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Came here after so long..and then decided to read these os..and they are just so amazing..
Ever Ours
The first one i read..it is just too good..beautifully written story..
a love story combined with their separation due to wars..so nicely written.. the way they fell in love nd were separated as maan had to go on a war..the diminishing of humanity in such wars was so well highlighted..their pain, their hurt was well written in letters..geet's wait, her pain..her finding companionship with adi was so hurtful..and the way they came together..maan losing his hand yet both of them finding each other once again..it was just so amazing..
whoever have written it..just well done..it feels really great to have such amazing writers here..
Tere Bin
that was a really sad one..how people just for some stupid rules and norms, leaves their children with lifelong sadness..though geet was right that it won't be good marriying ithout your parents blessings but then her decision was too rushed..nicely written, but a happy ending is always loved..atleast by me😆
Khamoshiyaan
it was a nice os...on how to mourn for the people we have lost, sometimes we forget to care for those we have..nice and cute one at the ending..so good maan realised his mistakes and worked to make them better..cute os
The finished hour
so painful it was..but the truth..this is really what happens in reality..though the religious belief should be in your heart..in your mind..in your soul but then people fight over a simple piece of land..how hundred of lives doesn't matter..and these are the cases when you can't blame one of them as both the parties are equally responsible for such wrongs..
it was painful how such an amazing love fell victim to petty fights..so hurting it was when he didn't kill her yet there was nothing left in her to live..how the wish to always live together was forgotten and only pain was left..amazingly written...👏👏
Catch me if you can
it was sooo soo cute and interesting..geet's crush and maan's mysty..shoo nice..sad that geet lost her eye sight in an accident but despite that she gained her love..maan, though he was stupid to not find her for so many days but all well taht ends well..and the last few lines..😳😳
Vaada
nice ne..though maan was stupid and idiotic..just for one bet he ruined her life..and geet even after all this loved him..and maan had the guts to ask her to be with him after he did all that and never regretted it..sad ending..nice story
Tu Hi Tu
it was he cutest possible..how just the thought of someone else in her life, made the professional maan singh khurana to break the rules and confess his love..shoo cute..beautifully written..and the cutest ending with both of them together..
Jigsaw
so realistically written..the real version of a simple tv dialogue..how perfect they are together inspite of all of their imperfection..despite fights..separations irritations..they were together and loved each other...honey on the car...really🤣..facial for the car..
Nayi Umangein
that was so nicely written..the craziness of fans..truly..we all are some points near to that..but so well defined about the life they have behind the camera..and how the ph manipulates the stars and fans sentiments..thats the most stupidest part of the shining world..really..
but maaneet love story amidst it was beautiful...maan coming to her apartment through the pipes..and the conditions were hilarious🤣 2:1 ratio of maggie and candy crush levels...this was so funny... u write amazing dear..
Khubsoorat
another amazing one..how they both were betrayed once and they found themselves with each other..they were so close to losing it again, but one chance they decided to give each other and found their happiness..it was really nice and amazing..well written through their journey of being broken and finding their love once again..
Avow to abide by you
that was cute and sweet..maan's sadness when he couldn't find her while he had decided to confess his love was so well written..and the play to bring them together and then daddy khurana's cute twist was sweet..loved it..
Love has its own way
truly to its title..their love found the way..geet's insecurity and doubt was justified..life's experience leave you so shattered sometimes..that you fear rising again..fear falling in love..but taht was so sweet he waited for her to accept him..and they finally found the happiness that they deserved...good story...
What's the Surprise
another amazing and sweet os..it was a real surprise to geet..so sweet it is when the one you love confesses to you and promises to be by your side forever..cute os..
Vellai Pookal
that was just amazing..how they never knew that they were falling in love but at the end how the fate got them together..and the wrong sentences they taught each other was cute..so sweet how they found their love during their fights and conversations..them drifting apart and then reconciling together was nice..loved that geet expressed whatever she felt..and that dialogue in marathi😳😳
Confession at first sight
cute..their journey from love at first sight to marriage was real sweet..cutely written..
Manneet Pure love Confession
though fast paced..it was cute and nice..with both of them finally together..
All of the os were very nice and amazing yet something of them were fantasticlly written..so heartfelt..cute romantic, painful, realistic..so many different types...
amazing idea aish of the os..and hopefully each time these contests have better results and they increase activities in our forum..nice efforts dear..
All the writers..you have written amazingly..but at the end only one has to be the winner..but all of you have written so well that it will be difficult for us viewers to choose one from these great works...👏
Arjun
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