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Ruchita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

😭😭Tere Bin..

Ohhh gosh aisa kyu kiya yaaarrr...

😭

y dis kolaveri... wen i started reading since it is a confession OS comp ive expected happie ending.
but uve changed d whole perspective...

though hats offf to u for writing like with such emotions...

i litreally cried but ican't bear sad ending's especially with maaneet...

👏

👏 for ur writing

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Catch Me If You Can

I was reminded of Leo's movie 😆 I loved the chase 😎 The flow of the Os was great from that chance on dance to hide-n-seek game to Maan's restlessness . Geet represented the romantic admirer & the clumsy reality in front of Maan . Her losing eyesight was heart-breaking followed by her decision to move away . But fate played its card & with Anie and Dev's little help Maan discovered his mishty ❤️ Confrontation was superb could feel the tension , love & longing of both . Geet's vulnerability for her loss was so touching and Maan soothing her not out of pity but out of love , his declaration he always noticed her no matter what she presumed was beautiful .

Great work ⭐️

I am liking all as I feel each are superb efforts of the writers 😊

Edited by BelleFilleDD - 11 years ago

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

😳Khamoshiyaan " When Silence Speaks"..

yeh toh geet ka confession..

finally ussne apni khamoshi todh...

wat a lovely OS...
pain anger hurt... everything is der but realisation is also der...

as it is said better late than never...
so dey confessed at d end...

hahahahah such sweet end with besharam MSK...

😳😆

ahhh loved dis line...

the beginning of a love saga called Maneet...

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

The finished hour

woahhh yeh kya tha all saddy saddy...

i thot kahin na kahin toh maan badal jayega...

poorr me..

its like 1 happie toh 1 sad...

anyways im happie till i get to read abt maaneet 😆😆😆

but saddy saddy 😭😭

kinda incomplete laga...

stilll congo n hats off to d writer coz its really difficult to wrire sad than happy one...

so keep going👏👏👏

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Catch me if you can.

Woowww... i was actuallyy badly missing d chalti phirti disaster n u gave me dat...

i'm totally happie with dis...

dat with a very different twist or thought i can say...

1 side cute adorable talented geet

n other side his way more cute creative mystyic mysty(mishti) 😳😳😳

("I tried kissing the frog, to turn it into my prince. Alas it didn't turn into my Ma(a)n!"

The visual the note created on his mind was so intense that it kept intruding with his concentration.

Adi was explaining the projections with the slides and his mind slipped back to the note and the image of Mysty kissing the frog

"Why don't you come over then, kiss me and see if I am your prince?" )

dis one was awesomeee...

bichare maan ko confuse kar diya...

na iss pare na uss par

1 side he misses geet n other side mysty...

btw i liked his idea of wearing blue n blue... 😆😆😆

ohhh pooor girl yeh kya sudden twist handicap.. ???

btw i loved d line weeping contest...

dis is sumwer going like don(mysty) ko pakdna mushkil hi nahi na mumkin hai...

yaar kash maan apna common sense use kar leta... by joining d similarities or d coincidences.. 😭😭 mishti mil jati

wattt handicapped as in she can't see 🤢 ???

hahahhaha finally realise hua dat he was such fool oopss blind foool por maan i really pity him

wahhh re kya baat haii everything is fair in love n war... im happie n proud of maan...

awesomest confession ever...

n my fav of all d OS's ive read as far...

superb one...

wattt a confession seriously superb d waty he is describing her each visit... dats awesome...

sweetest ending...
loved it a lot...

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

😭

VAADA

yehhh kya tha yaar...

shud i be happie dat both lost der life together or shud i b sad dat both lost der life...

im just speechless...

dis one is fillled with alll d emotions together...

n at d end im left with frustation...

demanding for a sequel with der rebirth n happie ending...

plz do write d sequel if possible...

more than maaneet i feel really sad for family...

especially vicky he has lost his two so close yo heart priceless possessions...

pooor vicky...

dis had so much pain sufferings regret realisation n dat stupid bet...

well maan deserved dose sufferings...

one need to respect women n der fellings...

still i can't hate maan...

mil k bhi na mile...

😭

writer is just fabulous...

agli baar happie ending...😉

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

all stories r well written and very very interesting

will give my view after 20th ..my b abhi time he to aur bhi OS include ho jaaye

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

😛Tu Hi Tu..

beautifulll journey n wonderrfully written...

jab pyaar mein kuch kaam nahi aata toh jealousy hi kaam aati hai...

😛

lovely perfect wonderful OS...

i liked d way geet answered back him here...

n for d ever first tym maan scared abt sumthing...

worth to watch it...

i luv dese kind of stories...

no more tears ufff ..

me relived...

superb one...

one cheers to all d writers... who send der tym just to entertain us n make us feel dat maaneet r still der with us...

ive read till dis one only... don'y knw wen i ll again find tym to read d rest... hopefully i ll read others soon n comment for dem..

thanks for dese lovely works...

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Aishwarya

@Drashtirocks1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: preeti.1
all stories r well written and very very interesting
will give my view after 20th ..my b abhi time he to aur bhi OS include ho jaaye

nope, no more stories are gonna be added.. this is it...

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Aishwarya

@Drashtirocks1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: simrancuty
entries r opn????

nope the last date was 25th September.. and I took entries till 28th despite that.. but now the thread has been made, no additional entries allowed...