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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: priya111111
hi swetaa. main one week keliye thoda busy rahoongi. so comments late hi milegi. in laws aarahe hai. par updates phone se padoongi😉mujhe comments phone se dena pasand nahi hai😛

yep...sure baby...I'll definitely wait for ur comments ...!!!!!!

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#342

awesome story👏👏

maaneet moments r nice😃

maan knows about bet😲

at last maaneet become one😃

superb concept👏👏

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#343

Awesome dear...very nice story... u would have written the same story from maan's point of view and it would have been awesome... waiting for more stories from u...

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#344

kiss ka kissa khatam ho gaya 😆

really enjoyed this journey... 👏

maan is ssooo clever... loved his unexpected reaction to Misty's confession 😛

aww... geet was soo cute...
but mature too at the same time... her answer to their happy ending question was very nice...

last maaneet part was cheery on cake 😳

loved it!!! 🤗

Edited by Pooooooooooooja - 10 years ago

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#345

HEY CRAZY JUS READ LAST 3 PARTS NOW..

OH TERI...GOOGLY TOH MAAN NE DAALA...CHUPA RUSTAM KAHIKA...HEHEHE...HE ALREADY KNEW ABOUT...BET...
ND HE PLAYED ALL ALONG..

ND DAT KISS IN AIRPORT..WOH TOH ..😳

CUTIE BECHARI KO PATA HI NAHI CHAL ITS HER PARENTS..

ND 🤗 FOR ADDIN ME TOO IN DIS STORY...

ME TOO LL MISS DIS STORY...
DO WRITE MORE..LOVE UR WRITIN...🤗

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#346

JUST LOVED THIS FIRST KISS STORY

MAANU AND MISHTY WERE TOO CUTE

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#347

Lovely epilogue.. loved mishti and maanu love for each other..

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sweet-mishty

@sweet-mishty

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#348

Beautiful updates Loved it very much
Story was awesome

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#349

finally maan bhi pyaar karne laga hai geet se aur wo apne dost ke saath share bhi kiya, jise sunkar geet guilty feel hokar maanu ko avoid karne lagi hai. poor misty maanu se kuch nahi kehpayi. chalo finally usne confess kardiya maanu se and wo bhi galat nahi samajha. finally kiss story ka the end hogaya par asli mazaa tab aaye jab maan ne sach bataya ki wo canteen mein kiss ke baaremein sunkar hi apni entry maari misty ka kiss miss nahi karna chahtha tha because wo hi sach mein bachpan se misty se pyaar kartha tha😉

swetaa yeh itna cute and simple story likha tune, really i loved it very much. keep it up, aise hi likhthi rehna👏

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abba12

@abba12

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#350

Finally commenting 😆 ..I think shouldn't tell again that I loved the story ... Such a cute and lovely one 😉😛 .. Liked the way u wrote and included u frnds ...

Maan being shy and less talkative 😆 what a character hehe ...

And he deliberately entered canteen ... So smart 😆