Wired Hearts (6) Ch:46, Th:7 (Jan 7)

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Thanks a lot for t PM
Lovely part
Awe beautiful simply beautiful

She was in wheelchair after accident

I guess this seas much needed closure

But still some how I feel
It hurts even his forgiveness

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WhiteRussian

@WhiteRussian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

Welcome back ❤️ was waiting for the update

Maan forgives Geet for what she did but Geet's condition description was painful she even had not shared her pain with Raya

Raya and Geet childhood part was lovely

Geet is very emotional and she can never forgive herself if she hurts someone intentionally or unintentionally

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

Geet stayed in rain the whole night

She got fever n hospitalized

Reya knew without geets say

Its maan who was with her

Even his mom

Maan was made to think deep bcoz of both

He forgave her

Awesome part

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979861

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

You actually updated!! no it should be You are back!
yippie!!!!!!
You were very very very much missed here mariam.Let it be known to the newly married girl there how much her absence was felt .How silent the forum was with this thread being a little inactive. Absence increases the fondness.
Welcome back mariam! And i know its late but Congratulations!
will come back again .

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its_me

@its_me

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Awesome...

Absolutely beautiful update...

& an additional thankyou for giving Maan's PoV...

But in this part... I just LOVED the reactions of Raya and Maan's mom...

The way those two understood the unsaid ... was simply amazing...

Great part... 👏

Waiting for the next part already...😉

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#316

"It's so hard to forget pain, but it's even harder to remember sweetness. We have no scar to show for happiness. We learn so little from peace."

"Some old wounds never truly heal, and bleed again at the slightest word."

What did you just pen down??

That's just brilliant ... Whoosh!!

Am i crying like a kid? Yes.. but i wont blame you, its just..my heart goes for Geet(Undoubtedllly) and.. Maan(i so want to punch him. Laters!!)

Mayyoo..are you for real?? So much of turmoil...pain, and Life truths..

How did you manage to write it with so ease?? I am sure.. you were also so anguished as M&G... or more ?

There are times where we try to blame others for our convenience/sanity... its our human mentality.

What happened 7years ago... its a pretty long time to forget everything and move on. But thats not the case , Geet (what ever be the reason...she still blames herself for Maan state) and Maan..who blames her for whatever happened.(dose he blame her for what ever he is now?)

I love these words...

She deserves to be burdened for what she has done, a part of my mind spoke, but another immediately negated it.

"If I don't deserve to hurt and ache over something that happened seven years ago, how can I say that somebody else deserves the punishment for it now, my brain told me."

No one deserve hurt/pain. Like i said earlier, neither Geet deserves all the hatred directed towards her.

Why, She didn't accept his love doesn't mean she has to suffer and pained for not reciprocating his love. If someone loves us and we MUST reciprocate , then it isn't LOVE at all.

Its not about accepting or taking. Its only about Giving. Neither it means sacrifice.

Mind and heart play such a sickening game.. its so frustrating.

Geet' dream..and

"It was an accident..."

"You killed them, Geet..." I looked into the familiar chocolate brown eyes but they were not warm as ever. They were hard and spewing hate. It was not my Maan. "You killed us..."

I inhaled sharply, my eyes wide, my mouth dry. "I killed... you?"

"Yes!" He hissed. "You killed me."

Isn't enough ?? How much more she has to suffer?

I have encountered a person..who is soft person like Geet.. who takes unnecessary blames even when she didnt hurt or caused any pain. And few people dump her with guilt, which she dont deserve it. They even fear to come infront of them.

Maan may not cause her so much of pain, yet he did burden her with his stupidity and anger.

"Geet Di is the kind of person who will never let herself off the hook for hurting anyone intentionally or," I saw Raya turn to look at me with her eyes trying to convey more, "unintentionally."

Huh, one word is enough to know what they are!!

And my most fav lines

I had been unfair on my part. I was hurting, yes. Geet was the cause of it, yes. It still made a difference to me, yes. But did that mean I was to blame her for not loving me as I loved her? No. If I had to think impartially, she was not completely at fault. If I was young back then, so was she. If I could be scared of confessing my love for so long, how could I expect her to fearlessly accept it?

Finally !!! Phew!!

I loved everything about "Leeting Go" Except ending... i know.. im just so mad at him..but i knew how Maan feels.

I just wanted to say, pain cannot be indulged unless you accept it. You cannot always blame a person for whatever you are...or you were.

You always have a choice..to accept it or not.

"I don't know." She shrugged. "Perhaps she thinks the matters between you and her should always remain between you two."

It just shows how mature she is to understand those nuances.

This struck me. "So she never told you about... what happened... seven years...?"

Raya shook her head. "No."

I did not know why but I felt a mixture of emotions rise within me. I was shocked, I was perplexed, but most of all, I was awestruck. Was Geet really so strong to keep all of it within her and still live happily, if only superficially? Was she white blooded that everything had no effect on her or was she really so deep to keep all the pain within her? My heart wanted to believe the latter, especially seeing her lying on that hospital bed like that. I just knew Geet was not cold hearted, at least not as much as I thought her to be.

If anything or person gives you immense happiness and pleasure then that would be reason for your sadness too.

Everything has to balanced in this world. Unequal's cannot survive.

We always assume many things about people. How much truth is there in it, we hardly care about it.

Maan, he is a sweet guy, caring and helpful but all he cared was reciprocation from geet. Yes, i do accept that reciprocation is Needed. but not MUST.

His self realization is more than enough. His admission is what im adoring in this chapter.

"When you are sorrowful look again in your heart, and you shall see that in truth you are weeping for that which has been your delight."

And on top of that.. i am listening to this song (*sent by Purvi. Thanks to my darling)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t2VaF0ZX65w -

you need to listen to this. I connect so well with Maan!! Dang.

I dont want to know how painful it is. But ..

"Sorrow is how we learn to love. Your heart isn't breaking. It hurts because it's getting larger. The larger it gets, the more love it holds." - For Maan!!

And the realization

"One word

Frees us of all the weight and pain of life:
That word is love."

What a comeback!! *claps* *claps*

We dont really hate people whom we used to Love.. we just dislike them for a period. And we like to be convinced that we hate them..i guess our EGO makes us do these stupid stuff.

He loves her so much that it hurts him that he was also the cause of her distress. *Can i squeeze him to death. Damn him. Why, he is just damnable*

I will just stop right here. or else i might end up writing next update!! *smirk*

One more.. jut for You!!

"Love does not begin and end the way we seem to think it does. Love is a battle, love is a war; love is a growing up."

Edited by KittuPratzz - 10 years ago

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 10 years ago

#317

gr8 part..

cont,soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: Susegad

Oh Wired Hearts how I have missed thee. Let me count the ways😆.
Wow Mayyo just wow!!! You are back and you are back with a big bang.👏

The whole thing was just absolutely brilliant. I am struggling to find words to explain the impact this chapter had on me, but I feel like I will be unable to do justice to the magic that you have woven with your words.

The whole chapter started with the most profound piece of writing I've ever read.

Not all silences are a sign of the brewing or the passing of a storm. Some silences are storms in themselves. They destruct in their stationary state. They scream, cry and howl in their muteness. They kill in their own unique way. These are the most dangerous silences.

I held my breath, for I knew was going to be a part of the silent storm as I continued to read further and I was right.
Can I just say that if I have loved what you have written before, I am just in awe of what you have created with this chapter. You have upped the ante for yourself with this phenomenal chapter.

The burning resentment of a would be lover scorned, the heavy burden of guilt of a young woman, the hurt, the blame games, through it all what shone through was the love of a sister, the perception of a mother, the bonds that they all share with each other.

But the only thing I do not understand is why Maan needs to forgive Geet, or why does he think she needs his forgiveness.
He built a fairy tale in his mind, from the stalking in college to the end where Geet rejected him.
But the fairy tale was his, she was not a willing participant in it and as such he has no right to resent her for it when the fairy tale spun on it's own tail and crashed😛

But I am waiting most eagerly to see where you are going with the story.

You are justtt Wowww 😃 .

Nisha ji.. i was thinking in the same line. and you just wrote in a better way 😛

those italics.. i second you!!! 😊

If Geet thinks she needs his forgiveness.. cause she takes blame on herself for hurting Maan . So indeed she feels to need forgiveness from Maan.

This chapter is truly Top Notch!!! . I thoroughly enjoyed crying 😆

Edited by KittuPratzz - 10 years ago

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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#319

OMG U updated ????????

Shocking surprise

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#320

You're update is a surprise in itself😆

Coming to update's details, it was fabulous as always. After their heated arguments, geet's conscience was not letting her to feel unburden from the fact that she is d sole reason for maan's sorrow which eventually lead to tormenting her health.

But it's this argument of their made to realize maan that geet's is not wholly responsible for his sorrow. Both were young & expecting responsibilities & understanding all the time with a person is too much as people do mistake in their life in hast or in fear of family. His mom made him understand too that to lead his life in future he needs to forgive geet & if possible forget her, which i think is not possible.

I'm now really eager to see how geet will react after his this confession & will there going to be a love story b/w them after this in future or they will be once again trying to be stranger to each-other?

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