MG SS 'remember,we broke up?' NOTE on 48 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update...can't wait for the next part...
Edited by namita25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
part 1 is awesome
nice start
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow lovely emotional update..te way geet was locking herself in te room and thinking abt him and pinky cribbing and atlast she agreed to go out with her and another side my maan to going out with his friends was lovely emotional...te way my maan smiling thinking how his sherni will get angry seeing te girls who try to flirt with him was lovely emotional...atlast my maaneet meeting without seeing each other they feeling they touch was lovely touching..is tis all my maaneet ki friends plan to make them one?...i love te update so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all, thank u all for liking this story this much. i didn't even expect this kind of warm welcome & response. thank u guys so very much for all of your support. Any 7 every kind of criticism is welcomed by me. u guys can tell me if the story is going too slow.Now without delay let's go the update.



Part 2

REMEMBERING YOU.





Maan & Geet looked at each other after almost three months. But it was like an eternity for them. Both were lost in each other forgetting the surroundings, forgetting the people, forgetting the world. Everything else was forgotten , only they remained, their love remained. After days they felt alive, lively & most importantly loved. Maan was lost in his mishty & Geet was lost in her sadu . Their eyes were speaking volumes, remembering each-other, complaining each-other, lovingly incurving each-other in their souls. All their memories were going like a film in front of their eyes, their first meeting, their friendships, their cute little nok-jhoks, their first dance in the rain, their first kiss. All these were coming in front of their eyes like it happened just a few days ago, not some years ago. They both were lost in their memories, when the most painful memory came in front of Geet's eyes, their separation & his indifference, his ignorance. Geet lowered her eyes that instance to hide the tears that were gathered in her eyes. She didn't want him to see them. He was the cause of this. She had promised herself that she won't fall weak in from him, no she won't.




Maan saw Geet lowering her eyes. He knew when she does that. When she doesn't want someone to see her tears. He even knew the cause of her crying . He knows her every gesture, hell he knows her in& out. What pained him that, he was now someone to her that she needs to hide her tears. She always used to cry holding him for anything & everything. He used to listen to her patiently weather she was crying over an incomplete project or on a silly friend teasing her. He never felt bored listening to her. On the contrary it was like a breath of fresh air for him. Being the MD of a huge empire, he was always surrounded by seriousness & burdened with responsibilities. But when he was with her, everything else was ignored. Only she was important, their togetherness was important.




Maan thought was broken when he felt Geet struggling to let herself out of his grip. He smirked thinking weather she really thought she could came out of his embrace without his permission. Geet was struggling continuously to come out of his grip when she noticed maan smirking towards her. Oh boy, that hit the wrong cord. She gave him a deathly glare saying "leave me.."

While Maan just smiled at her saying "say the magic word ,baby..."

Geet just gave another glare saying "maan, I m not here for jokes, leave me "

"I m not leaving until u say the magic word baby. U remember, u pushed me??"




Saying this Maan smirked. While Geet just looked at Maan with astonishment. After what happened between them, he had the audacity to flirt with her. Geet just looked away to calm her heart which was beating rapidly partly because of his remark & mostly because of his closeness. But she is never going to admit that. She just wanted to get away from him. She can never trust herself in his close proximity. So she just gritted her teeth saying "PLEASE, let me go.."

Maan knew she was damn irritated so without any further problem he freed her though it hurt him. On the other hand geet got up the instance maan freed her.



Both of them were looking everywhere except each other. It was ironic to them, there was a time they were inseparable and look at them now. Maan cleared his throat to gain her attention saying "ahem, geet... u here??"

Geet snapped her head at him & looked at him skeptically saying " kyun?? Is this beech the property of khuranas??"

Maan was surprised at Geet's tone but that was expected. He sighed saying "look geet...let's not create a scene..ok??"

Geet smiled sarcastically saying "really?? I think u r right. Why m I even bothering to talk to u"

Geet tried to move from there but was yanked furiously back in Maan's embrace.

Maan who was trying to control his temper listening to Geet couldn't control & pulled Geet's towards him when she started to away from him

Geet glared at him saying " what the hell, maan ?? leave me"

Maan sighed in gritted teeth "what's with the attitude??? Here m trying to be normal & u??"

"han,ap to normal hogei. It doesn't matter to u na. But breaking news Mr. Maan Singh Khurana not everyone is not like u. Heartless..."

Maan's hold grew stronger on Geet hearing her. He pulled her more closer saying "yehi samjha hai mujhe aj tak..??"

Geet didn't say anything but turned sideways.

Maan smiled bitterly saying "fine...hu main heartless. But it is much better than a person who doen't even trust her love like u "

Geet again turned towards Maan. Both of them were busy glaring each other. When a voice broke their glaring session.




Pinky was running when she looked back but frowned seeing no geet. "ab yeh kaha gayi.."

She was looking around when she noticed two persons glaring each other. She was horrified seeing both Maan & Geet together, & worst they were looking as if ready to pounce on each other. She hurriedly to go towards to them to stop the World War III.




Pinky smiled awkwardly & called to Geet. Maan & Geet looked at Pinky & then back towards their position. They moved away from each other still glaring.

Pinky smiled at Maan saying "hey maan, tum yaha..??"

Maan was going to answer her but as usual Geet beat him to it "pinky, agar tera purana mel-milap khatam ho jaye then am waiting for u at our spot."

Saying this Geet started to go away from there when Maan spoke "yeah..pinky, go. Ur highness awaits."

Geet looked back at him saying "I heard that"

Maan also glared at her saying "good for u"




Pinky looked at both of them & said a quite bye to Maan while dragging a fuming Geet. Pinky wondered what will happen now. She made Geet come here to make things good but everything was going against. Pinky sent a quick prayer to Babaji in mind "Geetu k Babaji..ap kya chahte ho,kya kar rahe ho,but job hi kar rahe ho thik karna plss..."She can only hope that everything becomes normal. But looking a ferocious Geet & a super angry Maan, it looks like a farfetched dream.

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice part. REally interesting now dear.. I'll send you a buddy request. Could you send me a Pm when you update?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsome update
loved it
whts the reson for their break up
or someone else is responsible
as they atill love each other
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
hope this trip clear their missunderstanding
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: caller123

Very nice part. REally interesting now dear.. I'll send you a buddy request. Could you send me a Pm when you update?


i m not sending any pms as m updating frequently, but i'l try to send u one...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
toh mu b/w d two...n caused separation...wht will happen nw...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tarina.R.Totine


i m not sending any pms as m updating frequently, but i'l try to send u one...😊

Thank you so much dear.. I don't want to miss this story dear at any cost. You are doing a great job.

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