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Posted: 10 years ago
SWEET UPDATE
BOTH ARE SHORT OF WORDS
DON'T KNOW HOW N WHAT TO ASK N SAY


WHY THIS MUCH LATE

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update mahi..
just sooo beautifully potraited yaar..
its so emotional seeing maaneet meeting each other after 4 years..
and u made it speechless by ur potration of their feelings with the nature..
its just mindblowing..
geet and maan ka milan just like a heaven..
eagerly waiting for the next dear..
continue soon...


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Posted: 10 years ago
maaneet meet after 4 years both are happily but geet still didn't belived this is dream or real,finally both are hugging each other,both are realised now not kid ,lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
chalo dono mil toh gaye...abb dekhte hai kya hota hai...

awesome update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
maaneet so happy for meet each other after 4 years
other side nature witness of their blousing love
maaneet hug each other like both to hide from all world
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Geet sit on ,maan hourse and maan riding that in full speed he know it they found them na he is more scare for her he can not put her in denger other side geet so much tencse with her attired if anyone found her in married attired, she cribed veer baba ye bila sirf shareer(body) se bada hai kya but maan riding horse in dark forest it is time of sunset and he only thinking about her safty both lost in different thought at last after 1 and half hour he stop horse near river side they have to stay here till next morning because in hury he ride horse in opposite direction of geet village

Maan stop horse and come down he look place kinally ...if any denger is their when he get satisfide he put geet down and he took her near cave that is safe place for night he look that place its beautiful place its like nature give all color their so much greenery upon that white color of moon and stars like they celbrating maaneet togetherness

Maan say in serious voice what r u saying in tmple ye cloth it means u hidning it from all why ...geet look upper side and mummer baba kya hai ye , ye nahi ask kiya ke how r u lakin ye cloth ki itani tension ku hai ek to wo hug ki wajse main unki taraf dekh bhi nahi pa rahi hu and ye hai ke aise sawal , muje horse pe bhi aise bita diya aur ghoda aise bhaga rahe the jaise inki air ke sath race lagi ho kyu veer baba

Other side maan lost in her chnging emotions face , she make so many types of face with verious emotions her cribing talk with baba he so much miss in this 4 years , after spending this much time also he feel like he watching a beautiful dream aisa dream jo khatam hi na ho

When maan so lost in his cuhiya geet in anger push her long choti to back side but next second she cried in pain baba and maan run to her ,actually her choti stuck in tree branch and she can not abale to remove that maan went really closed to her and try to touch her choti but its really hard struck in branch of tree now both r in huging postion thou both body not touching each other but both hot breath falling on each other that making one soul shy and other soul little bit scared if he lost contorl on his emotions ,at last maan start to open her long dark hair which so soft ...

He slowly open that long hair so its come out without harm beautiful a soft mummer escape from maan mouth ...and geet turn more red in shyness

Note SORRY iska starting part of this update will be come tomorow beacuse of my follishnes that struck in Lappy

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

part 17
Geet cheek turning red in shyness and soft smile come on maan face but when his gaze went on her sindoor , so many question's come in his mind , how she ,its true or but how he mummer softly u married to and other side geet who totally avoiding to see in maan eyes maan lost in blush , he come out from geet land with sound of whistle its from his men's its sine of danger its for British army ,maan get that some British officer near them ,he first time scare for geet safety because for them , women's means a physical object nothing else

He hurriedly called geet come on we have to go ,hurry geet get confused with his sudden hurriedness she look to upper side and mummer baba dekho ye khali body se bade hui hai kya main aise kapdo main kaise ja sakti hu ...maan again called her and she say wo main I have to change villager don't know about it maan give her confused look

Kya bol rahi hai ye chuyia he mummer softly here geet turn to temple side to change cloth but maan don't give her chance and next moment geet in maan hourse and he is riding in fool speed

Maan thinking kya karu iska main ...kitani der hui hai muje isko us haiwan se bacyae , wo mera hi admi hai iski muje sharam aa rahi hai how he try to miss behave with a women and that's also My geet

Other side geet whose eyes and mouth turn in perfect 0 shape ki how easily like small sage he put her on horse maan almost nude chest touching geet nude back which giving shiver to geet she want to hide herself some wear she cried in mind baba main bile ko milvane ko bola tha lkain aise nahi and her cheek turn more red in shyness


Geet sit on ,maan hourse and maan riding that in full speed he know if they found them na than he is more scare for her , he can not put her in denger other side geet so much tense with her attired if anyone found her in married attired, she cribed veer baba ye bila sirf shareer(body) se bada hai kya but maan riding horse in dark forest it is time of sunset and he only thinking about her safty both lost in different thought at last after 1 and half hour he stop horse near river side they have to stay here till next morning because in hury he ride horse in opposite direction of geet village

Maan stop horse and come down he look place kinally ...if any denger is their when he get satisfide he put geet down and he took her near cave that is safe place for night he look that place its beautiful place its like nature give all color their so much greenery upon that white color of moon and stars like they celbrating maaneet togetherness

Maan say in serious voice what r u saying in tmple ye cloth it means u hidning it from all why ...geet look upper side and mummer baba kya hai ye , ye nahi ask kiya ke how r u lakin ye cloth ki itani tension ku hai ek to wo hug ki wajse main unki taraf dekh bhi nahi pa rahi hu and ye hai ke aise sawal , muje horse pe bhi aise bita diya aur ghoda aise bhaga rahe the jaise inki air ke sath race lagi ho kyu veer baba

Other side maan lost in her chnging emotions face , she make so many types of face with verious emotions her cribing talk with baba he so much miss in this 4 years , after spending this much time also he feel like he watching a beautiful dream aisa dream jo khatam hi na ho

When maan so lost in his cuhiya geet in anger push her long choti to back side but next second she cried in pain baba and maan run to her ,actually her choti stuck in tree branch and she can not abale to remove that maan went really closed to her and try to touch her choti but its really hard struck in branch of tree now both r in huging postion thou both body not touching each other but both hot breath falling on each other that making one soul shy and other soul little bit scared if he lost contorl on his emotions ,at last maan start to open her long dark hair which so soft ...

He slowly open that long hair so its come out without harm beautiful a soft mummer escape from maan mouth ...and geet turn more red in shyness

hi all this is full part

hush ...
and next part in hour
zindagi bhar nahi bhoolegi
barasaat ki raat
with note


Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
VERY SWEET UPDATE

HOW ARE YOU DEAR
N WHERE ARE YOU THESE MANY DAYS
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Posted: 10 years ago
part is suprb...
maan n geet are such adorable couple...geet is so cutee n her talk to baba was suprb cute
Edited by vandy28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear Mann is lost in geet when geet screem brought Mann back and try to realize geet hair which stuck in tree

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