Oh Wired Hearts how I have missed thee. Let me count the ways😆.
Wow Mayyo just wow!!! You are back and you are back with a big bang.👏
The whole thing was just absolutely brilliant. I am struggling to find words to explain the impact this chapter had on me, but I feel like I will be unable to do justice to the magic that you have woven with your words.
The whole chapter started with the most profound piece of writing I've ever read.
Not all silences are a sign of the brewing or the passing of a storm. Some silences are storms in themselves. They destruct in their stationary state. They scream, cry and howl in their muteness. They kill in their own unique way. These are the most dangerous silences.
I held my breath, for I knew was going to be a part of the silent storm as I continued to read further and I was right.
Can I just say that if I have loved what you have written before, I am just in awe of what you have created with this chapter. You have upped the ante for yourself with this phenomenal chapter.
The burning resentment of a would be lover scorned, the heavy burden of guilt of a young woman, the hurt, the blame games, through it all what shone through was the love of a sister, the perception of a mother, the bonds that they all share with each other.
But the only thing I do not understand is why Maan needs to forgive Geet, or why does he think she needs his forgiveness.
He built a fairy tale in his mind, from the stalking in college to the end where Geet rejected him.
But the fairy tale was his, she was not a willing participant in it and as such he has no right to resent her for it when the fairy tale spun on it's own tail and crashed😛
But I am waiting most eagerly to see where you are going with the story.
Bade Achche Lagte Hain Naya Season
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