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xolfiya

@xolfiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Em so excited to read so many stories thank u for coming wwdthis brilliant idea n also to writers who actually write beautiful stories around one dialogue A BIG THANK U N HUGS🤗

I hav read 4stories n I just want to read all of them in one go but iam really tired n want some sleep will read tomorrow...in four of them which I read I loved Ever ours n The finished hour the most n I kinda guess the writer of The finished hour also :P

Going to read all of them tomorrow... yeahhh So MANY STORIES ON MANEET

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Aishwarya

@Drashtirocks1

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: zaaratq
resss

let me take a breath

ill sleep now and tmr ill read with coffee nutella bread and yogurt aaram se

Aishhuuu yes i love u 🤗

i don mind doing ANYTHING for you ❤️

thankyouuu... and i love yaa too ❤️ waiting for your comments on each of them...

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sangeeta chauhan

@sangeeta33

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Awesome thread
i hv read now Ever thines ever mines ever ours what a os u r supperb every emotions how they meet become friends and than turn as lover zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi or raat tum par khatam u reminds maaneet first date supperb u dipected gaza war very well maan missing and geets letter for him this particular letter "i love most every day i lost every night m alone i know not where u are and i feel i might dead as well but then i think what if u come home tomorrow to searching for me and not found here" oh supperb yaar geets wait for him eight months he came without hand and when he told now i might not hold ur hand like before and her answer supperb

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Ever Ours

"Ever thine, ever mine. Ever ours."

superb story ...the way maneet met and fell in love ..

they departed still geet wait for maan's return ..her faith in her love brought back maan from death trap ..when he returned he misunderstood but then too geet hold the thread of faith and love ..brought back her maan to him ..they complete each other ..

love this story ...👏👏

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Tere Bin..

when i started reading this i was unaware that i will get shocked ..geet lost herself ...she died ..i don't like stories with sad ending .this story is nice but i didn't like the way geet commit suicide ,she killed herself ..she was the sufferer ..she didn't done any mistake yet she had to suffer ..why her mom was not questioned ..geet's so called parents should have tried hard to convince maan's parents ..maan should have strongly stand by her side ..running was not an option but maneet together have tried to persude their parents ..

i am so sorry for geet here ..

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Khamoshiyaan " When Silence Speaks"..

amazing work ...maan made geet suffer but eventually fell in love with her ..

in starting i was not liking this story as maan was over reacting but all well that ends well ...this is what this story teach ..finally geet's patience paid of ..she was able to win back her love her maan truly for herself ..maan loved sam no doubt but life can be started with another partner too ..maan is lucky he got another chance to have a love filled happy life ..i love the moment when geet's massi was asking abt maan and suddenly he entered ...later taking geet with him in front of entire family ..

superb work

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tabby999

@tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

The finished hour

religion disputes many times separate love ones same happen with maneet ..

their love defeated in front of religion ..i don't know why people fight in name of religion ..can't they love all for sake of humanity ..

in riots not only geet lost but maan too lost forever..

sad os ...

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Shivika23

@Shivika23

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Well I have just finished reading all the OS..Thank you to all the writers.

Ever Yours

First I have to agree that 18 months is too short of a time to know someone. I loved the way the writer wrote this story. The usage of words to describe the situation, surroundings, and emotion was beautiful. It revolve around war (BTW it is a genre that I dislike reading, but i really like this OS ) and also MG's struggle and love. I like the letters, it showed Maan and Geet's struggle love. overall it was beautifully written and HATS-OFF to the writer. Brilliant work.

Tere Bin

this was a good OS. i didn't like the that in the end she killed herself and I also couldn't understand Geet's POV in this OS.

Khamoshiyaan

For this OS i really like it also. It was beautifully written and I loved the ending. Well done.

Catch Me If You Can

This was more of a fun read. Hide and seek concept. I like the concept, it was funny and cute, Good work. I would love to read more so if you do intend to continue pls pm me :)

Tu Hi Tu

Overall the writing was very good. I liked the little poems in between the story. Maan jealousy when Geet asked for leave and also when he saw a guy kissing her was very adorable. This is also another OS that I would love to read more so if you do intend to continue pls pm me :) Great work.

Jigsaw

This is one of my favorite. The writer did a brilliant job here. The story showed the truth of married couple. The little nok-jokes was very very cute. Great work. I really enjoyed reading this OS.

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Catch me if you can..

awesome work again ..i loved it ..mysterious geet and nice maan ..

love the way geet followed maan everywhere and made him fall in love with her though maan was already in love with her ..i loved every moment in this story ..even geet met with accident and had fear of loosing her sight maan didn't gave up on her ..simple confession by a kiss and few words which made maneet lovable..totally fida on this story ..kudos to writer for brilliant piece of writing 👏👏