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tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

VAADA

a painfull story ..just for a bet maan lost his love ..made both suffer and end was terrible ..so sad ...hope they take a rebirth to fulfill their promise

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Ever Ours

It was beautiful almost heart wrenching that the hero returns to his love . The twist to the plot was the last part with Adi though 😆 I was imagining the actual character & the probable expression Maan might have had seeing Geet in his arms 😳

That's the more lighter note but I was biting my lips furiously to know if Maan is alive _/\_ and thank God he is otherwise I would have cried 😭

Geet's addressing "sir" to Maan is sexy☺️ I feel its a tease and finally when she says Maan with so much passion after union

Its a beautiful os 👏

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tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Tu Hi Tu

sweet os ..enjoyed reading it ..

maan don't want anyone near geet ..his insecurity lead him to confess his love to her ..he followed geet to her house and was jealous seeing someone kissing geet ..he barged into her house to question her ..this was hilarious seeing so insecure maan who fell in love with geet ..

all well they become hubby wife ..

i liked this story ...sweet hilarious one ..

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tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

JIGSAW

this is one which is real ..so nice and story of a couple who r together for many years ..love the way maneet love each other despite being so different ...

good os ..superb work

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

KHUBSOORAT

nice work ..geet was betrayed by dev and maan was by his girlfriend ..

maneet come close but geet not able to accept due to her insecurities ..maan made her feel special ..finally they r one ..

good story ...

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tabby999

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

rest abhi nahi read ki hai ...

so no comments ...

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Tere bin i read this os
u made me emotional maaneet chah kar bhi ek dusre ke nahi ho paye geet loves him but not want to dissapount her or their families but cant live without him so gv her life leave maan forever he has to live his life for her sake but his soul left him emotion os

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Bulbul

@Bul3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Ever Ours- a beautiful beautiful OS! very heart touching and brilliantly written!kudos to the writer 👏

Tere Bin.. - a lovely OS..I am a sucker for happy endings so unhappy with the sad ending but very well written⭐️

Khamoshiyaan " When Silence Speaks"..- very nice OS👍🏼

The finished hour- too cruel reality..heartbreaking story..very well written😊

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Ruchita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

👏Ever Ours
hey got to knw abt dese OS
will read one by one as i find tym...
wat a superb confession it was awesome...
i was scared dat wat if it is going to b a sad ending i hate dem... or wat if it ends with some MU...
thanks to d writer dat she has showed d whole journey very beautifullly...
each day pain her longingness for him... struggling to live with no hope...
but all is well dat ends welll...

im happie...

congo to d writer...
n really great idea for dis OS competition...
👏👏

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

khamoshiyan "when silence speaks"
supperb geet ka khamosh rehte hue bhi har duty ko pura karna maan ko majboor kar gaya her absence make him realised her love and importance in his life he confessed his love so beautiful i loved it