MG OS UNFORGIVABLE SIN Updated on 7-7-2014

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Painful os but beautifully written !!!

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Beautiful n u r right...very unfortunate

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Nice os dear

true maan in his so called ego and wat not just gave pain and at last she was the one whom saved him and we say once you lose your true love yuo can never ever have it and maan did learn this truth

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

it's awesome richa. n very very painful too.maan married to get for the revenge. he wanted to punish geet's father. so he had chosen geet for this. poor geet she tried hard to make maan realize her love but he never show even little bit sympathy to her. i don't know why it's happen, when your love ones live near you, you never show care for them but when they go away we miss them very much.

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snehapriya

@snehapriya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Heart melting story.
Made me cry.
Nice ending.

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xolfiya

@xolfiya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Its Beautiful n painful Geet died in the end I dont like sad stories han nh tou 😭 Maan was cruel so he deserve s it..awesome richu 🤗

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mauaa

@mauaa

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

hey richa.. nice 1.. i just felt if u had made a ff or even a short story then we would enjoy more.. hehe m being so greedy na.. well nice update dear.. keep it up!!

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awesome OS dear
Maan never paid heed to geet's love
And the revenge make him blind to see what he is doing to her where she was never at fault
And god gave him lifetime punishment
And loved the last words and it's 100% true
"BADNASEEB HOTE HAI JINHE PYAR NAHI MILTA,

LEKIN UNSE ZADA BADNASEEB HOTE HAI WO JINHE SACHHA PYAR TO MILTA HAI PAR WO USKI KADAR NAHI KARTE OR KHO DETE HAI..."

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pinku04

@pinku04

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

it was soo heart touching dear 😭😭😭

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

hi congrats on the OS! Emotional Sad update! Maan hurt her bt she loves hin n saved his life! he realise to late! Geet dies! Maan upset! Well written