of her neck. Geet face tilted seeking the warmth of his hand. He moved forward and bought her face near him. His breath now falling on her. Geet squeezed her eyes tightly. She knew what going to happen. Her hands clutched in fists in her lap. She felt his breath lingering on her forehead and then finally his cold lip touched her forehead, giving her a long kiss. Geet forgot everything. This was the first time anyone had been this close to her. She didn't knew how to react.

Maan moved back and smiled seeing her reactions. Her already chubby cheeks got red without even doing anything. Maan could just stare her for long but he didn't have time.

He moved his fingers close to eyes and wiped her tears. That's when Geet came back and opened her eyes wide and saw him smiling.

First she only knew that she was falling for his charm, his attitude, but today she realised that he indeed was the one whom she wanted her whole life. She could live with him her whole life. The time when she thought about her prince charming, he had ticked every box till now which she wanted in her ideal.

Suddenly she wanted to just go to his land leaving her dreams behind as if they don't matter now. Surely God had some other plans.


Precap: Jeena Jeena!! 😳


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Part 14: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4230786/new-ss-kya-wo-tum-ho-updated-part-22-on-pg-104-23-9-2016

Edited by sparklingeyes11 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lol its not her fault.. Bechari geet ko kitni daant par gayi..superb yaar.. Hope they get to theor own engagement on time lol.. Cont soon hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update

Geet stuck at the parlor due to labor strikes but worst she even slipped
and now has swelling in her ankle Maan comes to pick her up and at first he was annoyed but than realized that Geet must be in pain
seeing her tears he decides to soothe her and he kisses her forehead
which makes Geet shy and eases her at the same time
looking forward now to see if they go hospital whether their function will
still continue what will actually happen

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Posted: 9 years ago
fantastic part. Maan went to pick up Geet and seeing her hurt scolded her😆 His care for her convinced her that he is the one for her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! superbly written! Geet stuck in the parlour! Mohinder tensed! there is a labour strike! Ram helps! the driver cannot go so he calls Maan! Maan goes 2 get her! Geet slipped! Maan upset! he shouts her! bt it wasn't her fault! the girl at the parlour sed it was their fault! Maan carries her out! Geet shocked! Maan looks at the ankle! its swollen! Maan rubs some balm! he sed they need 2 ho 2 the hospital! Geet affected by his closness! Maan happy! Geet realizes he is wt she wants! his care has shown this! she has fallen 4 him! update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Maan came to pick geet from parlor
Maan scolded geet for being clumsy
Seeing her tears he carried her
Did first aid too... Forehead kiss☺️
Ab engagement hoga ki nahi... Waiting to know
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice ud
geet stuck in parlor due to strike
and know its maan's duty to brings
her on time maan thought she's disaster queen
at parlor wen maan saw her he want to blast on
girl but stopped and scooped geet and maan saw
her ankle swollen and put some balm to give her
some relief
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!⭐️



maaneet scene was nicely written...👏



but y u made maan scold geet 😒...spa girl ko dant na tha na 😆



aww kiss on fore head...awesome 😳



waiting 4 the engagement!!!!!!!!!!😛



Love



uma...🤗

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