SS- First kiss story_updated EPI@ 40 READ THE NOTE @61 - Page 34

Originally posted by: flowing_river

read all the three updates back to back...
yaar..this story was so amazing..m gonna miss it...
u know i can't belive.. I mean ur growth as a writer in such a short span..baby..u killed it..muahha..

Originally posted by: Monikaarora

superb story dear... 👏 👏
👏 👏 👏...very well written...u proved... having not hot scenes ..a story can be romantic and passionate... 😳 ...actually am shock and surprised when maanu said she is his childhood love...sach m they were destined together...

the way geet made girls realise ..how special first kiss is ...just awesome... 😊 ...
i must say.. am going to miss this os so much... 😭 😭 😭...

thanks dear for this wonderful story... 😃 ...
and ya... plz start a new one also.. .. 😛

Originally posted by: divya22

Awww such a cute n lovely story..

i loved it.

Mishty and maanu.. hayeee

Originally posted by: -Adwika-

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">😭😭😭me missed whole story😭😭😭</font>

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">but koi ni ab comment kar deti hoon, yaar sweety the udpate was as sweet as u, u know more than hating that sasha I m loving her, bcoz uski hi wajah se Maanu aur mishty ne kiss kiya, aur dekha momma maine kaha tha na hum bacche bacche nahi hai hum sab kuch jaante hai toh kuch bhi part skip karne ka koi fayeda nahi aata accha hua aapne khud se poori story bata di warna pata nahi hum se sweety kya karwati story janane ke liye😆😆...hello mommy apni dreamland se bahar aao aur dad ko sab sach batao, aapko pata chalana that he hates lair phir bhi aapne unse addha jhoot bola, very bad aur humse kehte ho jhoot bolna buri baat hoti hai, I loved the way Maanu teased his Mishty, and his shock expression when Mishty said that she loves him was fab...wah mom dad ko stalk kar rahe the poora time and daddy was enjoying taht secretly, wah daddy momma ko apne chamr me ost karke date ke liye haa bulwa diya, very good, akhir yeh charm aap aur kis me use karte momma ki alawa...OMG miss bakbak express MK ke saamne aate hi kaise chup ho jaati hai, aww feeling J, yaar mummy aap na bohot hi stupid ho abhi tak apni feelings samjh nahi paye daddy ke liye, their understanding is so cute, bina bolhe hi woh sab samjh jaate hai, ek dusre ke baare me haayee more than Geets blushing I m loving Maan's blushy, he looks sooo cute, wow one more kiss, ab yeh twist kyu de rahi ho sweet si story me...oops churi chupke baat sunni and it hurted u momma, daddy toh aapse pyaar bhi karne lage and he feels so much for u and while he was confessing the same aapko kitna guilty feel ho raha tha unse jhoot bola iss liye, feeling bad for momma, maine bola tha na jhoot nahi blna chahiye, but aapne bola aur dekho kitna guilty feel kar rahi ho aur sirf khhud ko hi nai daddy ko bhi bad feel karwa rahi thi, but aapne yeh cheez acchi ki, ki khud jaa kar confess kia ki aapne jhoot bola tha warna daddy aur zyada bura lagta, but abhi unhe kam bura nahi laga, he is angry on u...haaww daddy gussa nahi the infact he kissed u too, haayee, areyyaar mummy aapne phir se edited part sunaya hume but sweety ne hume sab bata diya, haayee my maanu kissed me☺️, I know I know woh father daughter wala kiss tha but still he kissed me, haww daddy aapne bhi mumma ko trick kiya aur iss liye aap angry nahi hue kyunki aapko pehle se hi sab sach pata tha, hai na, aap dono kitne bade cheater ho ek dusre ke liye, pehle mumma ne jhoot bola but baad me pata chala daddy ko toh uske baare me sab kuch pata tha pehle se hi...</font>

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Story end ho gayi😭😭</font>

Originally posted by: Maya_Maan

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000FF">loved it dear,
part 6 & 7 & epi...
Fab parts...
happiness, sweetness and sadness too..
emotional play it was...
nice twist the Maan entered in as he already knew it
N that's why he didn't get surprise or anger,
cheater yar, but everything is fair in love
thanks for a awesome story dear,
will miss it...</font>

Originally posted by: KINGKHANFAN

<font color="#FF0000">Awesme...loved it alot..
👏</font>

Originally posted by: anuradha.nandam

the twsts by twists u gave in this ending r really mind blowing good ending ,.. loved much

Originally posted by: priyasree

<font color="#009900" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Beautiful n lovely updates n epilogue</font>

Originally posted by: caller123

I read last two parts together Sweta.

I really loved it all.

This story became a story I will cherish always. Thank you my dear friend

Love you dear.🤗❤️